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1. Praise – Acknowledge a strength or success in the Visual Journal

"I really liked how....you used the dry brush technique to achieve realistic texture for the trees and rocks in your landscape painting.

"One thing that stood out to me was...how you used your drawings to express your emotions. It made your artwork feel very real.

"Your use of [colour/medium/technique] watercolour blending is very beautiful and calming—it matches your theme of nature perfectly.

2. Polish – Offer a suggestion for improvement

"You could improve your work by..."

"One area to work on might be..."

"Consider refining the [medium/composition/theme] to make it even stronger."

3. Question – Ask a thoughtful question so that your classmate can reflect on his/her artistic skills

"What inspired your choice of theme/materials?"

"How did you overcome challenges in the process?"

"If you had more time, what would you add or change?"

"How do you think this piece connects to your overall growth as an artist?"

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1. I really like how the pen sketching managed to bring my attention to the pokemon character in the centre of the drawing, standing on the glass table.

2. Could have done more pen sketching rendering on the table and pokemon to better show the contrast and highlights.

3. What is the object sitting on the table?

Is that a conveyor belt or a table?

From: TK

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I really liked the creativity that went into how you can display the art journal in two different ways.

Another way you can improve is on being more adventurous in exploring more art mediums and do more drawings :))))

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1. I really liked how you could highlight the different shades on the capybara.

2. One thing that stood out to me was how you expressed how happy the capybara looked.

3. You can try to highlight the limbs of the capybara more using a pen.

4. where is the other eye?

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I really like how most of your paintings are landscape, allowing you to explore more and have more space to paint, adding in more details and such.

You could improve the general journal by adding in more dry mediums, which will enable you to explore even further for landscape pieces.

Why did you choose mainly wet mediums over dry mediums for each of your pieces?

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1. I like how the colour for the hourse came out.

2.the thing that stood out the most is the capybara and the proportion.

3.u can add darker shades for the hourse to make it look more realistic.

tshin kwan

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I really liked the one artwork of the eye as well as the optical illusion as the idea was well thought out!!

I think you could maybe explore a little into trying more portraiture of animals and maybe humans or urban landscapes!! I think there's plenty of potential with that!

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i really liked how many different colors were used in one drawing to make the other colors more vibrant.

one thing that stood out to me was how you expressed your desire for freedom through your artworks.

I think you could improve by exploring more mediums.

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1) I really like how you made use of your light and dark tones to make your foreground, midground and background easy to spot for the sakura garden painting.

2)You could improve your work by using the water color to make the objects to look further away instead of using a pen to outline it.

3) What inspired your use of the mix medium

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i extremely liked how you showed your feelings of shocked and sadness together through one of your portraits

i think you could explore other mediums other than charcoal and you could draw the darkest and lighter parts better

one thing that stood out to me was how you used coffee to make a flower in a vase and the splatter for the background

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i really like the style of drawings especially the self portrait, i think it stood out the most to me because of the unique horror-esque style

i think you could improve by exploring with colour in your artworks

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I really liked how you use paper as the background and the texture

One thing that stood out to me was how you combined your art work with the receipt

Your use of water color so calm and looks so real

You could improve your work by drawing better human figures

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I really like how the pen sketching and pencil could bring out so much realism in the cup, building and shanks portrait drawings.

Could have improved on the dark and light shades for the cup to bring out even more realism in the drawing.

Where did u get the inspiration from?