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Jose Vega
Jose Vega
The true history is that they both were ex-boyfriend and ex-girlfriend, but she was mad with him because he sleept with her sister and now he was trying to win her back because she knew the secret that he in his past was a serial killer (hope you like my plot twist:))
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sole carvallo
sole carvallo
The guy went to run again and he was really sad and he thought that he was the problem so he wanted to cry in the park and he seat in a corner to cry a lot. Then the girl run fast to see him because she felt really bad of what she did, she explained to him that she is very shy and she freeze every time someone talk to her but now she saw him crying and she just wanted to help then he understood her and they became a couple 3 months later.

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Paula Vásquez

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Jose Vega
Jose Vega
The true history is that they both were ex-boyfriend and ex-girlfriend, but she was mad with him because he sleept with her sister and now he was trying to win her back because she knew the secret that he in his past was a serial killer (hope you like my plot twist:))
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sole carvallo
sole carvallo
The guy went to run again and he was really sad and he thought that he was the problem so he wanted to cry in the park and he seat in a corner to cry a lot. Then the girl run fast to see him because she felt really bad of what she did, she explained to him that she is very shy and she freeze every time someone talk to her but now she saw him crying and she just wanted to help then he understood her and they became a couple 3 months later.

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Paula Vásquez

Interesting ending. Be aware of the use of pronouns and  past verbs.
Why is your text below José's

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The true history is that they both were ex-boyfriend and ex-girlfriend, but she was mad with him because he sleept with her sister and now he was trying to win her back because she knew the secret that he in his past was a serial killer (hope you like my plot twist:))

ha ha ha José....a bit crazy your story, and short too. This is more like a reggaeton song.

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The guy went to run again and he was really sad and he thought that he was the problem so he wanted to cry in the park and he seat in a corner to cry a lot. Then the girl run fast to see him because she felt really bad of what she did, she explained to him that she is very shy and she freeze every time someone talk to her but now she saw him crying and she just wanted to help then he understood her and they became a couple 3 months later.

Why did you write your story with José and wrote Paula's name...it confuses me.
Pay attention to the past tense.

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she thougth that he was a bad person because of his skin color, so the man go to keep training, a moment later someone steal to the girl so the man go to help her, the girl was surprised because she thought that he was bad, so she apologizes and invited him to eat an ice cream, the man forgive her, then they go to eat and they became great friends

At least she realized she had been prejudiced. Be aware of past tense verbs.

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The girl realizes the guy who sat next to her, was telling her sometimg but she ciuldn't hear him because she was deaf so she waits until he come back from his running exercise and she writes down in her paper explaining she is deaf so she could not heard what the boy was saying and that she is sorry if he
thought  she was being rude, the guy read that and they star communicating writing in the paper and then they fall in love, and they live happily ever after together.

Why do you have 2 stories? Good ending. Be aware of the past tense.

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After the boy left, the girl started to think about what the boy had said, and the at the next day she went there and started to draw againg, and the boy came.

She started to talk with him and telling about her draws, then he told her why he runs every day, and then they started to be a really good friends, then they fall in love and he became a professional runer and she a very famous of her draws. They live happy together

Happy ending after all. Be aware of past tense.

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I think the woman reflected, she realized that she should treat the man well who only wanted to talk to her and be friends with her. Then the man jogged by again and the girl stopped him and first offered him an apology for having ignored him and treated him badly, then she invited him to eat something and there they could make friends and talk about life, and the girl really gave herself that the boy was no one bad, just a sportsman who wanted to have a friend.

Well done Sebastián!!

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after the boy´s run he returned for his backpack and he went to his work, he was a teacher of a painting club this club was the best of  the city and the girl that was on the bench wanted to enter, when  the girl went to register there was the boy when he saw her He ignored her and continued on his way to give his next class and when she enter to the class he told her that he could not be part of his class because in his class they do not like rude people

ha ha ha ....Revenge...interesting ending. Some past tense verbs are missing.

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What the boy didn't know is that she wasn't able to hear, so the boy thought that she was ignoring him but that wasn't the truth. The girl never understood the boy but she knew he was acomplishment her but she was to embarrased because of her disability of hear so she stay quiet and sad.
After that they met again in the park and the girl knew that thah was her oportunity to make a new friend, and then they satrt talking and she teaches him the sing languaje.

Well done, very close for the real story. Few minor spelling mistakes.

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Then the girl began to see the boy who did sports in the park and she asked him if he had liked the work she did a lot, he told her that he was very attracted to that kind of thing and they became friends and he He found out that she was a super famous clothing designer and he proposed to her that if he can be a model of her clothes and the whole world was known.

Interesting ending. Few spelling mistakes.

