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I like the money idea overall idea is nice but you need more to it

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I like the money idea overall idea is nice but you need more to it

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I think the name could be better

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i think it is like game of life you use a spiner .  your game is like a nock of of the game of life .

speak up have more fun with  it .

i needs a box .

look uses in the eyes  .

i like the age range . you game can be more crative.

and not like the game of life .

have a rule book and
a loge .

not that prepard  for this  .

the money idea is not that crative  . i think you game can uses a lot of work .

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not prepared. but it sounds like a good game and the box is awesome

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At first I thought it was the one Kane just did.

I like how he's using a spinner most people would just use dice.
Is the clear container his box.

I didn't see that many things like his logo, box, or board

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WHERES YOUR BOX

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Okay you aren't very loud even after Mr. Edge corrected you.

Ahhh the basic roll and move game. Very basic. But it works for your game. I like it.

Wait...Thats Jonathan's box. Sorry Kane i didn't know. But Jonathan your box looks very bland and boring. Im not pleased.

You don't have your logo, a good box, not even a board.

Your game isn't very well planned. Im sorry but it needs to be much better before next week.

I do like the basics of your game though. The money game based is nice. Good job.

How do you get money though? Where does it come from?

Sorry for it sounding rude. Sometimes, the truth can hurt. Sorry

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i like the idea.
i dislike the time

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Sounds cool but I don’t understand why there would just be random money on an island if nobody lives there, and there is no backstory about who might have left the money there before. The name could also be a bit more catchy but I think with a few little changes this could be an amazing game!

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I think your game is cool but you should add something where you have to get or find resources so then you can get a house because you can’t just find a house or money. I think the game could be a little younger for age range and once you get or make a board make it look like a island. Add a more thoughtful backstory.

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oohhhh thats Jonathan box sorry Kane. so you don't have the best box in the best box in the world.

YOUR STRANDED ON A ISLAND HOW DO YOU GET MONEY. it doesn't fall from the sky.

plus you are on a stranded island there probably arn't houses. you arn't describing your game well and your soo quit

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The box needs work . Speak up i cant hear after mr. Edge coreccted you still . Kind of long play time . Will be confusing to 6 year-old . I DO NOT UNDERSTAND SPEAKING up is important.

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I think all of your stuff is very colorful but is that your box or are you going to make a new one because it takes away the flair from all of your beautifully colored cards and game pieces. You also need to speak louder and you seem a bit shy don’t be afraid be confident and just take deep breaths and you’ll be fine

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I like the name but the concept sounds a little original like the game of life

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Jonathan, make sure to speak up and bring good energy. Make sure your game is much more than a "roll the dice and move" game. Remember that we want to avoid those, unless there are more mechanics at work. Check boardgamegeek.com for a full list of all the mechanics.

I wish we could have seen a box, logo, or a poster board. Where is the board? Just because it isn't finished doesn't mean you shouldn't bring it to get feedback on. Those are the best times to get feedback.

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I love the game pieces and the cards. I love colors and bright things so this game looks amazing. Thank you for not turning your back to the audience. Pretty good age range.

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i like your game setup but i'm still rlly confused on how this game works. but i like your box and i'm excited to see how it turns out.

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the money looks well made although this game does not seem extremely original it seems a bit like the game of life and like monopoly. but aside from that you don't seem very prepared but over all its a great idea. i like the idea of the box but i would really like to see it come to life.

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I think you should make your box to have color. Also you need to speak up. But i think i would play your game.I think you should have a backstory because why would there be money on a island with nobody living there Good Job!😃

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you should change the name to something more ear caching

also you need to be much louder and make yore box better so it is a spin and move game simple.

good age rangebut for your game to be that long i would not play for that long may try shortening it a little bit

your game peaces are cool.
but i would like to se you board and your logo

but it seems like a cool game
and putting it in a briefcase would be vary cool

Good👍

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I like how you colored the cards The box is a bit to bland it would be better if it wasn't see through and it was decorated. but overall its a really good game sounds fun and i would love to play it!

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I thought that was the one

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What dose the box look like? why are you one a boat? were is the board. how long is the game

i fill there should be more color. how do get money one a i land that has no people.

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i noticed that your name "Money Island" is not as catchy as you thought it would be.

the cards are black and white can you show us a pic of the colored cards.

i like that you have cars as players that are different colors, nice touch.

i would like to see a pic of the finished box from what i can hear it sound cool.

i like that incorporated "monopoly" and "life" together in 1 game.

i like that you have money for the kids of your target demographic to learn money management.

i like that your money are different colors because some kids cant read yet and colors is a nice touch because they should have already learned it

i don't like that your game has no replay ability, so after a game or two you would start getting bored.

overall good job, keep up the good work! 👌

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Speak up, have more energy, look at the audience, I like the colors where is the logo?

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the box is bland i'm just saying. it kinda makes me think about monopoly.

is a card game because i can't see a board but you said it's a roll a dice and move game.

OH THAT IS THE BOX! i thought it was just a place to put the stuff and then you where going to make a box. but you are going to painted right?

not to be rude but you have a lot to work on

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I like the name of your game

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1. The Box Is Kinda Odd But Its OK

2. I Like How You Have To Get Money To Win And When You Win You Get Everyones Money.

3.I Would Like To Know When You Are Done With Your Box

4. I Would Like To See Your Logo.

5. I Like The Name Of The Game.

6. Ages 6+

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The idea is really cool but I couldn’t hear vey well but what I did hear was good. The spinner is cool. I like the idea of making the box a briefcase.

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I like the creative idea! Very nice! I have played the game myself and it's very fun and intriguing.

I would have more enthusiasm about your game to attract people. You want to get the listeners involved.

I really like the idea of having a briefcase because it well displays the theme of the game.

I would've liked to see the logo and board to give more feedback, though.

Well done!

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I like the name. How munch money do you start with??. The board game box should be a brief case.

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I would love to play the game. I liked how you used a loud voice. I would like you to add some more details on your box. I like the box idea. It very AWESOME.