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Nightlife is always related with rumba, discoteques and alcohol, but there are so many things to do, furthermore. This will includes the offer of activities from the place and a design in which people's experiences might be improved and increased. Its important to sign the alternative activities to the visitors, such as restaurants, theaters, pubs, lounge bars. and also attractions at the public spaces.

There will be neccessary to change the simply street into a carnival as it happens on New Orleans and Rio de Janeiro, and the static theater show into and interactive performance, just like the cirque du soleil or mouling rouge. And when the hunger make presence there will be restuarants, pubs and the lounge bars looking to attractions at the public realm from a terrace at the third or fourth level on a building, similarly to "El Zocalo" in Taxco and many others in Barcelona and Amsterdam.

Moreover, to increase the people's experiences crucial to create landmarks connected to multipurpose nodes including lightning fountains, stands, portable screens to movie watching, platforms to performance and singing.

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Last year I travelled to Mexico, to Taxco de Alarcon at three hours from the federal district. I was there for an Urban development congress for about five days. Since my arrival to this beautiful city found the greatest landscapes, with awesome sights, wonderful places, and many things to do especially at the MonteTaxco Hotel.
Located in front of El Zocalo square and the cathedral, and many typical restaurants, and discoteques and touristic places. This hotel has five levels connected by terraces, offers different experiences to the guest, such as the pool and spa, the bar, the restaurant, the business center and pretty good suites.
But even a great place is not perfect. I had a bad experience when I was checking out. I was paying with MasterCard when the wireless signal failed and my card was locked. I didn't have cash, so one friend had paid for me, that was embarrassed and disgusting.
Only at two days later since my arrival to Colombia, my card was able to use.
In my opinion, this hotel is just a small part of the staying, and the hotel is good. But for people who will visit Taxco, is better to bring a lot of cash, and the hotel must repair their wireless signal because situations like that turns negative a good trip.

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This French comedy directed by Daniel Cohen and starred by Jean Reno  and Michaél Youn, was make debut in 2012.
The movie presents  the intenction of an amateur chef named Jacky Bonnot(Michaél Youn) and its dream of cooking while its trying to keep many jobs to provide money for his family. At the same time there is a senior chef named Alexandre Lagarde(Jean Reno) who needs save his restaurant an his relationship with his daughter, but the day when they knew each other, everything will change.
Definitively, this movie is going to give you a great moment. In my oponion, people should see this comedy that represents an hilarious expression of perseverance from two men to get their dreams.

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Comparison between Science-fiction and romantic movies

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Comparison between Science-fiction and romantic movies

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Science-fiction is the greatest movie genre. Some sci-fi movies can show you another worlds, new languages andmany unussual situations. There is an example, in James Cameron's Avatar, the plot is about how the human razecan destroy other civilizations taking advantage from high technology, with an unique excuse "to make money".Something thought-provoking is the way that indigenous people fight invaders to protect their world knowingabout their technological inferiority and how an undercover agent assimilates their culture change his thinking anddefends the planet from human attacks. Definitively science fiction are wonderful, because mix action, drama,love, fantasy,comedy into one movie.

Quite opposite, the contemporary romantic movies offer unbelieveable plots showing love as a mixture ofteenager treacle between two well looked persons. To give you an example the Twilight saga, introducing a 400years old vampire and a werewolf, both have fallen in love with a teenage girl, and both fight to get her love.Something weird and really stupid. In my opinion, don't loose your time watching this movie genre.

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1.Does the introduction tell you enough information about the background information of the film? like director, content, cast, setting, language, year, etc.  EXCELLENT
2. Does the body paragraph  give you relevant information about the film plot? VERY GOOD
3. Does the concluding paragraph give you valid reasons to watch this film? NEEDS IMPROVEMENT
4. Is the film review organized in three paragraphs? NEEDS IMPROVEMENT
5 Do the paragraphs follow the structure:  topic sentence- supportive sentences- concluding sentence? GOOD
6. Does the film review have new expressions, transitions or linking words? VERY GOOD
7. Is the grammar and overall structure of the paragraph mostly accurate? VERY GOOD
8.  Write a general comment with your opinion about it:
Something positive is you gave enough information about the film background. You gave interesting information about the plot and use new vocabulary and expressions.
Something you could do better is: the film review is not really organized in three paragraphs. There isn't clear structure of  background info, plot and personal opinion, it's mixed. The conclusion is not a paragraph it is just a sentence.
Well done.
DIANA GUTIERREZ

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1. Does the topic sentence effectively introduce the topic:  Suggestions for visitors coming to colombia? EXCELLENT
2. Does the topic sentence engage your interest?EXCELLENT
3.  Are the supporting ideas coherent with the topic sentence? EXCELLENT
4. Do the supporting ideas give enough information about the topic and the main point? EXCELLENT
5.  Is the order of the paragraph  clear and effective? EXCELLENT
6.  Is there any information missing in the paragraph? NO
7. Is the grammar and overall structure of the paragraph mostly accurate? VERY GOOD
8. Does the paragraph have a concluding sentence?EXCELLENT
9  Write a general comment with your opinion about it:
Something positive is: You followed the paragraph structure learned in the course. You have a topic sentence, supporting sentences and a conluding sentence. You used different linking words. It's an interesting and well organized paragraph.
Something you could do better is: Don't leave spaces since it's a single paragraph. Question mark is used only at the end.
check word form: enjoy/ than enjoying.

