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The ideas here are really great!! I would just clean up the sentences to make them flow a little smoother.

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the analysis of the quote was very detailed

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I like the how well the word morose works with the analysis.

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I like the how well the word morose works with the analysis.

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should mention the "grotesque gardens" if including it in the quote

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you said morose tone and gloomy perception... I feel like you should just pick one. Also don't say while twice in the last paragraph

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bland writing that lacks an engaging use of syntax or even higher level visualization of an argument.

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bland writing that lacks an engaging use of syntax or even higher level visualization of an argument.

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transitions into the quotes are gr8! typo in the second to last sentence, but other than that, good job!! :))

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transitions into the quotes are gr8! typo in the second to last sentence, but other than that, good job!! :))

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I like the explanation of what a farm should look like

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Taking apart the quote for individual analysis was nice and provided good descriptions and analysis for the imagery.

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good lead in to the quote

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The analysis is thoughtful in content but not format. Also the sentence about Nick travelling is unnecessary context and can be combined into the sentence that contains the quote.

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I like how you explained the whole quote and related it to your thesis

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I like how you explained the whole quote and related it to your thesis

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Explain grotesque gardens if you're going to pull it out from the text

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They used the word mororse and I used that word in mine. Don't copy me ever again.

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I like the way they pointed out the contrast between the two parts of the juxtaposition, however it would be nice if they specified the two parts

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I like the use of juxtaposition and how it describes the difference between ashes and the farm

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I like the use of juxtaposition and how it describes the difference between ashes and the farm

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nice job pulling out parts of the quote, really helps strengthen main idea

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There's a double use of "while" in the second to last sentence. One of them can be taken out.

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There's a double use of "while" in the second to last sentence. One of them can be taken out.

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Explain more of the quote rather than just putting it in the sentence.

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the second to last sentence does not make sense. besides that the analysis is good and thorough.

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I like the way they break down the quote to analyze it.

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I like the way they break down the quote to analyze it.

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nice analysis of the juxtaposition

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Should go back to edit the last sentence

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s'all good except the second to last sentence isn't worded correctly

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s'all good except the second to last sentence isn't worded correctly

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I like the word bleak and the scene that it helps to convey.

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They tear apart the text and the quote and they explain how each part displays imagery, good use of adjectives such as "bleak" to help the reader visualize better. Good explanation of the use of juxtaposition. Explanation of the ashes demonstrates the writer's knowledge of why certain diction was used.

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Nick’s morose tone as he describes the town conveys his gloomy perception of the setting and its inhabitants. Nick is travelling through a bleak area between West Egg and New York. He describes the town as “a fantastic farm where ashes grow like wheat into ridges and hills and grotesque gardens”. The juxtaposition used describes the area as a desolate wasteland. Calling the area a “fantastic farm” brings an image of an area abundant with nature. But the only thing growing are the ashes, which grow “like wheat into ridges and hills and grotesque gardens”. Ashes are the only remnant from fires, they are almost less than nothing. While ashes represent a lack of life, while a farm should be full of life. The conflicting images that these words provide reveal how bleak and depressing the area is.