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I love your logo! Your typography flows well with your site. Your layout is very organized and clean.

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Your website is beautiful. The transitions are really nice and the layout is lovely too.

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Homepage: Overall everything is clean and in its place. I like the big image in the hero and that you see it right away.

Performers Page: I love the way you used the arrows to collapse and show information. And you included instructions in case the user doesn't know what to do. (That red h tag could maybe be a tad smaller though.) Really well done!

Show Info: Great job organizing info on this page as well. The paragraphs still feel a little long. Maybe shrinking the point size a little would help that. Also, i noticed there's a couple typos in the bottom paragraph.

Directions Page: Again, nice job with organization! I feel like all the text could be brought down a little bit on this page too, though.

In general this is a great site! I feel it could be more dynamic in its design, but you checked off all the necessary boxes.

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I think your website is really fun. It's so cute! The little biplane is adorable, but the banner is a tad too small for your text to fit comfortably.

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Love the colors! Your website is very nice and fun to look at.

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Very fun colors! Dope text/illustration you've implemented for your hero image.

The colors are really fun, I like how you took the traditional red, white and blue colors and just used a saturated hue of it. The addition of that dark teal adds a nice touch to offset the aqua.

You have a very strong layout for your About Us page and I like what you did for the Performers. Your form for the Contact Us fits your theme. Great job on this.

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Your overall design for the website is very nice. On the home page, idk if the first section below the hero is supposed to be a slider but the picture on the corner cut off looks like a mistake.  Also. the email button could be smaller.

I love the map in your footer.  Saves people from having to search for the location.

About page: I love the parallax and you broke up the content nicely in small section so people aren't overwhelmed with text.

Contact page and Performers page are both great. nicely done

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Your logo is really cute. Though one of the images on your homepage is broken for me. The icons are nice and they fit the design. Also, the link to your contacts page doesn't work on your performers page.

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Your logo and the icons that you used are really nice. For the performers page, maybe consider placing the name on the image of the performer or close to it. But I like your overall layout .

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Hey Lawrence, I like how clean your website feel and how much white space you've given everything. I really like your transitions on your performers page roll-overs, and that you went with a solid color rather than a color overlay, that really helps with legibility.

Your nav hover states however are wider than your normal nav, and that can be a bit of an issue. I'd suggest setting the same padding for both the hover state and inactive state, or else giving those a really small transition, like .3s ease.

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I love the use of the blue color throughout the site. It makes airshow feel more modern and fun. The illustrations are great too! But the illustrations, blue color, and bold rounded typeface all together makes the site almost border on childish.

I really like the animation you included on the Performers page. It's a lot of fun!

There's something going on with your buttons when you hover over them. They shrink in size or move or something, and it messes with other parts of the page. Also, some of your links are defaulting to that ugly blue underlined look...
The other main thing I noticed is that you have tons of whitespace in your hero/header sections of your pages, and it feels like a little too much.

I love that you used an accordion for the FAQs page. Those are always a great way to display a lot of info. This is just a small functionality thing, but I can't click to open and close the same question. The only way to close one question is by opening another. And the answer to the questions could be a little hard to read because there's not enough contrast between the text and the background.

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You have a very strong, consistent and modern layout. Your color choice is appropriate and modern. It call appeal to wide array of audience from young to old.

The vector images on the bottom is a nice touch for your footer as well as the mailing list.

I definitely am digging your logo. I can't stop looking your logo. It's so clean and love how it plays off so well with your navigation bar!

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Your website is really cool! The keyframe animations are cool too. I don't know if it's just me, but your footer is pretty unfinished and the links are broken. Otherwise, super cool site!

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Overall, your design is consistent and nice. Nice use of colors and I love your logo.
Your font size seems a little large and makes for lots of scrolling.

On the home page I feel like there is alot of unnecessary space. I think things could be tightened up just a bit and your button is huge.

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I really like the overall look of your layout! The typography and colors used flows really well. I also like the parallax scrolling effects used.

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I love your color choice! It fits so well. Your layout is nice too. Though some of the sections where there is a lot of text, I would increase the line height a little.

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That aqua blue you're using for your website I honestly wouldn't think about using but you are able to pull it off lovely! I really appreciate how you make the Air Show feel like a real family event while not making it seem to kiddy or kid-like if it makes sense.