EXCELLENT JOB! WELL DONE
DIANA GUTIERREZ

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1. Yes, He put the necessary information
2. Yes, but you need to expand information about the film.
3. For me not, because you only said two things about the movie and I think Is necessary to explaind that say more things about the film to convince the people to watch this.
4. No, the paragraph is only organized in one part.
5. Yes, the paragraph have the correct structure.
6. The paragraph have new expressions, but is missing linking words, and transitions.
7. Yes, just correct some expressions, and agree puntuation.
8. Something you could do better is improve and organize your ideas and explain more about the things you're saying, also don't forget the correct puntuation and the structure of the paragraph.

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Le Chef Official US Release Trailer 1 (2014) - Jean Reno Movie HD

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Le Chef Official US Release Trailer 1 starring Jean Reno, Michaël Youn, Raphaëlle Agogué and directed by Daniel Cohen. A veteran chef faces off against his restaurant group's new CEO, who wants to the establishment to lose a star from its rating in order to bring in a younger chef who specializes in molecular gastronomy.

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1. Does the introduction tell you enough information about the background information of the film? like director, content, cast, setting, language, year, etc.
2. Does the body paragraph  give you relevant information about the film plot?
3. Does the concluding paragraph give you valid reasons to watch this film?
4. Is the film review organized in three paragraphs?
5 Do the paragraphs follow the structure:  topic sentence- supportive sentences- concluding sentence?
6. Does the film review have new expressions, transitions or linking words?
7. Is the grammar and overall structure of the paragraph mostly accurate?
8.  Write a general comment with your opinion about it:
Something positive is...
Something you could do better is...

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1. Yes, he put the topic sentence clear
2. Actually no, because is very short and there's not a lot of important information
3. Yes, they are, but you need to agree more suport sentences.
4. Yes, but you need to conect the information you say to the topic sentences.
5. Yes, you just need to expand your ideas and information that you want to say.
6. Yes, is missing information, for example what kind of sports you can play there, and what natural park you're talking about, because in colombia there're a lot of them.
7.  Yes, you need to agree some words that you're missing for example "go a party".
8. Yes, but also you need to expand your conclusion.
9. In my opinion is a good paragraph, and you need to expand the information, and to be specific about the thing you're talking about.

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Last year I travelled to Mexico, to Taxco de Alarcon at three hours from the capital district. I went there for an Urban development congress for about five days. In this beautiful city you'll find the greatest landscapes, with awesome sights and wonderful places, especially from the MonteTaxco Hotel.
Located in front of El Zocalo square and the cathedral, and many typical restaurants, and discoteques and touristic places. This hotel five levels connected by terraces, offers different experiences to the guest, such as the pool and spa, the bar, the restaurant, the business center and pretty good suites.
But even a great place has some trouble, I had a bad experience when I was checking out. I was paying with MasterCard when the wireless signal failed and my card was locked.I didn't have cash, so one friend paid for me, that was embarrassed.
Only two days later since my arrival to Colombia, my card was able.
That situation turned negative a good trip.
In my opinion, this hotel is just a small part of the staying, and the hotel is good. But people who will visit is better to bring a lot of cash o pay with the check in. And the hotel must repair their wireless signal.

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1.Does the topic sentence effectively introduce the topic:  Suggestions for visitors coming to colombia?
2. Does the topic sentence engage your interest?
3.  Are the supporting ideas coherent with the topic sentence?
4. Do the supporting ideas give enough information about the topic and the main point?
5.  Is the order of the paragraph  clear and effective?
6.  Is there any information missing in the paragraph?
7. Is the grammar and overall structure of the paragraph mostly accurate?
8. Does the paragraph have a concluding sentence?
9  Write a general comment with your opinion about it:
Something positive is...
Something you could do better is...

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This French comedy directed by Daniel Cohen and starred by Jean Reno  and Michaél Youn, was make debut in 2012. The movie presents  the intenction of an amateur chef named Jacky Bonnot(Michaél Youn) and its dream of cooking while its trying to keep many jobs to provide money for his family. At the same time there is a senior chef named Alexandre Lagarde(Jean Reno) who needs to improve its restaurant, but the day when both knew it, every will change.
Making promises to her wife, Jacky Bonnot will find his vocation as a chef, but not in an easy way. He might prepare the most delicious dishes, and that will take him to fame. But, while Jacky tries, Alexandre is going to need to save it's relationship with his daughter.
Definitely this film represents the enforcement, perseverance, and love.

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Visiting natural parks is better than enjoy cities.  Second draft.

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Visiting natural parks is better than enjoy cities.  Second draft.

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¿Have you ever come to a natural park in Colombia?
Natural parks are the best places if you want to be unplugged  from the crowded cities and make contact with wild life. More over, you might be aware that there is no pollution and traffict  jams, even more, you can find it at less than two hours . Furthermore if you come to places like desert of "La Tatacoita" and "Las rocas de Suesca", you may camp and play extreme sports , also go party.
As you see, there is no point of comparison between cities and natural parks, because those are the best