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My opinion is they should speak louder because we could hardly ever hear her and the girl doing the birds should stay still more.

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The girl with the purple top should practice her lines more.

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you need to practice your lines more.

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i liked that the camera was still and the girl in the red jumper was good but they could improve by speaking louder and not forgetting there lines

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they should be louder and practice there lines

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they were good at acting but they need to be louder

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i wish they would talk louder!!!

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The thing I thought was good was that the girl in the red jumper did not forget her lines

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My opinion is the girl with the purple top should speak louder

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They were pretty good at there lines. You cant hear them very well...

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I think that they need to be a little bit louder and clear!

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face expression and eye cordnation . script.

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We think that they need to remember there lines better

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I wish they would be louder.
The camera is so still.

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practice your lines before you film be louder and more confident.

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The camera's nice and steady, not jumping around!

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I wish I could hear the performers!