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Hi dear mom:

im in playa del carmen from holliday i come with my friends from the university we are in the hotel villa del mar it is really wonderful the beds are so big and confortable

in the hotel there is a fantastic restaurant the food is delicius, i ate ceviche fish and my friends coktail

in the afterh we visited a beuatiful beach and swan for several hours.

now is the 9:00 and we going to go to dance

see you later mom. kisses

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Hi mom

how are you? Iam on holiday chiapas is beautiful and peoples they are friendly. The restaurants are good, the food is exellent. Hotel near is beautiful and stately.

see you soon, I LOVE.

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Chiapas, Chiapa de Corzo, Canyon of Sumidero, Kayating - Photo by Secretaria de Turismo de Chiapas

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Hi, Henry! How are you?  I am on holiday in Paris. It´s a beautiful city and the people are nice and friendly. The restaurants are good and very cheap. I´m in a hotel Ritz near the Opera Garnier. The romos are very big and wonderful. I´m enjoy it. See you son!

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hi jessica how are you? i'm in Cozumel Mexico, and i have a good time in here, It is the most a beautiful place that i see ever! you have to come to see this paradise, yesterday, i went came to the beach, and believe me or not, the whater is clear! i want to see you, I miss you a lot!! see you soon, love you

Gloria dzul

Gloria faltan más adjetivos y frases de arriba, veo que tienes verbos en pasado, no te compliques no hemos llegado al tema de los verbos en pasado. Guíate del ejemplo que tengo puesto. Favor de corregir.

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hi grandma how are you? I'm having a good time, I'm in Tokyo, it's a nice city and people is friendly and weather is cold the city is it's clean and the food is it's raw, I'm staying at the hotel mandarin oriental ,the hotel is big, and the food is it's better her than outside, i'll come back the next week. i love so much

Eduardo

Los nombres propios van en capital letters Mandarin Oriental, People es una palabra en plural que no lleva is.

Good job

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Hi Carlos.

How are you? I am on holiday in cancun it's amazing, I go in the beach, it's cool, and people are nice and fun. The restaurants are good, the food is delicius and cheap. Hotel near it is confortable.see you soon¡ love.

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Hi familia

I hope you are fine. , I'm in the Camp nou stadium of FCBarcelona today play the champions league, play and i can see Lionel Messi and Marc-andre Ter Stegen my favorite players play againts Real Madrid but we won the previous game so i am confident we will today also. beareth them autographed shirts. bye

Jared no veo las expresiones de arriba ni los adjetivos me da la impresión que no leíste las instrucciones. Favor de corregir.

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Hi Dad

Im in playa del carmen with friends from high school, we celebrate the birthday of one of my friends corona sunsets, we are in a Hotel villas del mar,the beach are beautiful and delicious food, In the morning I will drive to cancun to continue holidays.

kisses Dad

Pedro no veo las expresiones de arriba y hacen falta más adjetivos me da la impresión que no leíste las instrucciones. Favor de corregir.

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Hi dad

How are you? I hope well, I'll tell you about my weekend. We went to visit my aunt Lupe in Tulum is really nice there, we visited some beautiful archaeological areas, and somewhere else as well like the beach but it was dirty, full of kelp and we weren't able to swim but we went to a cenote called Zacil-Ha it was not very big but it was nice we swam there, played, had lunch and in the afternoon we went back to Chetumal and that was my weekend. Take care dad! See you when you get back from your work.

Faltaron expresiones de arriba. Esta frase no se entiende."somewhere else as well like the beach"

Tu writing está en pasado no hemos visto los verbos en pasado sin embargo los usaste bien.

Good job !

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How are you? We're on holiday in Chiapas, It's a very beautiful city, and the people are fantastic, the food are delicious and very cheap. The hotel is very nice, with a spectacular view.

The scenery is beautiful I fell in love with this place.

I mis you so much friend, I send the photo so you can see the beautiful scenery.

You seon

I hope to see

La página señala que tu writing fue editado hoy sábado y me acuerdo que yo lo vi ayer igual con letras rojas y signos. Bueno no importa solo recuerda que hay que cumplir en tiempo y forma con las tareas. Con respecto a tu writing las palabras en negritas son las que te hicieron falta, también te hicieron falta más adjetivos ya que usas beautiful para casi todo. Favor de poner más adjetivos.

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Hi Jorge! How are you? I'm in Bacalar city, you should come, the people are friendly, the restaurants are many, and they are cheap, the food is delicious, I am in a nice hotel near, see you soon!

your little sister.

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Hi Jetro! How are you? I'm in South Korea, it's very beautiful, and the food is delicious, i know you love the ramen. The traditions are interesting and the people are friendly.Today I Visited the street Insa-Dong,I found extraordinary paintings. The restaurants are very smart, the waiters are very friendly and the hotel is near the main Korean Square .

