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Charli- some expansion needed in places, the Dumas review needs elaboration and include some images of the work.

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Charli- some expansion needed in places, the Dumas review needs elaboration and include some images of the work.

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Zurich was the birthplace of the Dada movement and its opposition to the cultural values artists believed had led to the First World War.

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Check the Drawing on Creativity brief sections for updates

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Check the Drawing on Creativity brief sections for updates

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Drawing on Creativity brief Access

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Kai, your exhibition review reads well, consider it submitted! Fran

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Kai, your exhibition review reads well, consider it submitted! Fran

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Luke-I really enjoyed the humour. An honest review. Well done!

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Luke-I really enjoyed the humour. An honest review. Well done!

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Stuart-this is great stuff! Very astute observations. You're a very good writer.

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Very thoughtful and smart Rachel. Excellent!

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Well done Ella-this is a decent well rounded review.

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Great stuff Lizzie! Get it printed!

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Iona, a couple of grammatical errors fixed-a really lively piece of writing. I enjoyed it!

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Iona, a couple of grammatical errors fixed-a really lively piece of writing. I enjoyed it!

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Great stuff Josh! Just a couple of SPAG edits, get it printed now.

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Now I know how well you write Alex, I have high expectations for your written work! 

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Now I know how well you write Alex, I have high expectations for your written work! 

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A couple of minor adjustments- ready to print now

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Final Exhibition Review - Alberto Giacometti

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Final Exhibition Review - Alberto Giacometti

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Ace Kim-you're right, it's more interesting than the previous review.

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"But as in his childhood." Have a look at the last sentence Hannah-I'm not sure what's missing here. Your question about what qualifies as "high art" is a good one but is a starting point for investigation so I'd exclude it from this review and look into it in the pathway stage. Otherwise a decent review and thanks for introducing me to the work of an artist I didn't know before!

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Well done Chloe-I've moved your review to this page so that everyone can read each others' work.

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Well done Chloe-I've moved your review to this page so that everyone can read each others' work.

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I have followed your advice on the last sentence and edited it, so you just have to read through that last part not all :) is it okay to print?
yep!