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Eugenia suarez was born in the city of buenos aires, with her parents Guillermo suarez and Marcela riveiro mitzumeri. He has an older brother named Agustín suarez.
His maternal grandmother, Marta mitzumori was born in argentina, daughter of japanese Eugenia has cousins living on the island during his childhood he went to instituto corazón de María and the divine hearr of de Jesús. Eugenia has confessed to a television program which suffered bullying during high school from her schoolmates because she was famous and worked on television. His father, Guillermo suarez died on october 17, 2012. Finally in the year 2013 he had a daughter next to the actor Nicolás cabre rufina cabre Suárez

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Camila Cabello was born on March 3, 1997 in the city of Cojímar (Cuba), Mexican nationality by her father and Cuban by her mother, daughter of Alejandro Cabello and Sinuhe Estrabao. By the age of five he had already lived in Havana and Mexico City. To the 7 years of age emigrated next to its mother to the USA, and after a year and a half its father was united to them. When she was about to turn 15, her mother asked what she wanted for her birthday party, which Camila responded to audition for The X Factor.

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CNCO is one of the most-feted new popular groups in music  music bands nowadays. Christopher (EcuadorAN), Erick Brian (Cuba), Joel (MexicAN), Richard (DominicanAN) and Zabdiel (Puerto RicAN) are the members of CNCO. Tthey're talented singers and dancers who range in age from 16 to 21. The group emerged from Univisión's musical competition, La Banda, which was executive-produced by Simon Cowell's SYCO Entertainment, the global icon Ricky Martin, Univisión Communications Inc., and Haim Saban's Saban Brands. The band was specifically made on December 13, 2015.
Last March the group kicked off their first headline tour," Más Allá Tour", visiting over 40 cities in 14 countries in Central and Latin America with one sold out show after another. In June, when the first leg of their tour comes to end, they will go on tour with Enrique Iglesias and Pitbull visiting many statest in the US.

Good job! Mind you my suggestions. Avoid irrelevant information for following pieces. Final mark: 6.50 (six-fifty)

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Bob Marley was born on February 6, 1945, in Nine Miles, Saint Ann, Jamaica, to Norval Marley and Cedella Booker. His father was a Jamaican of English descent. His mother was a black teenager. The couple planned to get married but Norval left Kingston before this could happen. Norval died in 1955, seeing his son only once.

Bob Marley started his career with the Wailers, a group he formed with Peter Tosh and Bunny Livingston in 1963. Marley married Rita Marley in February 1966, and it was she who introduced him to Rastafarianism. By 1969 Bob, Tosh and Livingston had fully embraced Rastafarianism, which greatly influence Marley's music in particular and on reggae music in general. The Wailers collaborated with Lee Scratch Perry, resulting in some of the Wailers' finest tracks like "Soul Rebel", "Duppy Conquerer", "400 Years" and "Small Axe." This collaboration ended bitterly when the Wailers found that Perry, thinking the records were his, sold them in England without their consent. However, this brought the Wailers' music to the attention of Chris Blackwell, the owner of Island Records.

Dear Milagros,
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Final mark: 5 (five)

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Mark Sinclair (born July 18, 1967), better known by his stage name Vin Diesel, is an American actor, producer, director and screenwriter. He is well known for his portrayals of Dominic Toretto in The Fast and Furios film series , Richard b . Riddick in The Chronicles of Riddick series and Xander Cage in the xXx series. He was also a producer on sequels in these franchises.

Diesel has also starred in films such as The pacier(2005) and Find  Me Guity(2006). His voice acting work includes The Iron Giant(1999), the video game spin-offs from The Chronicles of Riddick franchise, and Guardians of Galaxy (2014). He wrote, directed, produced, and starred in a short film titled Multi - Facial and the feature-length drama film Strays. He is the founder of the production companies One Race Films Recetrack Records and Tigon Studios.

How did he become famous?
Good job, though!

