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I will re-use the essay writing skill I learned this semester next semester. I think writing essays in English will be a lot in after. I systematically learned how to write things like topic sentences, transition sentences in professor Maria's class. Thanks to the professor, my essay writing skills have improved a lot. This ability will be re-use next semester as well.

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I remember I submitted google form late because the group members who said nothing in the first discussion. Through first discussion, I was in trouble by submitting a few minutes later than the deadline and I felt that I should not do that because others were passive. So I thought I should create and lead the atmosphere so that everyone can participate.

There were many silent students in discussion and there were few active students. So I prepared grasped the contents and explained the discussion questions to students who couldn't understand. After that, I had plenty of time to think about the questions and asked the group members about their answers. If there was no one said what they thought about the question, I brought up my opinion first and created an atmosphere for the group members to speak their thoughts comfortably. And we gathered the opinions and respected the group members' thoughts on it. So through the first debate, I realized my mistake and improved my leadership ability.

However what is still regrettable is that it failed to elicit opinions from students who did not speak from the beginning to the end of the discussion. If there is another chance for such a discussion next time, I can draw responses by calling out the name of passive student directly and create a discussion in which everyone participates.

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I want A+ grade. I have grown up more now than when I first took Professor Maria's class. I am not just saying I have grown, but I have developed in various areas. What I gained from this class was huge and my ability to use it in the future has become more diverse. I would like to explain in three segments of writing, leadership, passion during I developed during this semester.

My essay writing skills improved step by step after listening to the professor's explanation every week. I mistook a spelling in the Module 9 writing, but I corrected it with my professor's feedback and never made that mistake again. After that, I modified the topic sentences through professor Maria's solution in week 5 and I got the hang of it through feedback on transition sentences in week 6. As such, my writing ability improved by refining my essay little by little through the professor's explanation every week. I have grown not only in writing skills but also in leadership.

I improved my leadership through discussions with classmates during class. In the first discussion, the group members did not speak and submitted google form late. Since then, I have led the debate by stating my opinion first and asking the opinions of the group members. As a result, there was a classmate who asked me for my phone number and sent me a message if there was anything I didn't know. Like this I was able to develop leadership and participated in the class passionately.

In the first, I felt a lot of lack and tried to fix it and had passion. After the first class I felt that I was not able to keep up with it, so I had to take time to understand and prepare every week in advance. On such a prepared paper for class, I wrote down words I didn't know and important words while taking the class and tried not to fall behind in the class. And unlike other classmates I hard took pictures walking around places that fit the theme, not just skimming near my house on the Community Immersion Project of padlet. I tried passionately for the class throughout the semester.

Like this I am not saying that I grew up in professor Maria's class for this semester without grounds. I improved my essay writing skills by following the professor's feedback every week. And I improved my leadership through discussion and had a classmate who relied on me. Also I tried to achieve good results with passion in all the class before, during, after in every week. So I want A+ grade based on examples of my growth during these semesters.

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(The photo is sentence first submitted and the text is the final completed essay.)

The birthrate problem in South Korea is serious and is important because it has a great influence on society. South Korea's birthrate is lower than mortality rate from 2020, and population in 2020 decreased for the first time. So more and more population in South Korea will decrease and will be crisis. These crises appear in each segments and people must consider them important. Therefore I will look at the birthrate issue by segments of elderly, youth, male and female.

The elderly people's preparation for old age impacts birthrate problem. The development of medical technology is decreasing mortality in elderly, but also birthrate is decreasing. So increasing population of elderly cause young people's burden of caring elderly people. If do so the cost of young generation to take care of elderly people will increase from now on. Thus low birthrate problem make difficult that young people to take care of elderly people and there is a deep connection between the two generations about birthrate.

The fertility rate problem reduce youth and as this generation decrease, the future working population decrease. So youth people who increase the cost of per person caring for elderly person is decreasing. And due to the decrease in the working population, the quality of the labor decrease and the national competitiveness becomes less. If the national economy worsens, it is a vicious cycle in which young people's development possibility about workforce decrease. Male and female important as well as these generation segments to the birthrate.

The low fertility demand a role with a burden for men and women. Women are required to give birth, but working women is difficult. Also men are demand to take care of baby, but it is difficult because of walk on eggs on child care welfare in company. Both men and women it difficult to keep their demand on low birth due to drawback of social environment and system. This issue of male and female birthrate may intensify conflict with each other.