I miss you so much. I will visit one day.

Have fun and be happy. Blessings!

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Hi Karen How are you doing? I'm writting you because I want to tell you my experience about visiting Playa del Carmen. Well, Last month, I went to that place with my whole family, and my cousins. First, we arrived to a nice hotel near to the center of the city, then, we went for a walk with my sister, and my cousins. In the afternoon we went to the beach for a few time and finally we got back to the hotel. The next day, we went to X-caret park, it was really amazing because I had never been in a place like that. Firs we visited the sanctuary, we saw the animals, and we took several pictures with the places and foreign people. Finally, we went to the underground river, and I was so scared because I didn't know how to swim, but finally I did, and it was great. Well, Karen, it was the best place I ever been. I hope you to answer my letter. Truly yours, Diana!!

Diana aunque tu escrito está muy bien y parece más de una estudiante de nivel inglés intermedio que introductorio, me da la impresión que no leíste las instrucciones tu escrito no tiene que ver con lo que se pide en las instrucciones de arriba. Por favor corrige, por favor ya no faltes a clase o corres el riesgo de perder el curso.

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Hi Mom! How are you?

I'm in Mahahual, you know, I amworking again, but, it is time to take a break jajajajaja! Mahahual today it is a beautiful place, the sea, the sand, the sun, wow! It is very hot here. The people are very friendly and the food is amazing, and it is free :-D.

Tonight I'll be at the Hotel Matan Kaan with a Chemistry man. I hope you are ok and soon we come to vacation together, as before. I miss you.

Kisses Mommy :-*

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Hi Ana!!

How are you sister? I miss you

I am in Playa del Carmen, here in Quintana Roo, I came to visit our sister Rosario and go to the beach whit my friends, the beachs are very awesome and beatifuls, i love playing voleyball here. I´m staying in the Paradisus Hotel that is one of the best hotels in Mexico. Yesterday we went to the restaurant called "La Cueva del Chango" is very good and the food is delicious but is very expensive $$ :p. Here the people are very friendly and funny, i hope that the next year you can come to Mexico and visit Playa del Carmen i sure that you will love this city.

See you soon.

Love, Angel your handsome brother hahahaha.

Very good job Akadio! No hemos visto los verbos en pasado sin embargo, al inicio lo usaste bien pero en la siguente oración escribisté "go" cuando deberia ser went por seguir hablando en pasado. El plural de beach es "beaches", te falto una "u" beautiful y no lleva "S" ya que los adjetivos no se pluralizan.Por ultimo el sujeto I siempre va en mayúscula.

Great job ! =)

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Hi Mom!

How are you? We're on holiday in Cozumel, Quintana Roo! It's a beautiful city and the people are very friendly. It's hot here. The restaurants are very good and they’re very expensive. We're in a hotel Casa Mexicana near the Maritime terminal. The rooms are very beautiful and they're very big. The food is very delicious. We're enjoying the hotel pool.

We miss you. See you soon!

Love Kevin y Wendy.

Congratulations Wendy! Excellent Job. It is perfect. =) Justamente asi era la tarea.

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Hi LULIIIII!!! How are you sissy? I miss you so much:( I want to tell you everything about my trip, I am in Cancun, it's so pretty sissy we need to come soon as possible ok? The people here is so nice and cute, the restaurants are soo good specially the seafood I love it, and they aren't very expensive.

I'm staying in the oasis hotel, it is so big and it has so many activities, you never get bored, the hotel is in front of the beach, excellent right? Well sissy I think that's all right know I'm going to a big party in the beach I think it is going to be awesome, love you so muuuch💗

Talk to later, Alexa

Congratulations Alexa! Very good job. Just remember "people are" no people is and you forgot the subject "it ". Wonderful writing.=)

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Hiiiii caridaaaad!

Hey, how are you? I hope you are fine. Well...i i don't know where to start because it's happened me a lot of good things haha I TRIP TO JAPAAAAN! last week, and Iwent to this beautiful and nice crepa store (?) i swear! this is the paradise,the crepas was very delicious and not cheap but not expensive so it was ok. The streets of harajuku are so colorful,lolita's ???were everywhere and they was so kind and cute, the sweetest persons that i have meet. The people in Akihabara looks so sooo freaky but , you know it's ok because i feel like one of they haha Japan is so mystic and is very technologic, i want to live there :( but every dream has an end and the sad part of my trip was my departure T-T ooooh i was about to forget...the place where i stay omg it looks so fancy and luxurious and the best part is that where so cheap and the name is: Remm Akihabara. this turns so long so goodbye my little buddy! aha kisses and hugs.

