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Are there any words that rhyme in the poem? What you do notice about the pattern of the rhyming words?

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Are there any words that rhyme in the poem? What you do notice about the pattern of the rhyming words?

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If you could uplevel anything about poem 2 what would it be and why? 

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If you could uplevel anything about poem 2 what would it be and why? 

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*Don't forget it still needs to fit the success criteria.

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What is your favourite stanza in poem 4? Why do you think it's the most impactful stanza? 

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What is your favourite stanza in poem 4? Why do you think it's the most impactful stanza? 

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You have the chance to ask the poet, J.S, a question about his poem. Write a question that you would like to ask him: 

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You have the chance to ask the poet, J.S, a question about his poem. Write a question that you would like to ask him: 

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It was the most impactful because it didn’t have any rules and it was creative.

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There was words that rhymed like she knew she would never go far

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Yes there are rhymes in the poem some lines have

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There were a lot of words that rhyme like far and the 1,2 and 5 rhyme.

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I give it 2 stars because I like poems that have a message

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The last stanza becuase it was really impactful and I like onamatapea -mikael

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Onomatopoeia

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My

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Star and far

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Stanza 3 because it’s funny it says he doesn’t like alliteration but he using it

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Stanza 3 because it’s funny it says he doesn’t like alliteration but he using it

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A longer poem

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My FSIN 3 Because IISE

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A longer poem

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I noticed that poem 2 first second and fifth rhymed with the words star and far

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I would change the ending because I don’t want the star to give up

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I notice the words star and far rhyme I also notice down and clown

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I notice the words star and far rhyme I also notice down and clown

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I notice the words star,far,down and clown

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I notice the words star,far,down and clown

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My favorite part of the poem is that it is long 

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My favorite part of the poem is that it is long 

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Talia

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My favorite part of the poem is that you can just go free style so it’s fun

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I liked Poem 2 because the word “Star”

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My FSIN 3 Becuz IISE

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I dont like repetition because it is really funny and the spotlight is on it

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It sounds the same

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Star and far and down and clown

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I liked Poem 2 because of the word “star”

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HGH BT great DD d co tgbhy be BC u de za za cr by bh

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Ytdgrdgrd GGG rdgdrgxfgzdfszf

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Grdfzd Trd Fed sada sad a fkkk of KKK DCCC sds;\<.~!|~

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I like it because it says messy
Yousef

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“Far” is repeated at the end of the second and fifth sentence and

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F to ergfdgdrgtdhbhh

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Grdgrsgsrhtehthhhjjj u fd to setse

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Put more adjectives

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Ironic

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Onomatopoeia

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A BOOM and a POW

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I noticed that the words at the end of 3 and 4 rhyme and the words at the end of 2 and 5 rhyme.

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Why did you write it

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How long did it take you to publish this poem

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The last one because it is a good exit stanza

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What is your gramer score

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I would uplevel the vocabulary because poem 2 has very simple vocabulary

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Yes. I notice that the 1st 2nd and 5th line rhyme

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My favourite stanza is number 2

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Yes they do rhyme,I noticed the word far and star rhyme

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II like the repition one because it is really funny

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It’s always

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Star-Far-Far
Down-Clown

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Shrimp gobbler

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Star and far

Down and clown

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Far
Star

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I give ‘Star’ 3 stars because it was short and was not very interesting
Layla

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To make it more mature.

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How do you get the idea of all your Poems

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Ilove Spaggeti

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Stanza 2 .I like it more because I like the adjectives

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Star far down clown

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Why did you write it

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What was the inspiration for this poem

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More adjectives

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What was the inspiration for this poem and why is it called ocean creation

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I would make the last line have a different word at the end that also rhymes

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Star far
Down clown

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First paragraph because it’s funny and it says my fingers feel like sweaty sausages

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All of them at the end of the

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I like the second stanza because it has interesting adjectives

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Star and far
Clown and down

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Why do you not like repetition

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Yes the first one is star and far the second one is clown and Down 

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Yes the first one is star and far the second one is clown and Down 

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I like the exclamations like CRASH, ZAP and BANG!

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I like the exclamations like CRASH, ZAP and BANG!

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Yes there first one is str and far the second one is
Clown and down

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My favourit poem was the 1 one

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I wish i could blow it up with a ZAP

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Yes

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My favorite is ocean creation

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Make it about something else

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My favorite poem was I don’t like poetry because it was like a book and I love books

Hannah
I would rate this:
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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1)star-far
2)down-clown
I would remove the and on the 4th line to make it sound better