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Work in groups of 6

Each groups will receive three writings

Use the “Feedback form” to give comments on your friends’ writing

Post your comments on the padlet

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https://meet.google.com/wsg-evra-pdy

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https://meet.google.com/bwz-iwtn-raq

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https://meet.google.com/kmw-atms-fzh

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https://meet.google.com/qhs-fioe-ioi

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https://meet.google.com/csr-egpw-yyv

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Work individually

5 minutes

Look at the notices

Go to padlet

Type all the keywords that you can find in each notice

Submit your answer on padlet

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Is this a paragraph?

Does he/she describe all three pictures?

Does the writing have the correct number of words (from 35 to 50 words)?

Are there any grammar or spelling mistakes? (Eg: past tenses, plural and singular nouns, etc)

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foorball class, tomorrow

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football class, tomorrow instead

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-afternoon football class
-tomorrow

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Football class, away today, tomorrow, this afternoon

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finished with that book,brother, needs it for school project

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football class, tomorrow instead

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1,afternoon football class
2,tomorrow

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Football class, tomorrow

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Football class , tomorrow instead .

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Picnic area, no ball games, other side of the park

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finished, brother, needs, a school project

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football class , tomorrow instead , today

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After football class, tomorrow

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afternoon's football class, tomorrow

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Lent, school project, book, finished

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Football class, afternoon, tomorrow instead

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no ball games, please use the other side

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this afternoon's,football class,tomorrow instead.

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- No ball games here.
- Picnic area ball games area in the other side.

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Afternoon Football calss , tomorrow

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Finished with that book, brother, needs it for school project

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Museum, 12 Children, with adult

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ball games, other side, park

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football class , tomorrow

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afternoon, football class

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Finished , brother , needs , school project .

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-finished that book
-brother need

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open from 12, children, an andult

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finished,book, brother needs it for a school project.

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Football class, tomorrow

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open 12, children, adult

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don't use the car, coming on foot, healthy

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finished with that book, bother, need, a school project

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Picnic Area, No ball games, Use the other side of the park

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- Walk to school
- No car to get to school
- Don't need much time

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Brother needs it for a school project

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finished with that book I lent you, my brother needs it for a school project.

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No ball
( I guess they hate it because it danger )
the park

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finished that book,her brother needs it for project

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Finished with that book,brother,needs it for a school project.

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-no ball game here
-use the other side of the park

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foorball class
tomorrow

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this week, car, foot, much time

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no ball games , other side , park

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No ball games
Use the other side

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buy two pizza, give you third one, Mon- Fri only

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don't use the car, coming on foot, healthy and doesn't take much time

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-museum
-12 children
- with an adult

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Picnic arena, no ball game, use other side of the park

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12 children, with an adult

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no ball game, use the other side

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Football, tomorrow

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finished that book brother need it for a school project

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Foorball class
tomorrw

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two pizzas, a third one, free, mon- fri only

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-open from 12
-children muast be with an adult

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Museum , 12 children , with adult

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no ball games here, use the other side of the park

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Needs, books,project, school

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- Buy two pizza - give the third one
- Only on Mon - Fri.

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Museum open from 12, children must be with an adult

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don't use the car, foot, much time
No copy

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buy two pizzas at the same time, give you a third one, mon-fri only

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museum, 12 children, with an adult

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School project, lent

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no ball game here.
use the other side of the park.

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no ball games here,other side of the park.

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-don't use the car to get school
-coming on foot

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Don't use car, Coming on foot is healthy

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Museum open from 12 , children , must be , adult

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Walk to school , no car to get to school , don't need much time