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The main message of this quatrain is to show how toxic love can make someone( Shakespeare ) mentally unstable.

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The main message of this quatrain is to show how toxic love can make someone mentally unstable.

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The author finally knows that the relationship is bad for his mental health and finally gave up. He acknowledged that the woman is evil and manipulative while also being two faced

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Shakespeare is following his instincts instead of his common sense. This shows that he is a very impulsive person that doesn’t think before he does something

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He is getting more and more insane and his thoughts and sounding like a madman. He is suffering now more than ever.

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Shakespeare refers to his love as toxic because he is addicted to the women because of his sexual desires

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Couplet: All damages have been caused he just realises that she is nothing more than a no-good life destroyer ("Who art as black as hell, as dark as night."

Comment: good

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Quatrain 4: Shakespeare realises that the woman was nothing but just a burden for him. (There is no quatrain 4)

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Quatrain 3: Shakespeare is going insane because the women used him and his mental state is unstable because he does not know how to react.

Comments: what conflicts? elaborate please. What do you mean by big trouble? Think:

What is Shakespeare's mental state?

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Quatrain 2: Shakespeare is hopeless because his irrationality has blinded his reason.

(Okay, he is hopeless, but relate to the text. Why?) (good point though)

Comments: good, but tweak it according to the comments

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Quatrain 1: Shakespeare is addicted to a woman, he compares her with a sickness.

Comments: (very very good)

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Shakespeare has a toxic relationship with love

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His physician is trying to  get him to leave the relationship. However he does not and eventually the physician leaves and he accepts that he will die. He is denying that the relationship can be good however he accepts that it is doomed.

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He is in a unhealthy relationship and he knows it. He is actively keeping the relationship alive and doing hat he can to stay in the relationship. This shows how he is too cultivated to leave the relationship

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At first he thought the woman was beautiful and polite, turns out she is evil and terrible.

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He doesn’t care about the bad problems anymore, he thinks he insane and everything he says is nonsense

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His irrationality made him change his mind making him abandon the only solution to his toxic love.

Comments:
Good.

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Shakespeare’s love is like a disease, making him do what makes the disease worse.

Comments:
Do not paraphrase Quatrain 1. You have to figure out the main message.

Yes, Shakespeare's love is like a disease, but why? Think of how does that trait of him define his personality.

Shakespeare is obsessed with a woman and he can’t let her go.

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at first, he thought the woman was perfect and kind. In the end, the man knows that the woman is evil and compares her to ‘hell’ itself.

Comments: Good

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Because he lost his grasp of common sense, he becomes mentally unstable. This is shown in “and frantic mad with evermore unrest”

Comments:
"Mentally unstable" is your point here. Explain why in a sentence

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Shakespeare thought his crush was beautiful and kind hearted but she was secretly evil.

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Very Good

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At first he thought his love-sickness was good but he's love has now turned out evil.

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Shakespeare couldn’t care less that he’s sick and can’t be saved anymore

Comments:
Try not to use the words that are in the original poem.

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Shakespeare is careless and desperate for love which he knows its bad for him and doesn’t care.

Comments:
Very Good.

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Shakespeare wants his love to last longer but his love is like a disease to satisfy his sickening appetite

Comments:
Try not to copy your point off the original poem.

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He explains that he follows his instincts instead of his common sense. This is shown in “angry that his prescriptions are not kept” . By following his instincts so much, he loses all grasps of common sense which is referred to as a physician. This is shown in “my reason, the physician to my love”

Comment: Great analysis, but again, we want a point, not the analysis.

Yes, he's following his instincts instead of his common sense. What does that say about Shakespeare's personality? Think of adjectives.

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In the third Quotrain he has given up hope and he's thoughts now are like a madmen.

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couplet: he thought she was a saint, but was always a demon in disguise that is leading him to a toxic love.

Comments:
gOOD

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third quatrain: the speaker's mental state has now consumed him, making him sound as insane as a madmen.

Comments:
Good

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second quatrain: shakespeare is desperste for love and does whatever it takes to stay with his lover, ignoring his "physician"

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He is hopeless cause his love caused trouble like using him and he decided that it's his faith.

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This quatrain has something to do with his reason. I suggest that you read the literal translations first.

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In the 1st quatrain it's showing that he is comparing his love to a sickness

Comments:
What do you mean? Sick for love? Elaborate. Look at the direct translations. Why is Shakespeare hoping for the disease to continue?

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Man is stressed and opens up his toxic love comparing it to the word ‘disease’ disease is usually associated with ill. from this we know his love is affecting him like a illness but he continues endure it in an attempt to to please himself. This is shown in “the uncertain sickly appetite to please”

Comments:
So, your point here is 'toxic love'. The rest is redundant because you are elaborating. Elaboration should only come in your analysis.

Expand your idea of toxic love. Why do you think Shakespeare refers to his love as toxic? What does that say about Shakespeare's personality?

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Shakespeare thought that the woman was beautiful and kind but secretly she was evil and disgusting

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He thought he met someone pure and nice but was just someone who was pure evil.

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Shakespeare is willing to die to get rid of this sickness, Shakespeare has accepted the fact that he is of incurable and doesn't care.

