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I didn't receive back any feedback. Since I wasn't able to do the PBA.

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Most of my feedback was telling me I needed more justification on how Christopher's father was lying and factual evidence that Christopher mother was a terrible mother. I did well in responding to the prompt and responding.

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I had good feedback on the transitions I used at the beginning of my paragraphs. I just needed to put the title of the book in italics.

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I recieved good feedback with my transitions and how I gave a thought provoking thought at the end in my conclusion. I was criticized on my 3rd paragraph because I was losing focus on my main thesis.

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I didn't get any feedback because I didn't do it.

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The feedback criticized my grammar and my lack of detail when I came to conveying my stance. I was told my thesis was solid and clear which was important to the reader.

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No feedback

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I got good feedback on my transitions it said paragraphs flow smoothly and logically.I just need to do a better job on getting stronger evidence .

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I had my thesis well which responded to the prompt and let the readers know about my essay and for my evidence I need to clarify the purpose that I was proving for my thesis.

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Some feedback I received was to match some of my sentences together.

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I didn't get any feedback because i didn't do it

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Most of my feedback was constructive criticism talking about how I needed to provide more brief and important details. Also, to include a thesis that states if Christopher's dad was justified in hiding the letters and saying his mom died.

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I had a really good hook that the readers could relate to and addressed the prompt very good. I needed to add more evidence that was related to Christopher's trust being broken.

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she stated that i did very good transitions and i made my introduction clear but she said my main problem i had was grammar and she said i needed a little of work on making things clear

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I had a good job organizing my essay with transitions to show how ideas relate to each other.  I also had a clear thesis that responds to the prompt and lets readers know exactly what my essay will be about. I have to work on backing up my claim with the right quote.

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Great feedback on my amazing writing some constructive criticism here and there (very few)

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I had a good hook to draw the reader in. I had to reason my quotes or evidence a bit better and thesis could have been better stated. Need to work on commas and periods, not making sentences to long.