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APP 3      KAI COOMBER           WWW: I think that the way they described  the cat and their load out was good also.

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APP 3      KAI COOMBER           WWW: I think that the way they described  the cat and their load out was good also.

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EBI: it would be better if you could see the writing because the writing is very much the same as the background which makes it hard to review it.

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I will not use the boring layout.
I will add some videos on to my app because some people might like watching instead of reading

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App 3 out of that I would be adding my opinion to it, I wouldn't use the colours used.

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App 3 out of that I would be adding my opinion to it, I wouldn't use the colours used.

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App 2 I would use the colours out of this. One thing I wouldn't use would be the little facts I would extend them.

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App 2 I would use the colours out of this. One thing I wouldn't use would be the little facts I would extend them.

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I would not use anything from this app because the layout is confusing and it is hard to read because of how dark the writing and background is. I hate that it is muddled and all over the place

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I will not use the layout or the way they have got the text because you cant understand it.
I am going to use some of the interesting backgrounds that it has on it.

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I would use some of the creativeness from app 2 because eit makes it look good.
I would not use the wasting space because it makes it look really bad and un professional.

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I will not include maps to frind where things are only to find where the foods come from

I will include pictures of cooking and the recipes to go along with the picture

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I m am going to use bright colors what will stand out and try to make it make sense with my backround so they are the same
I am not going to make any mistakes on my website like clicking on the newsfeed button but actually playing videos or going on photos but taking you to home page

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I would use the layout of app 1 because it has its own description for each link and it is more laid out.

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App 1 out of that I would use the step by step guide, that was understandable. I don't think I would use they colours that they used

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App 1 out of that I would use the step by step guide, that was understandable. I don't think I would use they colours that they used

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I like it because it is neat and tidy.
im not going to use the colour scheme of app 3 cause sometimes it was hard to read.l.

Theo Driver

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App 1:
One thing I want to use is the colors and one thing I want to avoid is the lack of text.
App two:
One thing that I want to use is the shapes of the boxes and one thing I want to avoid Is the lack of text.
App 3:
One thing I want to use is the colors and one thing I want to avoid is that there isn't much on the map.

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I would use the neat layout of tabs on the app about art. I would not use the layout from the cats on bevcause it looked horible

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I would use the neat layout of tabs on the app about art. I would not use the layout from the cats on bevcause it looked horible

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I would like to use the tidy layout from this app because it was easy to understand.
I would not want to waste space like they did because it looks un professional.

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from app 2 I wont do what they did and leave lots of space in my app but what I will use is that I will tell them what the app is about.

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I will use

1)tabs
2)links
3)images
I wont use
1)links
2) plain colors
3)text that blends with images

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☺I will use nicely layed out tabs that all work.
I will avoid putting pictures in the background if it makes the writing hard to see or read. ♥♥♥

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I am not going to use the white background because it is very boring.
I am going to use the clear layout so things are easy to find out.

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APP 1
I found the links to images from app 1 useful and it could be useful in my app.

I didn't find the reason there was no text useful, I feel you need lots of text in a app to help explain things.

APP 2
I found the links to videos useful in this app seeing a video really helps explain instead of text.

I didn't understand the text since there wasn't much of it so that would not be useful.

APP 3

It has a big use of images and text which is very good and useful for an app.
It had the picture in the background so it was very hard to see the text.

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App 1: One feature I will use in this app is the tidiness and the structure of this app.
One thing I will avoid is the lack of information and boring white background.
App 2: One thing I will use in my app from app 2 is the colorfulness of this app it's very bright and happy.
One thing I will avoid about app 2 however, is how empty the app is and maybe add some more tabs.
App 3: One thing I will use from this app into my own app is The amount of tabs I think is very good and will keep the user want to stay on the app for longer
One thing I definitely wouldn't use in my own app is how crowded and the overload of pictures it has. It definitely won't suit my app theme.

