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Emmi: Plenty of information, voice was also loud and clear
Sunny: Nice uses of vocabulary but a bit rushing
Nicky: Plenty of information but a bit of pauses
Ally: No sound
Thomas: Nice organization of information but a bit of rushing

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Emmi: good information, your voice was loud and clear.
Sandy: Good information, speak louder.
Line:Your intonations were good, speak louder.
Joel: good information, your voice was loud and clear.
Smriti: ??????

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Sunny: You were kind of rushing, but you have a lot of information and a clear explanation.
Nicky: You had a few of pauses during the recording but your information was organized well.
Joel: You were not very fluent but your information was said well.
Emmi: Your voice was loud and clear.
Linie: You had some pauses during the recording and your voice was really quiet, but your tones were really good.

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Linie: Your intonation was good you just need to be louder I couldn't hear you well.

Sandy: Good explanation very clear. But, please speak louder.

Thomas: Nice and loud good explanation, try to intonate your tones.

Molly: It was nice and clear but try to put some tone into voice when you talk.

Emmi: I like how you put intonatio

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Sandy- I could not really hear your recording, but it seems like you have used most of the new vocab. Good job :)
Thomas- Your voice was very clear, and you were quite fluent, however you were speeding through the recording.
Linie- Your recording was also quite quiet, but your tones were mostly correct. Keep it up!
Molly- You knew your description well, and your tones were almost perfect :D

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Emmi: Your voice is clear and your recording is very well organized
Thomas: You were rushing in the recording

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Sandy: I couldnt really hear your recording

Joel: your recording was very organized but the tones need more improving

Emmi: good intonation and clear recording. very well organized.

Jeong hun:  there was no recording

Joe:

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Comments
Sunny: I think you were kind of trying to rush, and you need to make the sentences to your own words. But your intonation was pretty good.
Sandy: ???
Ash:???
Smriti: ???
Joel: Your 4th tone needs to be clear but overall, I think your recording was organized and good.
Sophia: You didn't copy off the book, you were loud and clear, with good
Laura: I think you used variety of new structures learned from chapter 1 and 2, and tried to not read off the book.
Ally: No sound, ????
Thomas: I think you need to speak more clearly. But your recording was also well-organized
Emmi: You used variety of new structures learned from chapter 1 and 2, good!

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Emmi= Really good information, tones, volume and sound quality were great! I couldn't really fault it.

Sunny=Good fluency and tones but maybe don't read it entirely from  the book.

Ally= Um, there wasn't any sound

Laura=Perfect fluency and tones were great and you came up with a script that wasn't just the list! Good job.

Thomas=Good fluency, well organised, but maybe you could make the recording itself a bit clearer

Joel=Good tones and volume but maybe take shorter pauses

Smriti=Says it was deleted

Ash=Says it was deleted

Sandy=Says it was deleted

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Sunny's Fotobabble: the recording abruptly stops, and you are reading out of the book but just taking out the craig and buzz
your flow is very consistent with minor pauses and i think your intonation was good

Sandy's Fotobabble: not there, deleted

Ash's Fotobabble: not there, deleted

Joel's Fotobabble: Again, you are reading out of the book, there were also some unnecessary pauses but over all i think your intonation was very good.

Sophia's Fotobabble: i like how you made it your own but it was very short, i also liked how you tried to emphasize specific words.

Joe's Fotobabble: I like how you added unique things that were not staright out of the book into your explanation but it was very hard to hear you.

Jeon Hun's Fotobabble: I got no sound.

Nicky's Fotobabble: No audio

Ally's Fotobabble: No words only weird microphone sounds

Laura's Fotobabble: you read a little out of the book but contributed your own script into it too.

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emmi: you have really good fluency and intonation. your script was good as well

ally: good fluency and tones, described st juan really well
Nicky： your info was organized, and you used a lot of vocab. it was good but you paused sometimes
tomas: you had well organized information, but the recording was a little unclear.
linie: you had really good, well organized information. you were kind of quiet though.
sophia: you spoke really clearly, and it was very understandable. your pronunciation was immaculate! it was a little short though...

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Sunny: Good vocabulary, but it seemed like you were rushing.
Ally: Good fluency and tones
Ash: Unable to enter
Sophia: You were not rushing and you had great tones, but it was shorter than a minute.
Jeong Hun: I could not hear anything

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Comment Section:

Joe’s Fotobabble:

The information is good however I feel you could speak more audibly or maybe move into a quieter place with less people to let your peers hear more of the kewl information you dispense.

Jung’s Fotobabble:

It doesn’t play

Emmi’s Fotobabble:

Really good information surprisingly good sound, seeing that no-one else, either posted or had bad sound. good tones fluent and stuff.

Joel’s Fotobabble:

not that fluent however, there are good tones and it sounds as if your knowledge is good, but it sounds kind of robotic and like you’re reading from a script, with unequal stops and phrases unneeded.

Sophia’s Fotobabble:

Really good sound, including tones and background sound. The information is also really god, but it wouldn’t hurt to have more.

Laura’s Fotobabble:

You read from the story itself for a bit, but then added your own things. Your song is good but you go really fast so it’s a little hard to keep up with everything, however its still really good.

Tamis = narsty and trash

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Joel: Not that fluent, but good intonations and good informations.
Ash: Not found

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Emmi - really good intonations and fluency, with good information
Linie - you pause frequently, but overall it's good
Sophia - information you included are all good, and overall tones were also very good
Thomas - it would be better if you phrased the words better, but it was organized
Laura - it feels like you are reading off some parts, but still delivery and information was good

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