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Hi there BUBBY!

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I need to improve on my organization

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I need to improve on ideas.lt makes you a great writer so your paragraph can be unique and understanding

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I need to improve on Ideas because my ideas are not that good.

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Me need to improve word choice.....

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The writing trait is word choice because sometimes I do not get the improved word example making the word to enthusiasm.Also sometimes because it is hard for me to think of the improved word and of what to write and what comes next after a sentence/word or paragraphso it  is also ideas that I have a problem in aside from word choice.

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a. I need to improve on organization.
b. The 6+1traits can help me to become a better writer when l practice on organization and keep my work organized.

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I need to improve on ideas because I have very little of them and word choice because I am not really creative.

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I need to improve on organization.it can help me be a better writer by making it understandable tö others.

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I need to  work on my organization because
It is very confusing.the 6 plus 1 trait can help me understand organization

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I need to improve on wordchoice  and ideas. The 6+1 traits can help me organize my writing and make it more interesting.

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I need to improve on organization because I don't know how to properly put my sentences where it's supposed to be. The 6+1 typing traits can make me a good writer because you can properly put your sentences properly and you can make your sentences come alive.

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I need to improve in word choice because I always chose Tired words

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A.I can improve on ideas because sometimes it's not interesting.
B.The traits of writing can help me because it expresses my feelings and ideas on making paragraphs.

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Word choice. Because my words that I use to write are usaly tired words.I get butterflies in my stomach when I write paragrap

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Ideas because its hard to think of sometimes
B)the traits can help me by helping others understand

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A)I need to improve on ideas. My ideas are not interesting enough.
B)This can help me because it tells me to write better. Also, it reminds me of my mistakes so I can improve. It helps make my paragraph clearer.

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I need to and 6+1 writingi traits help me write properly.
mprove on organization because I get messed up.

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Ideas

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I need to improve on ideas.The 6+1 writing traits by giving me the steps on how to become a better writer.

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ANTON     1.   I need to improve on ideas.

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ANTON     1.   I need to improve on ideas.

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2. It can help me by making it oraganized and good sentence.

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I need to improve on word choice because I mostly use tired words like big,small,etc.
The 6+1 traits help me become a better person by making me understand myself or understand the things I write better.

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Word choice,because I don't use rich words that much in paragraphs and even sentences and even sometimes I don't know the meaning of that word I can improve by practicing how to be used to writing rich words in paragraphs

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I need to Improve on Word choice because I always use TiErD wOrDs!

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1.) I need to practice ideas because I only have few ideas.And some of my ideas are not creative.
2.)6+1 traits can help me become a better writer because it can

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I need to improve on word choice because I usually don't use words like enthusiastically and expressions like butterflies in my stomach which means being nervous.

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I need to improve in word choice beacause I usually write tired words and I don't know that much good words. The 6+1 writing traits help me be a better writer beacause it tells me strategies to help me write a narrative paragraph .

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I would choose word choice,because my word choice I always use tired words like:big,cool and nice.

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I need to improve on organization because I always right it messy

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1.organization because I am so messy
2.the writing trait