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App one
I will add colors and pictures in my app.
I will avoid having tabs with no content.
App two
I will add tabs on the homepage.
I will avoid having links that don't work.
App three
I will add detail in my descriptions.
I will avoid having pictures underneath text as this is not very clear to the person installing my app.

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I will use the layout from app 1 because its very brief but shows a lot of photos etc. I will avoid sticking to one bit of a subject as it gets boring for any viewers. In app 2 I will use the easy and correct forms of text. I will avoid using the same text colour if likely. Finally for app 3 I will use some descriptive words and sentences. I will avoid making it hard for others to see what i'm writing due to the colour of the text or background picture/colour.

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Could make them more colourful but tone it down from app 3

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Able to provide accurate information and a working home screen/navigation bar

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App 2 is a good plan but there is not much colour and it needs to have colour otherwise nobodys going to use the sight because it looks very boring

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WWW: with an app that is dedicated to art it is good to see some famous paintings in one whole separate link.

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WWW: with an app that is dedicated to art it is good to see some famous paintings in one whole separate link.

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EBI: The app could be better if the links for the home page didn't crash all the time.   w

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App 3 is good because there is a lot of info and there are lots of tabs

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App 3 is good because there is a lot of info and there are lots of tabs

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App 3 is bad because the backing photos make the writing hard to see and read.

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this app was terrible you couldn't read the text because of the background and the colour of the writing. the app is all muddled.

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tilly hitchings
I think the writing is not very clear and should be changed because the dark background does not mesh well with the dark writing.

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I would also apply a video tutorial as some people may struggle reading.

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I would also apply a video tutorial as some people may struggle reading.

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I would avoid making it too bland as people would lose interest, leading to a bad business plan.

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App 3 had very descriptive writing and loads of pictures that you could see. They say which warrior cat they prefer which I find good because they give there own opinions.

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App 3 had very descriptive writing and loads of pictures that you could see. They say which warrior cat they prefer which I find good because they give there own opinions.

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EBI: I think that they need to change the writing colour , its hard to see because of the pictures in the background. Another thing I didn't like was that the writing was continues and there isn't that much full stop , It wasn't arranged in neat paragraphs so that made it hard to read too. by annalise

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WWW: I think that this app has more of an interesting background.
EBI: I cant read the text on the background that you have. I think that you should change the colour of the texts so that you can read it. it has to be clear.

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www: This app has lots of information and all the tabs work.
EBI: the writing is clearer because you cannot read the writing on top of the pictures.

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WWW: One of the things that went well was that the app creator has added A LOT of information and it has a lot of tabs.
EBI: A thing they could improve on is how crowded it is and you can't read the writing because it practically camouflages with the background . To improve on this they could add a different background which is subtle as the red writing is quite bold. It all look confusing and If I did purchase this app I would not keep it as it looks messy.
WHAT STOOD OUT: I think the tabs stood out as they were behind a white background.

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App 2
WWW: It correctly explains everything you need to know and how to draw it also explains how great art is in its many complex styles.

EBI: They could of explained what to do in text form a bit more and include a lot more text since it was mainly pictures and videos.

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The loading screen is easy to recognise. Also I like the layout. Possibly they could go into detail about different varies of food as they just done Turkish Delight sweets.

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App 2
WWW: I like the fact that there is videos on the app so you can learn how to do all different things.
EBI: I think that the layout of this app could be a bit more interesting.

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I would apply a nice background like app 3 but would avoid making the writing blurry on the picture.

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this app is very brief. I like the way you can read less information and look at pictures easily. They could improve by adding background colours.

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WWW: I think app 1 was really amazing because it had Turkish food which looks very delicious and it tells you how to make it

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WWW: I think app 1 was really amazing because it had Turkish food which looks very delicious and it tells you how to make it

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EBI: it could have more recipes

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www: This app uses good pictures and draws the person in.
EBI:  the pages to the app actually respond and work.

