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1.Ways of achieving unity and coherence in writing paragraphs

Link1: https://www.wheaton.edu/academics/services/writing-center/writing-resources/paragraph-unity-coherence-and-development/

Link2: http://faculty.washington.edu/ezent/impd.htm

2.Techniques to achieve effective narration

Link1: https://study.com/academy/lesson/narrative-techniques-in-writing-definition-types-examples.html

Link2: https://courses.lumenlearning.com/englishcomp1v2xmaster/chapter/writing-for-success-narration/

3.Effective description

Link1: http://inkandquills.com/2016/05/08/creating-effective-description/

Link2: https://www.iup.edu/writingcenter/writing-resources/organization-and-structure/descriptive-writing/

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TEACHER’S COMMENT

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My Introduction.
Hi guys >.< My full name is Tu Ngoc My Dung. I am nineteen years old and currently a student at Dalat University. My major is Faculty of Foreign Language, and I'm in my second year. Now I live in Dalat city which is known as one of the great climates in Vietnam.I am a generous and approachable person, but at work, I am a perfectionist, competitive. I'm also an optimistic and outgoing person so I have a lot of friends and other social connections. My major requires me to hone my soft skills as well as vocabulary knowledge that makes me more persistent and confident. I have a maxim to try every day that is: "If you do, you must make the best”.Besides studying I also enjoyed dancing and have represented my faculty in many events. Being actively involved in the arts taught me many skills. I am also an active member of my faculty club. I have been living and working enthusiastically for my youth.

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Duyen and Ngoc are my close friends at highschool who have many similarities in lifes, the most important of which are presented below. In the first place, Duyen is similar to Ngoc in that they are both love to go shopping, especially they buy discounted items  in the stores.  They think that shopping can relieve all the pressure in life because the items purchased will satisfy them.Besides, hunting for discounts at the stores will make them buy bargains at low prices, they will save more money when buying items without discounts. In addition, Duyen and Ngoc both study in Ho Chi Minh city. they go to the same college and always go home together. Sometimes I only need to call one person and see both of them at once because they live together; that's great because Ngoc is always weak and needs someone by her side to share and take care of.Eventually, they love to dance which makes them invite each other to practice dancing at the club every weekend.  They think that dancing not only strengthens their strength, but also makes them feel more confident in the crowd through their dance. In conclusion, they are good friends and I would never be jealous of either of the two who cared more because we were the closest friends.

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Last month was my 19th birthday and it was the best birthday party for some reasons as follows. First, all my friends had come oved and we had a small gathering. We went to a diner near the school which was served with beef, bread, vegetables and soft drinks. We enjoyed eating and chatting together. Second, after dinner was finished we decided to go a coffee shop. I was surprise by the gifts I received because they were of great value. The first gift is the cometics items from Korea that I love and the second gift thats made the most sense to me was my idol’s album. Finally, it was the first time I received valueable birthday gifts from my friends. I was once very glad to see all my friends. It is splendid and more than I ever imagined to have during my birthday. In conclusion, it is so amazing to feel the love and care all the people rain on me during my birthday.

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I currently live with my aunt in Da Lat city. The house is large and has two floors located at the beginning of Mimosa Pass 10km away from the bustling city center. This is not the ideal home as I dreamed, but I really like the atmosphere here. It is a rather quiet place with fresh air. My house looks beautiful with white wall. There are two floors in my house: The first floor has the living room, kitchen, bathroom, and my aunt's bedroom. Living room has a large sofa, a TV about 55 inches with many different beautiful pictures.Behind the living room is my aunt's bedroom. In the room there is a large built-in wardrobe, a dressing table and a 2m bed. When going out of the bedroom go straight down to the back of the kitchen. In the kitchen, there is a refrigerator that fits a dining table. On the right of the kitchen there is a cabinet and a stovetop. The bathroom is fitted with a shower and a bathtub that is very clean. Behind the house is a balcony about 1m wide. Tidy arrangement with machines such as washing machine, dryer and some precious bonsai. On the second floor, it has two bedrooms and a new toilet. Each room has a large bed, on the left side of the bed is a dressing table and on the right side of the bed is a study desk. Next to the house is a drying yard with ornamental plants. Even though it's only been two years, they've had a lot of memories of my maturity.