Final Mark: 6.50 (six-fifty)

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Amy Lynn Hartzler WAS born December 13, 1981, in Riverside, California. Better known as Amy Lee, is a singer, designer and songwriter. She is the co-founder and vocalist of the alternative metal band Evanescence. Daughter of John Lee, a DJ and TV personality, and Sara Cargill. Amy's family is all Christian and has one brother, Robbie, and two sisters, Carrie and Lori. Amy Lee had a younger sister who died in 1987 at age 3 of an unidentified disease. Amy Lee took piano lessons for nine years. His family moved to several places, including Florida and Illinois, and finally settled in Little Rock, Arkansas, where Evanescence was born. She attended Middle Tennessee State University to study music theory and composition, and then SHE DROPPED leave it to focus on Evanescence. SHE founded Evanescence with guitarist Ben Moody, the two met in a camp after they heard Amy Lee play the piano.
(She met Ben Moody, the co-founder of the band,  in a camp. She met him while she was playinng the piano.)
She is my idol because I feel very identified in identify with  her songs, in her music, in  and her style as well. It is a great inspiration for me. She is very inspiring for me
By: Matias Romero

Good job!
Try to select relevant information for following pieces!
Final mark: 7 (seven)

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Ariana Grande was born in Boca Raton, Florida, in 1993 and began performing onstage when she as a child. A role in a Broadway play at age 15, followed by some small TV roles, helped her land the role of Cat on TV's Victorious. She followed that with the spinoff Sam & Cat and then dove headfirst into a chart-topping musical career, releasing three albums
Grande has been nominated for two Grammy Awards, won three American Music Awards, including Artist of the Year in 2016, and an MTV Video Music Award.
She is my idol for several reasons, for her sensuality, for her beautiful voice and for her way of being. I just love you  hertoo much.

Good job, Lara!
Final Mark: 7.50 ( seven- fifty)

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Born in 1977 in Villa La Esperanza in San Isidro, a poor suburb of Buenos Aires, Pablo Lescano made his first musical experience at the age of 13 years on a stolen -angeblich- Keyboard. As a youth he was active in several local cumbia bands until his 1997 (19) the commercial breakthrough in the band Amar Azul succeeded both as a keyboardist, on the other hand as a composer of many titles of the band.

With the gained royalties to the sellers of Amar Azul; Pablo Lescano set about building his own studio. In 1999 he concretized its plans to create a form of cumbia, which should be the voice of slum dwellers Argentina. He built around the singer Daniel Lescano, the band Flor de Piedra on which new paths went in text and sound: The text negotiated by the lives of slum kids, drug use, crime and sex, and the music integrated elements of techno and trance in traditional cumbia dance.

Flor de Piedra was commercially very successful, so Lescano 2000 another project tackled: the band Damas Gratis, where he was also active as a singer except as a producer. Also this band that the cumbia villera sound revolutionized again was very successful commercially and has won several music awards including the Gardel Award.
Why do you admire him?

Good attempt, Franco!
There are some patches of information, though.
Final mark: 6.50 (six- fifty)

In 2001, Pablo Lescano two other bands as a producer under contract: Jimmy y su Combo Negro, a parody of the traditional Colombian cumbia, and Amar y Yo that have popped up mainly with sexist lyric

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My idol is Eugenia Suarez is  She was born on march 9 ,1992 in the City of Buenos Aires where his parents and Marcela Guillermo Suárez Riveiro mitzumori. SHe has an older brother named Agustín Suárez. During his childhood he was the heart of mary institute and divine heart of Jesús (only in 7th grade) located in the neighborhood of Palermo. Eugenia has confessed in a television program, he suffered bullying during high school by their classmates by the fact that he was famous and worked in television. His father Guillermo Suárez died on October 17 2012 finally, in 2013 he had a draughter with actor Nicolás Cabré, Rufina Cabré Suárez

Dear Lucía,
This is off-subject. When did she become famous?
What about her career?
Why do you admire her?

Please, re-do this. Otherwise, you will get a below standard mark.

Best,

Florencia

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Benedict Timothy Carlton Cumberbach is an British actor who wHas perfomed PLAYED  in filmS, threatre, television and radio. He was born in on July 19, 1976 in London, England. His parents are Timothy Carlon Cumberbatch and Wanda Vetham, he also have a older half-sister by his mother Tracy Tabernacle.
Benedict went to ATTENDED two schools, Brambleyte School in West Sussex and Harrow School, one of the more prestigious privates schools, where then his grandmother will take care of the tuition and the  SECOND?one where he began as an actor/ HIS ACTING CAREER . In 2002 he joinED  ACTED in a short film "Hills Like White Elephants". It was Not until the year 2006 when  did his interpretation in the movie "Amazing Grace"  earned  make  him win  a nomination for the British Breakthrough Acting Award. He's currently interpreting to as Sherlock in the TV serieS, "Sherlock".