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app 2 WWW:is good because it shows u different types of drawings and also gives you videos about how to draw them. EBI: the bad thing is the information just tell u about how to use the app and not anything else.

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app 2 WWW:is good because it shows u different types of drawings and also gives you videos about how to draw them. EBI: the bad thing is the information just tell u about how to use the app and not anything else.

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AUSTIN YOUNGS

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This app is good because it has:
1. good information
2. nice dark colors
This app is bad because it has:
1. the picture is blurred out
2. not too much of the map

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WWW: I believe they showed the steps well and I believe that can in very useful for someone that wants to know how to make Turkish delight and they have also laid the app out very well by given info on the app to help people that haven't heard about the app before understand what the app is about.
EBI: I believe that to make the app better they should add something to the menu because it is blank and I think that it ruins the layout off the app and ruins the app also the picture of the app doesn't look like a Turkish delight.

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this app needs to use more detail like telling us what its about. it needs to use all of the space because it looks plain, the thing they did do well was that they added videos on how to draw a certain thing and that they used a gallery.

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WWW: I think app 2 was intriguing because it had beautiful art that people have painted 

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WWW: I think app 2 was intriguing because it had beautiful art that people have painted 

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EBI: it need to have more pictures of more info on the art tools

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was about warrior cats who survived and became warriors this is good if you like cats stories of how they became warriors
this is also good if you want  to tell you kids stories which are about adverture and being brave

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it has lots of tabs and pictures to show what the app is about but there is lots of writing on the homepage when they could of put another tab for all of the writing and the colour is red and goes over the picture so you cant really read what it says

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www: this app has a bunch of pictures and also has a useful video icon where there are tutorials on how to draw people, eyes etc..
Ebi: The app would be even better if it used up all the space, as there was a lot of empty space in the bottom of this app so that could of been used to add more tabs, pictures or anything really.
What stood out: The thing that stands out the most is when you first open the app a picture of some paint splashed onto a canvas which is very eye catching.

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on app 3 EBI:the writing doesn't go well with the background so its hard to see WWW:the good thing is that there is great description about warriors 

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on app 3 EBI:the writing doesn't go well with the background so its hard to see WWW:the good thing is that there is great description about warriors 

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AUSTIN YOUNGS

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www:shows lots of ways to draw and videos on drawing many different ways
ebi:could of explained more about it, it only has videos and pictures along with like 1 piece of text.

Sam tupper

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WWW: App 1 gives details of how to make Turkish delights with simple ingredients and in different flavours in a nice spaced out way.

EBI: The app would be better if she looked back on her website for things such as spelling mistakes and sentence errors.

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www: This app is clear, uses tabs and information.
EBI: The apps tabs work and all pages have content.

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App 2 had very nice font cover pictures and I liked the way that they thought wisely about what colours to use. They had very some notes to say what everything does what u could read. They included videos of art which I thought was pretty good so they can see others do it 

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App 2 had very nice font cover pictures and I liked the way that they thought wisely about what colours to use. They had very some notes to say what everything does what u could read. They included videos of art which I thought was pretty good so they can see others do it 

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EBI: extend the sentences that tell you about the tools for example where you put them or how to use them. by annalise

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Emma Post
I really liked the Turkish delight one...
WWW; the app was easy to get around useful information
EB; some spelling errors there isn't much information/help it only takes you to different places

the Worrior cat one wasn't that good
WWW; they have got the right information EBI; you cant see the writing and the pictures are blurry, the information
isn't that good

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App 1 is good because all the links work there is a gallery and it has plenty of information also there is the time and the tabs are well layed out

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App 1 is good because all the links work there is a gallery and it has plenty of information also there is the time and the tabs are well layed out

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It could improve by making sure there are enough photos in the gallery.

