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Harambe

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DI like how they connected the question to Parallel Journeys and used details from both texts.

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I like how they connected it to parallel journeys.

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I like how they connected the plow to the idea of holding on and keep on working. Eventually freedom will come and it will last

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The connection between Parallel Journeys is very good because it connects something we just read with something we are more familiar with.

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i like how you connected the message of the poem to parallel journeys to use better evidence

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I like how they explain what the quotes mean and what emotions they evoke.

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Group 3 did a good job addressing Hughes' calls for unity among races in a time where racial unity was rare.

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They had many examples

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I like hove you've related it to our time. And I liked your choice in Racism

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The transitions were really good and they provided lots of evidence to back it up.

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Group 3 did a good job

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Group 1 used a lot of details and they supported their evidence very well.

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Group one

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i liked how they elaborated on their evidence and used metaphors

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The thesis says that to achieve freedom, you need to work together and never give up hooey. However, it was related to parallel journeys and Helen in the concentration camp, where she mostly gave up hope. Also, it is stated that she had to fight other women for food, which contradicts the working together part

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They used good evidence and good supporting detail. It was very well thought-out. They had strong excerpts.

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I like how they talked about freedom being a universal statement and everyone is born with it.

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I like how group 4 put in the famous quotes from the famous people

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achieveAlso I agree with the message saying that if we all work together then we can conquer obstacles and and  achieve freedom

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The structure of the response somewhat clouds tha meaning but I agree with group 5's interpretation of the meankng

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RrI like

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i like how they used metaphors and

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I like ho

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I like how i could read the whole quote so that i could understand the reasoning better. Also I agree

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1. Their essay is really well-written and appears to be thought out very well. The excerpts are good at proving their points.
2. I think they could’ve provided a few more of their ow

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I like how their essay talked about how without the people and there working hands, there wouldn't be America. I also agree with the statement that said that the poems theme was about how if everyone worked together, we could achieve freedom and overcome any obstacles.

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I liked your response and how you presented it. I agree with your answer and I think he used those words

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I like how you said his quote "keep your hand on the plow, hold on." Meant freedom does not come easily that you must keep working.

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1. The connection to Parallel Journeys from last year was a very good comparison due to its familiarity with the class
2. Although the connection to Parallel Hourneys was good the group should have focused more on the poem.
3. Is Parallel Journeys the best comparison for the poem or are there other texts that could work as well?