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“The music video was great. There were some very interesting scenes at the start, Samuel scene was very professional as well as Sara’s. It does look like she’s actually singing, which is very impressive in my opinion. In addition, I really like one of the scene of Sara where the background was blur, I think it emphasize the singer. However, there could be some improvement, some of the scene in the video was quite blurry. The crew could retake some of the blur shots and put in more scenes without the singer. Overall, a very good start.”

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“The music video was nice. There were some good looking shots, especially at the beginning where it nailed both the theme and atmosphere. But there were some parts where it needed to be improved, like Pat’s lip singing showed a lack of facial expression and body language which tarnished the atmosphere of the video unlike Sara, which she made it believable. Also, there were some parts in the video where the transition needed to be smooth and at the beginning, get rid of the blur shot. It ruined the my initial impression and showed a bit of unprofessionalism. But overall, a decent start. ”

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“When I first saw the music video after they had completed it the first time. Honestly it was pretty terrible. It was edited poorly and seemed rush, confused without any proper order or story to it. This was probably due to their lack of planning, and lack of emphasis on work rather than play. They did however have some nice shots of Sarah, but the problem was they didn’t have a complete shot of the whole song. They had little bits of excellence throughout the video, but it still needed a big overhaul. ”

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“Although they were little prep time and lack of experiences on the musical instruments, the crew have tried their best to make it as close as the original to the eyes of the audience. What could be fixed and improve would be the setup of the studio, as well as time for the cast to learn their roles and movements in the video, also taking shots with different angles to be able to show the audience the whole aspect of the video”

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“The music video could have been improved through the use of better and more stable camera angles this could possibly be achieved by using a gimbal to ensure a more stable video. Other aspects which could be worked on are the lighting, the lighting could help achieve a more bright effect which relates with the song and its adventurous them.”