Alondra creo te excediste escribiendo de más, aunque te complicaste usando los verbos en pasado un tema que aun no vemos.
Muy bien por usar muchos adjetivos y frases de arriba. Very good writing =)

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Hi yocelin

I'm very happy .last week I travaled trip to cancun ,this place is very nice, with many big hotels,its beaches are blue with clean water, the wawes are big, the people are friendly l met a tall beautiful friendly invite you to eat in the "poblano" restaurant the meals are very delicious rich, The Plaza is big with many clothing stores l hope that this experience happens again.bye you take care friend.

Mirian tu escrito está bien entendiste la idea de la tarea, sin embargo, siento que te complicaste al usar verbos en pasado un tema que aun no vemos. Esta frase no se entiende "met a tall beautiful friendly invite you" En general hiciste buen trabajo. Very good job =).

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Hi mirian

How are you ? we are in the city of cancun.

I tell you that cancun it is a big city with beautiful beaches for some asoliarse .The restaurantes are sold small and delicious rich food.We walk in some beautiful shopping stores .There are places where the stores are ugly .goodbye friend.

with love yoselin and mirian .

Yoselin se aprecia el esfuerzo que hiciste por escribir. Muy bien por usar los adjetivos, te falto poner una que otra frase de arriba. Ten cuidado de no mezclar palabras inglés y español. La ultima parte que esta en negritas no la entendí Aun asi considero que hiciste un buen escrito solamente corrige esos detalles que esten negritas.

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Hi Jeni.

How are you? I'm on vacation in Madrid,Spain. It's a nice city, but it is cold. The people is very friendly. The supermarkets are big. There are some expensive stores. There are many interesting museums. There are a lot of cheap restaurants and the food is delicious . I'm in a comfortable hotel near the Santiago Bernabeu stadium. The stadium is very big and beautiful. Tomorrow I will go to the Plaza de Cibeles. Are you in Brazil? I hope soon to see you again!!. Kisses. Nidia Perez

Congratulations Nidia !! very good job ! Un detalle people es plural, muy bien por usar nuevos adjetivos y por usar there is , there are no hemos visto ese tema pero veo que ya sabes como se usa. =) Wonderful Job !

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Hi Iojany

How are you? We´re in xcaret !

it´s a beautiful and big, the people are friendly, but it´s very hot here.

The restaurants good and very cheap. The food es very rich.

We are in a amall hotel near the beach.

xcaret is very nice, but it´s very expensive.

I hope i see you soon....

I miss you... :(

lots of love...manuel...

Odemaris tu writing está incompleto, favor de terminarlo.

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Hi Mom!

How are you? Hope you're well!. Paola and I we are in Mahahual, Quintana Roo.

The place is small and beautiful, the are not many places for entertainment but it is nice, people are friendly and the sea is beautiful. It is a very hot day, so it's perfect to be on the beach, although the sea has much sargasso and gives us itching. There are many restaurants to the seaside all look good, but some are expensive and others cheap, but what we loved is that everyone has free internet, the food is very delicious rich especially the shrimp ceviche. We rented a cabin, and it was so hot when we were there.we die of heat when we are there, we paid very little for it. We're really enjoying the trip, I hope you're happy with your friends in new york.

We miss you and hope to see you soon.

Hugs and kisses. With love Paola and Caribe.

Very good job Caribe! =) unos pequeños errores. hay una frase que está en negritas me imagino la quisiste escribir de manera literal, vi que usaste oraciones en pasado , no hemos llegado a ese tema pero veo que lo hiciste bien aunque no hacia falta.

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Hieeee Mom!

How are you? I hope you're great! My sister and I we're on summer fest Cancun, Mexico.

It's so fantastic, the city, the beaches, the malls. the people, the food, everything! Once we visited meet Hooters at Plaza La Isla, and the food is very good, but a little expensive. Being there we visited meet the stores, OMG, so many brands very expensive, we're in love with that. Then we went to the hotel Oasis and we ate everything haha. After that we swam in the pool, because it was a very hot day. Anyway we're great here, I hope you're enjoying your trip in Bahamas.

We really miss you mom.

XOXO. Dany and Emilli.

Dany aunque no hemos visto el tema de los verbos en pasado, los usaste muy bien. Very good job =)

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Hi Yasmine.

How are you? We´re on holiday in Washington D.C.

It´s a beautiful city and the people are nice,but it´s very cold. The restaurants are good and they are very cheap. The food is nice. We are in a big hotel near the White House. We´re not in the hotel now. We are at the Lincoln Memorial Reflecting Pool and we have free WiFi. Are you in Turkey?

See you soon

Love Will and Esme