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Good afternoon,

With the completion of the activity number 10 this virtual course is over. I hope this blog and platform have been very useful to you and I would like to encourage you to continue improving your knowledge in English. As you know, speaking a second language has many advantages not only when finding a job but also in your personal life. This will open many opportunities to you in the near future, so do not waste this knowledge acquired!

Continue practicing!

Good Luck,

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Good afternoon,

Your pictures are very nice. I hope you enjoyed doing this activity. The idea is to learn while you have fun. This is very important when learning a foreign language so find a way to motivate yourself. Reading cartoons, watching movies, making new foreign friends by using social networks and doing karaoke in English are just some examples of how you could start motivating yourself and learn English very fast.

Kind Regards,

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OK!
Continue working on the platform and the lessons. We are very close to the end of the course.
DO NOT GIVE UP!

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You used a translator and There are many mistakes on it (grammar, cohesion and coherence mistakes) If you really want to learn and improve your english skills, do the things by yourself based on what you have learned on the platform.

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which I liked the most was the share with the people I love most the following is my passion since I love the cars that I liked less was the of reading since I can't read and the rest I could not do was because I am a little delicate health.

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Hi,

Thanks for your opinion analysis about transportation. I agree with you in many aspects you mention such as the fact that we need to encourage people to use their cars less and public transport more to stop the rising levels of congestion and air pollution found in big cities like Bogotà. In terms of English there are many mistakes because you took advantage of a translator not of your knowledge. If you want to improve your English you must write your own ideas and practice your writing skills.

That's the only way you can get a deep feedback from me.

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What I caught my attention in the article is the way it resists this element to support a vast journey

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Hi!

The participation in the second task is attractive and interesting. You included a photo, information about you, food, hobbies and activities you like to do on weekends. However, it has many grammar, spelling and cohesion mistakes. You used a translator to do the activity and there are some wrong sentences traduced from Spanish to English. Next activities be careful and check several times what you write. I also hope you try to write by yourself your own ideas.

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Hi!
Good Job and very interesting ideas for the future. In terms of english I would say that you know how to share personal information and talk about yourself and future plans. However, there were some cohesion mistakes. You need to focus on pronunciation. Start studying the sounds SH, CH, TH, INITIAL S AND Z for now.

I hope I can see progress in the next video activity.

Best regards,

Ivan Camilo Gonzalez

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