He is my idol for his performance in tv series and movies.

Good job, Andrea!
It shows you have tried to use your language skills to write and complete the task!

Final mark: 8- (eight-)

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Goong Ji-Cheul is an actor from South Korea of south. He was born on July 10, 1979 in Busan ,Korea. He was interested in acting since his childhood days so after completing his high school education, he studied DRAMA AT Kyung Hee University. He is recognized worldwide with his dramas like The 1st shop of Coffee Prince(2007) and Goblin: The Lonely and Great God(2016-2017),and the films Silenced(2011), The age of Shadows(2016), and Train to Busan(2016).
He is my idol because the way you  he actS and manageS to change HIS emotions is really exciting and amazing. By:Gabriel Bareiro.

Great job, Gabriel!
You could manage the information as expected! Read my suggestions for next pieces.

Final mark: 8.50 (Eight-fifty)

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Carlos Alberto "Indio" Solari was born in Paraná (Entre Ríos) on January 17, 1949. In 1966 he was a pupil of the School Number 33 in La Plata.

It was, along with Eduardo "Skay" Beilinson, formed  H e founded, along with Eduardo "Skay" Beilinson,one of the best most popularArgentinian  rock bands of  rock called "Patricio Rey y sus Redonditos de Ricota", between the beginnings of the '80s and the' 90s.

debuteHe began to relate to Eduardo Belinson, drummer of "Los Redondos", in the year 1979 nicknamed Skay, with whom they began to compose songs like "Mariposa Pontiac", "El pibe de los astilleros". "Ropa sucia", etc. that then became great success.
On a tour of northern Argentina, together with Skay and other musicians, they completed the project of Patricio Rey, which the debut of his first album ("Gulp!") In 1985. Gulp was the album debut of the band, and it was produced in 1985.
Los Redondos split  up by differences in 2001
The Indian Indio Solari formed the Fundamentalists of the Air Conditioning, a solo band.
Indio Solari's first solo work was "El tesoro de los inocentes (bingo fuel)" which was released in 2004.
On September 14, 2013, Solari starred in the show with more tickets sold in the history of Argentine rock, with more than 120,000 spectators at the Autodromo Penna, in the city of "San Martin" (Mendoza)
At the moment I realize  came across that his last show, which took ´place l the 11 of March in "Olavarria" (Buenos Aires) with 300,000 spectators, (show with the most amount of spectators in the Argentine history) which I could witness.
Why do you admite/ like him?
Good job, Flor!
Mind you my suggestions!
Final mark: 6.50 (six-fifty)
(El Indio does not talk about his personal life because of that, I could only say information about his career as a musician)I love you pelado. hahaha

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Alex Turner was born on January 6, 1986, he is currently 31 years old. Alex born in Sheffield, England, he is the vocalist and guitarist for the bands "Arctic Monkeys" and "The Last Shadow Puppets".
He is the only son of two teachers, they were the ones who bought him his first guitar as a Christmas gift. As to who inspired him to play the guitar was the band "Oasis" and thanks to the vocalist of the band "The Vines" made him think of being a singer.
Regarding his band, they played 15 years ago, his main genre is Indie rock and his label is Domino Records

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My idol is William Axl Rose, better known as Axl Rose, singer of the famous hard rock banda Guns n' Roses. He was born on February 6 in Lafayette, Indiana. When he was two years his father left him after separating with his mother. Axl has two brothers, a younger sister named Amy and a half brother Stuart. He never knew his biological father, since un 1984, he was murdered. He studIED at Jefferson High School where he partipated at school choiv?? and he began to develop different voices. Before his 18th birthday, he was arrested more than twenty times, form shop steals and público intoxication??? The first band in wHich it HE PLAYED participated was Rapidfire un 1983. Also Hollywood Rose un IN 1983, L.A guns formed in the same year. Until 1985 I formed one of the best bands in history: "Guns N' Roses".
I consider him my example in music since I can not get his voice out of my head. I'm  his fan, I know all his songs of all his bands, and I know the clothes he was wearing  in on oeach of his videos. I love him.
This year if Guns N' Roses returns to Argentina, I will definitely go and see theM  because it is my dream.

