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For my next essay I am going to make sure I:

- Make introduce and background topic as clear as I can

- Highlight and make sure what clear thesis statement is

- Add a clear topic sentence (start form basic words to academic words)

- continue to work on my grammar outside of class

- keep practice on grammar/vocabulary part

- just reduce the thinking time

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For my next essay I’m going to make sure:
-Understand the title of the composition and analyze the task.

-Briefly introduce the background and write the content to be discussed in the article

-Add a clear topic sentence in each body paragraph

-Use conjunctions and phrases to make the article clearer

-Pay attention to my grammar and spelling

-manage my time well in writing exam

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For my next essay I am going to make sure I:

-Train the writing speed and complete the required writing content.
-Make the logical relationship between sentences more clear and coherent.
-Add a topic sentence for paragraphs.
-Pay attention to the spelling of words.
-More formal to use words.
-Choice better and more appropriate words.
-Do not start a sentence with a conjunction like and/but/so/because.
-Don't start with for example.

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For my next essay I am going to make sure I:
-Use more hedging language to make my sentence more accuracy.
-Add a briefly state my problems and solutions.
-Add a clear topic sentence in each body paragraph.
-Link the problems as a beginning of the result.
-Check connection have corrected logical link.
-Manage my time well when writing so that I don't run out of time in the exam.

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For my next essay I am going to make sure I:
—Add a clear thesis statement in the first paragraph

—Add a clear topical sentence in the paragraph that spot the question

—Describe the first problem directly, without restating the background

—Not start a new sentence with a conjunction like and

—Explain the main point in detail

—Conclusion needs to restate the main points in different words, and also can add a final thought

—Keep doing grammar/sentence structure study

—Note the capitalization

—Accumulate vocabulary

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For my next essay I'm going to make sure
I:
-Introduce the background  not too long.

-continue to woke on my grammar issues

-improve sentence structure

-manage my time well when writing so that I do not run out of time of the exam

-remember the structure of essay PS.

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For my next essay I am going to make sure I:

- Come up with 2 main problems and solutions more quickly and state them briefly in the thesis statement

- add a clear topic sentence in each body paragraph

- continue to work on my grammar outside the class

- continue to work on my vocabulary outside the class

- think carefully about the relationship between sentences, and use the linking words/connecting words more properly

- use the checklist and evaluation form to guide my writing

- manage my time well when writing so that I don't run out of time in the exam

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For my next essay I am going to make sure I：

-Introduction needs a thesis statement.
-Add a clear topic sentence in each body paragraph.
-Pay attention to the spelling of the words.
-Find out whether to topic of discussion is the cause or the influence.

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for my next essay I'm going to make sure:

- the background in introduction more shorter

- add the thesis statement

- a clear problem at the beginning of body paragraph

- add more detailedexplanation

- increase my accumulation of vocabulary and grammar, shorten wrting time.

-increase my reading and remember PS eassy structure.

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For my next essay I am going to make sure I:

- Introduce the background topic appropriately (not too long)

- Add a clear thesis statement and briefly state my probs/solutions

- Add a clear topic sentence in each body paragraph

- continue to work on my grammar outside of class

- check my work carefully for grammar/vocabulary issues

- use the checklist and evaluation form to guide my writing

- manage my time well when writing so that I don't run out of time in the exam