Comments:
Good

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He thought she was virtuos, but turns out she is evil and toxic.

Comments:
'Good' is too general, you have to give me more details.

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Shakespeare is insane. He loves his woman so much that he doesn't care if she is a bad person. Although people want to help him he ignores it and gives in to his love for his woman.

Comments:
Refer to the literal translations. Yes, he is mad, but be more specific.

Think of his sense of reason, how does it connect to his mental state?

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The man is going insane becasue the woman is too toxic.

Comments:
"Anger" is too general. You need to change the word choice.
"Expressing his feelings" is too general.
Try to link emotions to the word 'madman' in the poem.

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He goes insane due to the fact that he can’t have both options. (Both options being keep him sane or desires.)

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Shakespeare compares his love to a sickness

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He thought that his loved one is an angel, but realised she is like a demon cursing him.

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Good

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He gives in to his desire, because he is weak mentally.

Comments:
Good

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Couplet:
He regret knowing this woman. (He thought the woman is a beautiful and virtuous person, but in reality she is "black as hell" and "dark as night")

Comment: Good

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Shakespeare is comparing his love to a sickness

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Quatrain 3:
Now he realizes it is too late, and he knows that he is slowly going insane because of this love. ("frantic" "anxious" "restless" shows he is drained and filled with dread in this relationship)

Comments:
Shorten your point. Key word is insane, drained and dread.

Correction:
Shapessnake shows that he is filled with the feelings of dread, drained and slowly going insane.

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Shakespeare ignorance of his friends advice shows that he only wants the feeling of the sickness from the woman no matter the harmful effects.

Comments:
Refer to the literal translations of Quatrain 2. The woman never left, Shakespeare is the one clinging on to her. Shakespeare compares his sense of reason to a doctor whose advice he chose not to follow. Ask yourself: How does this trait of Shakespeare reflect his personality/state of mind?(READ)

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He’s obsessed .But he desperately wants to please his desires

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He has an unhealthy relationship with the woman because she is manipulative.

Comments:
Good.

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Shakespeare is psychotic about the terminal illness, afraid it would eventually be cured, making him a foolish and fearful person.

Comments:
Please do not copy the words from the poem. Your point must be of your own ideas.

Think: When a person is described as a madman, what do you think is his personality? Try to think of adjectives.(READ)

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Quatrain 2:
He compares "doctor" with the people who is trying to tell him this relationship is bad for him, but he is too stubborn to care. Now he knows his desires will eventually lead to something bad.

Comments:
Here, your point is Shakespeare is being stubborn because he knows clinging on to the woman is bad to him, but he doesn't care.

What do you mean by 'something' bad?

Correction:
Shakepear shows he is too stubborn to care that clinging onto the woman is bad for him, he knew that his mental heath will deteriorate.

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Shakespeare is obsessed with the woman as she is giving him fake love of torture and pain just like an illness despite the negative effects.

Comments:
Refer to the literal meaning of the first quatrain. Love is not being compared to poison, but a sickness.

Do not paraphrase quatrain one, but find out the main message.
For example: Shakespeare compares his love to a sickness because ....(READ)

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Shakespeare was a masochist. He compares his love to a sickness.He actively knows it’s bad for him but wants it anyway

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first quatrian: shakespeare is comparing the speaker's love to a sickness

Comments:
Good

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Quatrain 1:
Toxic Love (He only love the woman to satisfy his own desires.)

Comments:
Please specify the desires

Correction:
Shakespeare shows he has an toxic relationship with the woman because she is controlling him taking his freedom away for herself.

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My love is as a fever, longing still
For that which longer nurseth the disease,
Feeding on that which doth preserve the ill,
The uncertain sickly appetite to please.
My reason, the physician to my love,
Angry that his prescriptions are not kept,
Hath left me, and I desperate now approve
Desire is death, which physic did except.
Past cure I am, now reason is past care,
And frantic-mad with evermore unrest;
My thoughts and my discourse as madmen's are,
At random from the truth vainly express'd;
For I have sworn thee fair and thought thee bright,
Who art as black as hell, as dark as night.

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(AL-SAMIR) Main Message Of Each Quatrain:  

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(AL-SAMIR) Main Message Of Each Quatrain:  

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Quatrain 1: Shakespeare is addicted to a woman, he compares her with a sickness.

Comments:(very very good)

Quatrain 2: Shakespeare is hopeless that the woman is evil but he can't help himself because he is attracted to the woman and has decided that this is his fate.

(Okay, he is hopeless, but relate to the text. Why?) (good point though)
Comments: good, but tweak it according to the comments

Quatrain 3: Shakespeare knows that he is in big trouble that was caused by the women and now he is mad thinking of all the conflicts caused by the women using him but doesn't care and continues being with the women.

Comments: what conflicts? elaborate please. What do you mean by big trouble? Think: What is Shakespeare's mental state?

Quatrain 4: Shakespeare realises that the woman was nothing but just a burden for him. (There is no quatrain 4)

Couplet: All damages have been caused he just realises that she is nothing more than a no-good life destroyer (”Who art as black as hell, as dark as night.”
Comment: good

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What is the main message of each quatrain and the ending couplet?