Good job, Sofía!
Final mark: 7 ( seven)

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My idol is Cristiano Ronaldo dos Santos Aveiro,better known as Cristiano Ronaldo.He is a professional footballer for Spanish club Real Madrid and the Portugal national team.He was born on February 5,1985 in Funchal,Madeira(Portugal).He is one of the biggest names in professional football, and one of the biggest sports stars in the world.When he was a child, he lived in pretty tight financial situation. He mentioned that all the siblings  lived in the same room when they were young. They were a staunchly Roman Catholic family. In school,

Ronaldo was generally popular but he was expelled when he threw a chair at his teacher for having ‘disrespected’ him.He started playing football early in life, at the age of 8, when he started playing for Andorinha a local amateur football club. At the age of 10, he signed up with the local club Nacional, having started to show talent. In 1997, at the age of 12, after a title winning season with Nacional, he was signed up by Sporting CP for an undisclosed sum.On June 11, 2009, the English club(Manchester United F.C) accepted the £ 80 million offer from Real Madrid Football Club, confirming two weeks later and being the most expensive transfer in football history to date.Ronaldo received the number 9 shirt, Which was presented to him by the former Madrid player Alfredo Di Stéfano. In this moment Nowadays, he plays in this team and won a lot of tittles  championships in   throughout his career.
Good attempt, Peter!
Some incomplete patches of info, though.

Final mark: 7 (seven)

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"Emma" Charlotte Duerre "Watson"

My idol is Emma Watson, Why?What I like Emma Watson THE MOST are things and times varied, some are: your  her way to  in which she defendS their  HER beliefs, changes HER look  STYLE radically, ask men, not containing their feelings, ?? among others.
She was born on 15 April 1990 in Paris, France.
Daughter of English lawyers Jacqueline Luesby and Chris Watson. She lived in Paris until the age of five. His parents separated and moved to England to live with his mother in Oxfordshire, while spending weekends at his father's house in London.
She attended the Dragon School in Oxford, where she remained until 2003. From the age of six she wanted to become an actress, and graduated from the Stagecoach Theater Arts of Oxford, a part-time theater school where she studied singing, dancing and acting.
At age nine, she was cast as Hermione Granger in the Harry Potter film series, having previously participated in school plays. She starred whit Daniel Radcliffe and Rupert Grint, the eight films in the film series. For her work on Harry Potter, she was awarded several awards.
His model debut was in 2009 for the British Fall / Winter campaign of the Burberry brand. He also participated in the Spring / Summer 2010 campaign of the same firm. Since 2011 was the face of Lancôme, after having made four campaigns for the brand. He collaborated as a stylist in conjunction with the People Tree and the Italian Alberta Ferretti, in launching ecological clothing collections.
In October of 2013, was chosen like Woman of the Year by the British magazine GQ. In 2014 she was awarded Best British Style at the British Fashion Awards.
In July 2014, she was appointed by the UN Goodwill Ambassador.
He started dating Oxford studies partner Will Adamowicz in 2011. They split up in early 2014. In that year he teamed up with rugby player Matt Janney, though they finished a few months later.
3 Films Example: "
Beauty and the Beast, Harry Potter and Your Voice in My head.

Good attempt, Nahuel!
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Final Mark: 6.50 ( six- fifty)

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She's a Korean singer who's from K.A.R.D's group(All the members are Somin,BM and J-seph)
She was born on october 4,1996, in Seúl(Korea). Before K.A.R.D, she trained for two months, because she's really talented. Her position in her actually group is: Main dancer, lead vocalist and maknae
( the youngest of the group).  She's famous in Korean,but Now she'll comes to America.Jiwoo explained, “I’m in charge of making our group’s singing, rapping, dancing and music colorful.”
Why is she my idol? She's my favourite idol because if she has a problem about danceING , singING or rapING  she trains hard until she gets it, and her voice is really amazing! That's why I like her.
By Hector Jesus Bareiro.

Good job!! 7 ( seven)

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My idol is Maria Eugenia Suarez Riveiro, better know as the China Suarez. She was born of the March  9, 1992.
She is and aArgentine actress, fashion designer and model. She is the best known for her role of "Jaz Romero" in the Cris Morena group series Casi Angeles and as a member of its Teen Angels. She started as a child model when she was six, and a photographer saw her while walking in a square next to her mother, Suarez made her acting debut in the television series Rincon de Luz (2003), created by Cris Morena.
In 2007, Suarez landed the role of Jazmin Romero in Morena´s series Casi Angeles, wHich achieved international success. She also became a member of successful music group Teen Angels.
Suarez was born to Guillermo Suarez and Marcela Riveiro in Buenos Aires; she had a Japanese maternal grandmother, Marta Mitsumori born in  Kōchi Prefecture.  When she turned seventeen, Suarez left home in order to pursue a career in acting.  She is a vegetarian.
Currently has a daughter named Rufina next to Nicolas Cabre.