As above, the birthrate problem is serious in segments of elderly, youth, male and female. The more elderly population rise, South Korea’s fertility rate deepen. And decline in youth reduces the working population, making the economy difficult. Giving to men and women role about birth does not help the fertility problem because of the social atmosphere. We have to look at sectors this problem and realize the seriousness.

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I answered the questions from March to the last class diligently.

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I prepared before class every week and wrote down the content of the class.

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The government should tighten regulations on  emerging transportation devices.
Recently, more rules added for scooters. Unlike this situation, I think strong rules are needed from the beginning.
They should be reduced from excessive conditions to suit the situation rather than creating a lax administrative system. Because transportation devices are related to safety issues.
I think that it can reduce safety accidents and improve people's awareness of safety.
Therefore, people should take the safety issue of  emerging transportation devices seriously and apply regulations strongly.

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Is it difficult to manage your health due to your physical disability? Are you just staying home because you are feeling uncomfortable? Don't hesitate and come to Disabled Sports Center!

You just bring in Welfare card for the disabled, and all other procedures are supported by our staff.

Our center will do its best to find exercise that you can do even if you are not feeling well.Let's come to the Disabled Sports Center and increase our activities!

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Do you think Gwangju (or whatever location was covered) is doing an adequate job with trash management? Why or why not?

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Do you think Gwangju (or whatever location was covered) is doing an adequate job with trash management? Why or why not?

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Gwangju  is well trash management because it has better manpower and administration system than other regions as a big city.

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Stop comparing and make yesterday's bad day a good day today.

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Stop comparing and make yesterday's bad day a good day today.

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No one knows when and how one situation will change, but don't compare it to yesterday. Try and develop according to current condition and be a good day.

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Don't compare own life with others and live positively.
People usually compare myself to others who seems to be better than me and feel bad about own situation.
And like People are infinitely greedy and repeat mistakes, people are greedy again even if they are in the situation they want.
If you find only positive aspects of your situation without comparing to others, the quality of life will improve.
Therefore I hope that everyone lives a healthy life with a positive mind without demeaning themselves compared to others.

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There is a park. but it is illegally parked on the street.

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What are the rules and policies in your neighborhood traffic for people, bicycles, scooters and vehicles?

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What are the rules and policies in your neighborhood traffic for people, bicycles, scooters and vehicles?

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Anyone must not park on the side of the road for a certain period of time. And there is no bicycle lane in Hwasun, so bicycle rider have to pass from the right edge of the roadway. And scooters are just like bicycles.

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What do you think of the increase in scooter traffic?

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What do you think of the increase in scooter traffic?

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I think scooter is very dangerous. It is a very dangerous act for two people to ride or on the sidewalk.

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What problems do you see for traffic in your neighborhood? How would you solve them?

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What problems do you see for traffic in your neighborhood? How would you solve them?

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I think cars that don't obey the signal at dawn are dangerous. I think there should be more cameras that detect.

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Do you think there are enough beautification projects in your neighborhood? Why or why not?

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Do you think there are enough beautification projects in your neighborhood? Why or why not?

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I don't think beautification projects is enough. There are many excellent nature space in Hwasun. So I hope many beautification projects such places.

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What do you think about public funds being spent on these projects?

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What do you think about public funds being spent on these projects?

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I think positively about public funds being spent on these projects. Because I like such spaces and use them well.

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Are these beautification projects being adequately cared for and maintained?

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Are these beautification projects being adequately cared for and maintained?

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I think these projects is adequately cared and continues to develop.

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What are the rules and policies in your neighborhood regarding trash?

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What are the rules and policies in your neighborhood regarding trash?

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When throwing away rubbish, it should throw away into a standard plastic garbage bag suitable for the region.

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Write a list of 5 ways City Hall can improve trash management.

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Write a list of 5 ways City Hall can improve trash management.

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1. Imposing a lot of fine

2. Installing  a lot of cctv.

3. Increasing the number of  public trash cans

4. Strenthen crackdowns trash unauthorized dumping management area

5. Doing Trash unauthorized  dumping prevention campaign

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I prepared before class every week and wrote down the content of the class.