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Thank you very much for doing all the activities proposed during these three months. We have finished the course this way. I hope you have improved your knowledge in a second language and you can master it during the next courses that you do in the future inside or outside the university.

Good luck,

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Watch out!!!!
Here your corrections:

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Hi,

Thanks for your opinion analysis about transportation. A way to help the planet is by using public transportation. Now talking about solar powered planes people would’tt have to spend lots of money on gas to fill the tank. Also, they do not have to find a place for parking as well. To finish with, I can see how your reading skills are improving because you are using grammar correctly with different kind of connectors and complex vocabulary. However you need to keep working hard. Here some mistakes:

-  because isn´t very usual to see that be used in planes ??? Not clear (Cohesion problem)
- The travel that the Impulse 2 did, ??? Not clear (Cohesion problem)
- it travelS faster
- Off OF  course,

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All rigth!
No problems...
I hope you take advantange of the platform tio improve your english skills

;)

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1 For me, the technologies that use renewable energy help the environment  too much, is very interesting that they use the solar energy to plane travels because isn´t very usual to see that be used in planes. The travel that the Impulse 2 did, was a travel of 23 days of duration somthing that the fuel planes can´t do. I would like that this technology could be used in commercial travels but currently is in trial period.

2. For me the safest travel mode is the bullet train, it travel faster than the cars or motorcicle, it travel long distance in short time, it is comfortable also it can transport much passengers. The unsafest conveyance are the two or four weels vehicles like the motorcicles and cars because always be involved in too much accidents around the world.

3.Off course, with the big advances in technology that we have today we are close to get travel long distances in the universe. The humans have reached go out to the atmosphere also they have installed space stations like Rusia or EEUU did in the past.

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Hi!
Good! The participation in the second task is well written in terms of punctuation and spelling. However it is not difficult to infer that you used a translator to do the activity because there are some coherence, cohesion problems and also some wrong sentences traduced from Spanish to English. Next activities be careful and check several times what you write. I also hope you try to write by yourself your own ideas.
Here some mistakes:

- my profession is Engineer Systems ( I am a Systems Engineer)
- I am a calm person,  (quite person)
very serious, muy serio , ( traductor)
- I do not like (THE) breads or red apples because of their (IT'S)  taste.
- Last weekend I went to bike ride  ( NOT CLEAR)
thanks.

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My name is William Calderon, I'm 29 years old, my profession is Engineer Systems, I live in the city of Bogota in the neighborhood galerias, I like to ride a bicycle, the movies and to listen to music,I have a girlfriend.

I am a calm person, very serious, muy serio ,I have brown eyes and short hair.

I like Mexican food, burgers, sandwiches and sea food.

I do not like breads or red apples because of their taste.
Last weekend I went to bike ride to the municipality of La Calera, I went out to dinner with my girlfriend.
On weekends I usually do physical activities and enjoy various activities such as going to the cinema to stroll around the city.

thanks.

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Hi!

Good effort! Your participation in the oral task shows you know how to share personal information. It reflects knowledge about giving personal details, such as name, age, profession, likes, past and future intentions. Your grammar is good. What you really need to focus on is on Fluency and intonation. I suggest you to practice it with tonguetwisters.

I hope I can see progress in the next video activity.

Best regards,

Ivan Camilo Gonzalez