Good attempt, Maite!
Anyway, there is too much info and you haven´t included the reasons why you admire this person.

Final mark: 7 (seven)

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Carlos Tevez was born on February 5, 1984, in Fuerte Apache. Argentina.
He has 2 daughterS  and 1 son. Their names are Florencia, Katia and Lito.
At 10 months of age, Tevez suffered third-degree burns after accidentally dropping boiling water over him. Nowadays you can clearly see the aftermath of the accident on the player's skin: it shows a large scar from the right ear to the chest.

In his childhood he was surrounded by a very bad environment, since he lived in one of the most dangerous neighborhoods of the Great Buenos Aires PROVINCE.
Carlitos started to play in a little club in his neighborhood until one day came a coach of the All Boys FOOTBALL club CAME to look for / GET NEW talents and HE aw him TEVEZ. From that time Tevez went through  PLAYED INa lot of clubs: All Boys, Boca Juniors, Corinthians, West Ham United, Manchester United, Manchester City, Juventus Turin, Back to Boca Juniors and Shanghai Shenhua.
To this day NOWADAYS, Carlitos Tevez has 20 titles in his football career.
ItHE is my idol because he is a person who came from the bottom and never forgot where he came from.  all the fame he had / has, he is also a very humble person and a clear example that if you want everything you can GET IT , HE IS a Crack
Good job, Juan!
Mind you my suggestions.
Final mark: 7 ( seven)

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My idol is Diego Armando Maradona. Diego is the best football player in the history. He was born on october 30, 1960 in Lanus. He has 5 sisters and 2 brothers, he is the fifth. His parents are Diego Maradona and Dalma Franco.
In his childhood he excelled in football playing as a striker in local teams, until in 1969 the club Argentinos Juniors observed it for smaller divisions. He scored many goals and won minor championships until in 1976 he made his first team debut. With the argentinian team made debut in 1977, in a friendly game with Hungary, but was not summoned world-wide Argentina 1978. In 1979, obtained the world-wide championship juvenile in japan. From 1984 to 1991, he playeD in the club Napoli of Italy where he reached the category of idol. With the Argentinian national team their passes and goals contribute to argentina obtaining is second world cup in mexico 1986. With argentina´s jersey he was second in te world cup italy 1990.
In 1995 it returned to be player when it contracted him the club boca junior BOCA JUNIORS FOOTBALL TEAM HIRED HIM . Here he played until he retired from football in october 1997.
Good attempt, Ezequiel!
You haven´t included your reasons why you admire him! Try to manage info for next pieces!
Final mark: 6.50

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Edmund was born in California on March 2nd, 1980. He's an american video game designer and artist. When he was a kid he went to Soquel High School. He is especially fond of drawing, his favorite subjects being monsters. Edmund spent most of his childhood with his grandmother whom considers to be the greatest source of support in his creative endeavors. McMillen's initial graphic work was in independent comics. While he has largely abandoned this field in favor of video games. He wasn't being recognized because of his video games until December 8th of 2008, when he released a flash version of his upcoming game “Super Meat Boy”. The development of this game began in January 2009. Edmund and his team called “Team Meat's“ didn't have enough money to get ahead with the proyect, but their determination and prosperity allowed them to launch the game in October 2010. Later in 2012 Edmund and Team Meat's took part in “Indie Game: The movie” which showed the years of suffering and hard work by him to make their dream. In the film his closing word are: “For the first time in my entire career I succesfully did something that, you know, that a majority of people liked. It wasn't an alienating experience (...) I can't help but think like i finally did something good. I know there's a kid out there who stayed up all night long for the game to come out and then didn't go to school the next day because he was so into playing it. And that even far exceeds my experiences when I was younger and to think that I could make something that could have and impact on this kid even creatively into thinking “Hey! I know two guys who made this, maybe I can make something too” It just cool, it's really cool ” The day of the launch he made more money that in the last three years of work, and I'm proud for him.
*Lucas Fandiño*

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Juan Pedro Lanzani was born on august 24, 1990 in the Belgrano, Buenos Aires.

