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My name is  peter Parker.
I'm a Student in Sydney.

I lost my wallet yesterday. A man stole the wallet.

Comments:
Good work Momoka!

Suggestion:
Instead of 'a man stole the wallet' in the last sentence, you could say:
'A man stole it'.

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my name is Nathan I a student, I am 19 old years and someone stole  my IPhone 8 white 128GB the day before yesterday  :( I am so sad because I bought there is 1 week. I hope I will find it. I pray everyday for someone to find my IPhone. please if someone finds my IPhone 8 I will give you 10'000 $. Seriously you can trust me. Have a nice day.

Comments:
Good work Nathan! Thanks for writing a lot.

Corrections:
My name is Nathan and I am a student. I am 19 years old and someone stole my iPhone 8 128GB, white, the day before yesterday :( I am sad because I bought it one week ago. I hope I will find it. I pray everyday for someone to find my iPhone. Please if someone finds my iPhone, I will give you 10,000. Seriously you can trust me. Have a nice day.

# data[].attributes.body
My name is Peter
I'm a student in Sydney.
My hobby is playing sport

Someone stole my wallet.
It had lots of important things in it like my gym card and my student card.
It was in my bag

# data[].attributes.body
My name is Peter, I'm studying at Sydney University. I'm 26 years old. Someone stole my wallet in Central Station in Sydney. It had lots of important things in it like ID Card and student card. If someone find it call me : +41215121511

Comments:
Great work Luca! You writing is very clear.

Corrections:
It had lots of important things in it like my ID card and student card. If someone finds it call me.

# data[].attributes.body
My name is peter i'm 26 years old
i'm student in university of sydney
my hobbies is gym  and music
someone stole my wallet

Comments:
Good work on your writing Valentin. Areas to work on: your punctuation and capitals.

Corrections:
My name is peter. I'm 26 years old.
I'm a student in the University of Sydney.
My hobbies are going to the gym and music.
Someone stole my wallet.

# data[].attributes.body
my name is peter
someone stole my wallet
it had lots of important things in it like  my student id card and gym card and music concert ticket
in the morning someone stole my wallet in the gym lockers

Comments:
Good work on your writing Manuel! Good work on writing so much.

Corrections:
My name is Peter.
Someone stole my wallet.
It had lots of important things in it like my student ID card, my gym card and music concert ticket.
In the morning someone stole my wallet in the gym lockers.

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Write Peter's statement to the police.
Complete the following sentences:
My name is _________
Someone stole _________
It had lots of important things in it like _________

Add two sentences on your own, in answer to these questions:
Where were you when it was stolen?
When did it happen?

My name is Peter

# data[].attributes.body
my name is peter
some one stole vallet in train station
it had lots of important things in it like :student id card, gym membership card,a few friends picture.
maybe it happen around 2 hours ago

Comments:
Good work on your writing!

Corrections:
My name is Peter.
Someone stole my vallet in the train station.
it had lots of important things in it like my student ID card, gym membership card, a few pictures of my friends.
Maybe it happened around 2 hours ago

# data[].attributes.body
My name is Peter. I'm an international student and I'm 26 years old.

This morning someone stole my bag. I was in the train station because I was going to school and someone grabbed my bag when I was waiting. I had my white laptop and my red wallet with my international id card, my gym card and my library card.

Comments:
Hi Anais! Great work on your writing.

Corrections:
...someone grabbed my bag while I was waiting ('while' is more common for an action in progress, which is interrupted by something else).

It had my white laptop...

All the rest is great!

# data[].attributes.body
My name is Peter. Someone stole my wallet. It had lots important things in it like my ID-card and my travel identification card etc.
I went in the library on the Friday morning when my wallet disappeared.

Comments:
Hi Noelia! Good work on your writing.

Corrections:
My name is Peter. Someone stole my wallet. It had lots of important things in it like my ID-card, my travel identification card, etc.
I went to the library on the Friday morning when my wallet disappeared.

# data[].attributes.body
My name is Peter. I'm a  Student in Sydney.
Someone stole my wallet. I wont go to the gym, bat I don't have my gym card. Do day I'm going to the music concert, wen I find ticket.

Comments:
Good work Nuhi!

Corrections:
Someone stole my wallet. ? I want to go to the gym, but I don't have my gym card. Today I'm going to a music concert, when I find the/my ticket.

# data[].attributes.body
My name is peter
I'm a student at University of Sydney
Yesterday, when I slept on the train and Someone stole my wallet
It had lots of important things in it like : My Student ID card, GYM card, Music concert ticket, Travel card and the receipt of Music Magazine.

Comments:
Good work Yothin! Thanks for your writing.

Corrections:
My name is Peter.
I'm a student at the University of Sydney.
Yesterday, while I slept on the train, someone stole my wallet.
It had lots of important things in it like my Student ID card, gym card, music concert ticket, travel card and the receipt of a music Magazine.