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The girl continues drawing and the boy come to drink water and the boy say that the draw is beautiful but another time the girl doesn't say anything because she can´t speak and heard, the boy when he was running he thinks why the girl doesn´t answer him and he can get that that she can´t speak and heard and he go another time to the chair he writes in him cellphone that her draw is soo beautiful and then the girl answer in the paper thank you and they were talking a lot of time and then they make friends.

Good ending, just remember that the whole story had to be in past. Some words are misspelled.

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The girl was not
"pinky" she just was so sad and dont want to answer because she end a relationship of 3 years, the dude feel bad and never return to that park again because he dont want to see that girl never again because he dont want to make her feel uncomfortable  and then they got infected with coronairus because they have no mask and then they bought die.

ha ha ha....You made me laugh. Remember that the story must be in past and it is both at the end.

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The guy came for the third time, and the girl had a note im her hand which said "Sorry i can not talk, i wish i could, but i wanted to say thanks for the compliment". The guy reading responded -don't worry about it, it's ok, anyways i wanted to know if can i get your number? maybe you can teach me to draw like that. So the girl gave him her number and waved at him to sasy goodbye, so the guy just waved his hand too and went away.

Simple and clear, good job!!

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She took out her cellphone and write a note: “Thank you very much! :) Sorry for not talking, I’m speechless. Since I was a child, I had loved to draw.” He was impressed. He misunderstood things, and asked for forgiveness. He showed a big scar in his chest, and told her that he passed through a difficult time too. She was impressed too. They exchanged social networks for talk in the future and been good friends.

Good story, few mistakes on spelling.

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The girl was deaf so she did not know that the boy was talking to her, then the boy got angry because he did not answer him and went to continue jogging, when he returned to the place he realized that the girl had made a portrait of him. boy so he was astonished and immediately apologized to her for how bad she had behaved without knowing what was happening to her. END.

Good story, but there are some mistakes on the uses of the pronouns.

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The Boy went for other run still continuing being mad at the girl. He then went back to the bench, got his stuff and leave. The girl regretful started following the boy, soon after he realised that he was being followed but decided to ignore the girl. After a while he was mad that the girl continued following him and tell her: "Can I help you?". She was surprised that he noticed and tell him: "Emmm....  I'm really sorry about that thing earlier, I was just thinking a way to compensate you". The boy propossed to go to eat somewhere and that she could paid. She agreed and went to the nearest restaurant they found, they realized that each other were really good people and ended up being really good friends.

Very well done as usual!!

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After the boy finished his training, he went to talk to the girl again and after he talk about her being pinky and smug, the girl simply didn't realize he was talking because she couldn't she was deaf. So the guy, very annoyed, threw away his notebook and started yelling, the girl scared takes her earbud out of her purse and the the guy realizes everything and apologies with the girl

Well done!!

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The boy comes back and tries to talk again with her then he realize that she es unable to speak and then he reads that in the drawing it says thank you then he gets so embarrased because of  his mistake and asks the girl out for dinner and then they fall in love and 10 years later they have 2 children but the girl suffers from cancer and dies leaving her children behind.

ha ha ha ...drama in the end. Interesting story. Few minor mistakes

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when the boy go to ask about the note that soomeone left him , the other boy tells him that it was a joke the girl popular includes her geoup of frindes , the boy do that all this time becuese hi likes the frriends and he confiesa all He confessed everything he felt for her and then they ended up together and happy with everyone

Intersting story, but had to be in past and not Spanish words had to be included. Check spelling.

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The boy its steal telling her that she was  very talented, then the girl loocked him and she stand up end she went to other place to keep drawing and the man continuous following her, so the girl speaks bad to him saying that she doesnt speaks with that king of people, she speaks with people that is in their height, the man felt bad and then the girl went one more time to her house and the man shoocked.

Prejudice is very common nowadays. Sad ending. Check spelling because it makes a completely different menaing: loocked, steal.

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after the boy left, she started thinkig about why shy didnt answer and what she can do about it. A few minutes after the boy come back to drink more water, he was a little bit angry because she ignored him. The girl was still painting but looking at the boy at the same time. The girl said hello, an the boy didnt said nothing, so she told him to look something, the boy turn aroud and the girl was giving him her drawing. it was him. thi girl draw the boy running. After that day they were very good friends.

Good story, just pay attention to the spelling.

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After the boy continue running the girl think about how she treats him, and she feel bad. Later when the boy returned to the bench the two were silent until the girl offered to see her drawings, the boy accepted and looked at the girl's drawings. The boy said that her drawings were very good and asked the girl if she was a professional drawer, the girl answered no but she wanted to be a clothing designer.

Good ending, just remember to use past to tell events that already happened.

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