He completed his studies at th belgrano day school and at the maria advertising institute. Lanzani used to play rugby during chIldhood, like his father and brothers, and was part of the alumni association team, although he droppedthe usual practice of this sport because of his artistic activities. ok but, is this actually relevant??

He is an actor and as  he used to be a member of the musical group called "Teen Angels". In 2004, he began his career as a model for Mimo & Co. In 2006, he made his television debut playing Tábano in the endless "Chiquititas" series of the Argentine producer Cris Morena.

From 2007 to 2010, he played the lead role of Thiago Bedoya Agüero in "Casi ángeles", which was broadcastED in four seasons by TelefE FOR FOUR YEARS BY TELEFE CHANNEL. The series was also taken to the theater- CASI ANGELES  was presented in the Gran Rex. While participating in "Casi Angeles" THIS TV SERIES, Lanzani became a member of the pop band "Teen Angels". The first two albums of the group, obtained the certification like platinum disc, and the third, was the fifth best-selling album in Argentina in 2009.

At the cinema this year, Lanzani will premiere 3 films, "Los último", "Solo se vive una vez" and "Hipersomnia".

~ANTONELLA VINCIGUERRA.~

Good attempt, Antonella!
Why do you admire him?
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final mark: 6.50 (SIX-FIFTY)

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My idol is Benjamin Amadeo. He was born on April 22nd, 1992 in Buenos Aires, Argentina. He is an actor, musician and singer. His parents are Eduardo Amadeo and Beatriz Orlowski, and he has got five older brothers.
He studied at the USAL University but he didn't finish the career. At the age of seventeen he began to act, he worked at "1000 millones" movie. I think he became famous at "Un novio para mi mujer" movie with Adrian Suar in 2008 and at "Casi angeles" TV serie of Cris Morena in 2009.
He began sing at "Tu cara me suena" programme of Telefe at 2013, he was very succesful. Three years later, he presented his first disc called "Vida lejana", under productions of Sony Music. His last concert was in Niceto Vega in his birthday. I went with my dad and we had a really good time.

Good attempt, Ana!
Why do you admire him?

Final mark: 7 ( seven)

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my idol is

Michael Phelps .Born on June 30, 1985, in Baltimore, Maryland, Michael Phelps competed in his first Olympics at the age of 15, as part of the U.S. men's swim team. He went on to win medals at the Olympic Summer Games in Athens, Beijing, London and Rio, accumulating a total of 28 medals—23 gold, three silver and two bronze—and setting the record for the most medal wins by any Olympic athlete. Phelps announced his retirement in 2012, however, in April 2014, he announced he was coming out of retirement and would return to professional competition at the age of 28. In June 2016, he clinched his spot on the 2016 U.S. Olympic swim team, making him the first American male swimmer to earn a spot on five Olympic teams. At the 2016 Olympic Games, he won one silver and five gold medals, becoming the oldest individual gold medalist in Olympic swimming history, as well as the first swimmer to win four consecutive golds in the same event, the 200-meter individual medley.

Why do you admire him??

good job, though!
7( seven)

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Justin Bieber is a Canadian pop star singer who was discovered via on YouTube. Born on March 1, 1994, in the small town of Stratford, Ontario, Canada. His debut album, My World, went platinum in the United States, Canada and the United Kingdom. Hit stories in november 2009.

Justin Bieber was raised by a single mom. Bieber, is a true overnight success, having gone from an unknown, untrained singer whose mother posted YouTube clips of her boy performing, to a budding superstar with a big-time record deal, all in just two year. But it was an obscure talent contest in his hometown, in which the 12 year old Bieber finished second that put him on the road to superstardom.

Why do you admire him?

Good job!
7 ( seven)

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Demetria Devonne "Demi" Lovato, is an actress, singer and songwriter. She's considered a pop, pop-rock and R&B artist, she also plays the piano, the guitar  and the drumbs.
She was born on August 20th in 1992, in Albuquerque, New Mexico; so she is 24 now and lives in Los Angeles, California.
In 2002, she began her acting career on the TV serie "Barney & friends". Five years later, she autitioned for "Camp Rock" and the TV serie "Sunny with a chance", from Disney Channel, and got both roles as the lead character.
After that, the "Disney girl", became so famous in her country and all around the world.  At the age of 16, in 2009, she'd made her first 40-city national tour.
In november of the next following year, she entered to a treatment center to started a treatment at a rehab center to  seek help for adictions, an eating disorder, self-harm and was diagnosticaded with a bipolar disorder too. A year later, that treatment had finished succesfully.
Nowadays, she has recorded 5 albumbs, written a book, and participed in a lot of TV programs, like "The X factor" as a judge, "Grey's Anatomy" and "Glee".