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EBI: it had too many words and you couldn't really see them

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This is a good app because it has:
1. different shapes
2. shows where the 0 and x are which is where you should go
This app is bad because it doesn't have
1. hasn't got any information
2.  there is not too much color

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app 2 is about art work and artist it has good tabs and a very good layout has pictures of artist and there Is also videos to watch if you are stuck on ideas of what to draw of art work

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app 2 is about art work and artist it has good tabs and a very good layout has pictures of artist and there Is also videos to watch if you are stuck on ideas of what to draw of art work

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I will add pictures and tabs to my app. 

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I will avoid making tabs that don't work and pages with no content.

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is about art  and called art star you can watch videos and look artisc pictures it is aimed at people who like art and very good if you want to become an artic so you could have good artistic skills

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App 1 was very good, it had loads of information on how to make Turkish delight. The steps they added were very easy to follow and it was set out very clear to see that. I liked the fact that they thought of all different one and not just one.

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App 1 was very good, it had loads of information on how to make Turkish delight. The steps they added were very easy to follow and it was set out very clear to see that. I liked the fact that they thought of all different one and not just one.

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EBI: Next they could think about adding some colour to the back.   by annalise

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I think this app could use more detail because it is boring they should add more recipes and images that match them. they need to use the space! the thing that they did do well was that it was all very consistent and tidy through out the app.

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App 1 is about Turkish delight it had tabs to take you to different places and explains where Turkish delight comes from and they different flavours it comes in so it think this is a good app layout for Turkish delights

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I think the app about Turkish delight is okay. I think it lacks more colour that stands out and it also needs to have more space being used. I think it needs more pictures and also it could definitely have a more broad theme like cakes. This would increase the amount of information in the app and would make it more interesting and it would give it more pictures.
www: It has a consistent theme throughout which makes the whole app seem more polished and tidy.

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App 1 is very good but it needs a few adjustments to make it better

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WWW: I think the layout is nice and simple for people to use and find out what they want to know.
EBI :I think that the background should be something more interesting , so a different colour other than white.

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app 1 was about Turkish delight and was teaching you how to make and just generally talking about Turkish delights this is good for people if they like Turkish delights or just are from turkey.

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app 1 was about Turkish delight and was teaching you how to make and just generally talking about Turkish delights this is good for people if they like Turkish delights or just are from turkey.

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This app is good because it has:
1. good information
2. bright colors in the writing
This is also a bad app because it has:
1. a blurred out picture
2. it doesn't have a lot information

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I like the way they go into detail in the app and how the tabs are very believable. However, I believe they should sort out the background colours and text colours as its very hard to read. At one point there was a cat background but the writing was completely unable to be seen like the text colour was a deep purple and the cat was grey and black and a really dark blue. Also some pictures are not on the app so unless you want to read heaps of text you wont know what the app is about.

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This app is good because its clear what its telling you  about.
1. I will add tabs to my app.
2. I will add information on what my app is about.

3. I will avoid making tabs that don't ave

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app 1 WWW:I like the first app because I think it has a good way oh telling people about Turkish delight there are links you can go to and it tell you how to make it and different link bring u to a store page the writing also goes well with the back ground. EBI:but it doesn't tell you whats it about on the first page and there is not a title saying what the app is going to be about and he/she didn't use up all the space and left about half of the page with blank.

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app 1 WWW:I like the first app because I think it has a good way oh telling people about Turkish delight there are links you can go to and it tell you how to make it and different link bring u to a store page the writing also goes well with the back ground. EBI:but it doesn't tell you whats it about on the first page and there is not a title saying what the app is going to be about and he/she didn't use up all the space and left about half of the page with blank.

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AUSTIN YOUNGS

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Check out the new App I've created on AppBuilder - warrior cat secrets

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it is an information app about warrior cats warrior cats in real life the first 1-6 books and unknown facts about the cats the new forest (where they live) the 10 most popular warriors my favourite warrior (tiny) this app is for people aged 9 -16

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Check out the new App I've created on AppBuilder - ArtStar

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Check out the new App I've created on AppBuilder - Turkish Delight