Your usage of vector illustrations are very appropriate, my particular favorite are the ones that you utilized in your hero section on the homepage; how it looks like its flying out of the navigation. Really dope!

Your site could use a bit more line height on some of the pages and I'd like to see a bit more content on some of the pages.

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Hey Casey, I really like the blocky feel of your content, especially on the performers pages and those angled color overlays.

I'm not seeing a way to get back to your home page from your inside pages, though, so I am sort of stuck on the performers page. I'd suggest adding a home link to your nav, or a logo that links back to home.

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So I know your comps didn't look anything like this and just looks like you need to work on your coding a bit more ;)

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I like the overall layout of your website, it's very clean. I do think that your header text are a bit big. I also like the colors that was used.

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There's some good things going on with your site. I like the use of icons, and the color scheme is nice. And the logo has a retro feel which is cool.

My biggest critique is that your pages dont feel finished. The homepage feels jumbled and an image is broken. Are the icons supposed to be links? If so, you can put an empty link on them so we can at least see the functionality.

I think your parking and directions page could benefit from some hierarchy, and maybe some breaking up of information. It's hard to tell where the parking begins and directions ends.

The contact page is okay, but there's nothing really exciting about it. I know it's a contact page, but it could be made to feel more cohesive with the rest of the site.

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Your site is really well laid out. The color choice is nice too. The way your subheads go outside the box is a neat idea too.

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Your website is very clean and modern. It is also a nice layout. There is ALOT of  white space tho and your font is really big. The footer is also reallly big.

In the header the type runs off the page too.

On the contact page, your type on the left hand side needs some padding or margin. Your forms also could use a little bit of work.

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Hey Reyna, I really like your layout! That broken grid looks like it was hell to code. Unfortunately, your headings are a little broken. I tried making them relative instead of absolute and removing the padding from the subheader and that helped a little bit, hopefully that helps! :)

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I really appreciate the flat art throughout the entire site especially on your homepage. You have an interesting and unique take on the site especially with the color choices. Normally and honestly colors I wouldn't use you definitely make it work and execute it to its fullest.

There's so much good going on with the aesthetics with the site I kinda would've like to see more content on it or better yet a different variation of it rather than the text you have on it now.

Otherwise this is great Katherin!

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I like the layout of your website and how big and bold everything is. The colors are nice too. However, I can only see one or two pages and sometimes the navigation doesn't work.

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I like the overall layout. For some reason on the about page the heading text overlaps the paragraph. I love the colors that are being used. I also like the block elements you used.

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Great use of a large imagery and minimal typographic design on all of your pages, it is consistent and highly effective in terms of legibility and hierarchy. Your layout also responds well to being scaled down  which is a huge plus.  My favorite feature is the Performers page because of the clever use of slide up hover states to reduce the amount of text in the inactive state. Also, I love the map you incorporated into your footer and how it is also a link, so helpful for directions rather than just putting the address in the footer!

What needs improvement:
The disclaimer in your footer about what is prohibited at the show could be larger and even incorporated into your homepage layout so that the audience doesn't bypass overlook the information as easily.

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Your site is stating to look good and I like the colors. I also like the diagonal boxes treatments you have in your different divs. However, you seem to be missing the other pages and that page feels unfinished.

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I really like your layout. It works well. Your forms are really cool too. Though there is a lot of odd white space on your homepage. Also, your headings are huge.

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I love the overall feel and layout of your website. Your layout is very clean and I like the colors that are used. You logo is also nice. I do noticed that some of your heading text overlaps the sub-heading. Overall your site looks great!

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Wow, there are some beautiful things happening on this site. I love the navigation and how it has multiple layers. The little pluses are great indicators that there's more to be seen on certain links. I absolutely love the animation on the different teams.

The Senior Team page is really great as well! I like the infographic-style you used to show all the info on requirements for the team, and the animation for the color block section is a really nice touch. The video could be a little smaller, in my opinion.

I am a little confused by the coaches page, but I think it might be because something in the design broke. I like the static backgrounds on this page.

I wish that the buttons had a hover state, since most everything else has some good animation.

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Hey Katherin, I love your logo and your icons! They're super fun and pretty, and I especially like the color choices you made there. Great job!

I do wish that your finished pages looked a little more like your comps, though. I was a really big fan of the other flat design elements your included in your comps and was excited to see that working.