Good job! Why do you admire her?
7.50 ( seven- fifty)

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Ed Sheeran is a famous British singer and songwriter. He was born on February 17, 1991, in Halifax, England. His father John was an art curator and a lecturer and his mother Imogen was a cultural publicist who later became a jewelry designer. From an early age, Edward started showing interest in music. In his childhood he sang in the  local church and he learned to play the guitar. When he was just a teenager, he started writing his own songs and then he moved to London. According to him, Van Morrison's studio album "Irish Heartbeat" inspired him the most, and made him decide to choose a career in music.

His popularity increased especially after the release of his first album ‘+‘ and after he made a guest appearance on Taylor Swift's fourth studio album, Red. Ed Sheeran has received numerous awards for his performances. At the moment he is on tour presenting his new album ‘÷ ‘ (divide) "Castle Hill" and "Shape of You" were published as the first singles. I'm very excited because he will come to Argentina in a few weeks and I going to see him!
~Daiana Lume

Good job, Daiana!
Despite the extension, the info is relevant!

8.50 ( eight- fifty)

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My idol is lionel messi was born on June 24, 1987 in rosario argentina.
He is an argentinian football player Plays as a striker in FC Barcelona and the Argentine national team
he is considered as the best player in the world.
At age 13 he settled in Spain, where Barcelona agreed to pay for the treatment of the hormonal disease that had been diagnosed as a child.
After a rapid progression through the Barcelona Youth Academy.Made his official debut with the first team at age 17, in October 2004.
As an Argentine international, Messi has represented his country in seven major tournaments .At the youth level, he won along with his teammates the 2005 FIFA U-20 World Cup, tournament in which he finished as best player and top scorer with the U-20
He arrived with the Absolute Selection to the finals of the 2014 World Cup and the Copa America 2015, contests in which he was chosen best player of the tournament, in addition to reaching the final of the Centennial America Cup.
Why do you admire him?

Final mark: 7( seven)
by: Cristian Cipra

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Peter Gene Hernandez know as Bruno Mars is a singer, songwriter, music producer and choreographer. His musical genders are pop,reggae, funk, soul hip hop, disco, rock and rhythm & blues. He was born on October 8th in 1985, in Honolulú, Hawaii. Bruno Mars is the nickname that his father gave him, for the resemblance with the professional fighter Bruno Sammartino. He grew up in  a very musical family. His father, Pete, was a Latin percussionist from Brooklyn, and his mother, Bernadette, was a singer. In 1990 he was featured in The New York Times as the "Little Elvis, for his appearance as a little Elvis in the movie Honeymoon in Vegas in 1992. After graduating from high school, he decided to leave Hawaii for Los Angeles, California. Over his first few years in L.A., he struggled to make a breakthrough in the music industry,that's where he started writing songs for other singers. Mars finally broke out as a singer with the 2010 hit "Nothin' on You, wtih the rapper B.o.B.  He released his first solo single, "Just the Way You Are," from his debut studio album, Doo-Wops & Hooligans, released in October 2010. In 2012 , Bruno released his second album "Unorthodox Jukebox"  . Actually, he´s in the tour  around the world with his third album "24K Magic" .
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Justin Drew Bieber, is a CANADIAN pop singer and songwriter, Canadian WHO was discovered ON YouTube, by Scooter Baraun, who later became his manager. He was born on March 1, 1994 in London, Ontario, Canada. In 2009 he released his debut single "One Time" and in the same year released his first album "My World".

He was raised by his unmarried mother Pattie Mallette, but still has contact with his father Jeremy Bieber.

During his childhood he showed interest in hockey, soccer and chess, but he always maintained for himself his musical aspirations. Over the years he learned in a self-taught way to play the piano, drums, guitar and trumpet. At age 12, she participated in a local singing competition in Stratford, where she won second place after singing "So Sick". His mother decided to publish a video of the contest on YouTube so that relatives and close friends could see Bieber, and in late 2008 began to upload other videos of his son in which appeared playing songs of Usher, among others.

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