I'd also suggest for the future looking into using background-images rather than img tags, and using percentages rather than px values for column layouts, that should help a lot with how your images sort of break when you resize the page, and is actually a lot easier in my opinion to get them laid out.

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Your design concept is amazing! Its very modern and polished! I appreciate the slimness of your images, like how they're really wide.
Everything flows well together from the logo, to your font selection and color choice. Especially your color choices, I appreciate you didn't go the traditional route when it comes to water themed- or associated companies and sites and didn't go heavy with the blues. Very good cool on that.

The layout is especially modern, with the keyframes and how certain information is laid out on certain pages.

I just don't agree with the footer especially how the watermarked companies and teams vertically descend instead being horizontal.

Aside from that great job on your site Victoria!

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I really like your color choice and also the typography. Some of your body text are a bit small to read. But overall, I love your layout and it is very well organized.

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I agree with the second comment about your headings. I love your site and colors!! You really did a fantastic job with everything, but the only thing is I did not have my browser at full width and the headings were on top of the descriptions below it.

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You did a great job on this site! The color scheme and font choice are on point. The icons are good, and I love the buttons and imagery.

The way you break up the information in different tabs is a great idea too, because there's lots of info to be presented. Really nice job! And the galleries on your different pages with the hover effects are nice.

Though I do wish the images would expand if you clicked on them. My main critique is the font size on your sections is a little out of whack. Some of your text is teeeeeeny.

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Hi Dimitria! I really love your illustrative elements, especially in that splash section! It's very cute, and definitely gives the site a unique feel. I also really love the transitions in your hover state on your performers page.

All in all, I think your site very solid. There are some smaller things, like how your buttons with hover states have to resize a bit (maybe try giving the hover version a border that's the same thickness and the normal border, and the same color as the hover background?) and how your cute illustration at the bottom of your home page sort of feel like it's floating. I think that illustration would be really awesome as a sort of corner topper that has content under the banner and to the left of the plane.

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I like your soft colors you used and you have some color hover effects.
I only found the home page, the senior page and the coaches page is broken. I might have missed one.
The header is also broken and something must have gone wrong with your footer. The font choice for your paragraghs is a little hard to read. You have a lot of nice things going but definitely needs more work.

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I really, really, really, really, really love your color choice for this. Its just something about that color combination of that shade of orange and dark teal that does something no matter where its applied. What's even better is how you coupled those two colors with beige being your tertiary color. Very very excellent call.

Also great call on the font choice, very slim and narrow font is a nice touch for the site and helps makes the color pop more. Your logo is also amazing! Its simple, clean and just flows.

I just would've like to see a bigger line height for the areas where heavy text is implemented. The font size is fine but with more line height would make it forgivable for an older audience.

Also your tabular navigation for your About ORC page is a dope touch. Overall great job Beth!

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Reyna your site is gorgeous. I can really tell that you paid attention to every little detail and hover link and button and icon. Everything works and is beautiful! My favorite page is actually the events page. The way that you display each date is brilliant. So clean and easy to read. There's really no major critique I can point out. I would love to see this site fully developed to be able to experience the rest of the functionality.

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I think your site is very clean and easy to navigate. The color choice is also great.
Just a few things nit picky things:
Home page:
space is not needed in between the divs
I wish the hand drawn airplane was bigger.. that is super cool and it would give some more padding for the text.
I love your navigation but you left your a links blue :(
Performers page: I love the hover effect on the circles.
Sponsor page: your text needs some line-height. and maybe you add some pictures or one of the flying airplanes to break up those 2 boxes that have the same color. It just seems a bit unfinished.

FAQ page- all the pages have the exact same header image so when I clicked I didn't think the linked worked at first until I read the type.

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What's Working:
Just by looking at your home page, I can tell that you had a very clear sense of content organization and the clean, open feel of the site is really working for me. I also like the language you chose to incorporate, for example: "want to be in the know"  and "how we make it happen" are more personal and quickly grab my attention.

What needs improvement:
Sizing could be scaled down on a lot of your divs, the horizontal layout is clean but a lot of the divs feel larger than necessary (a lot of padding around text and buttons). For example: the sponsor banner callout on your homepage is quite large for such a small amount of content, reducing the line height and point size of your body copy could help size things down, also consider playing with scaling and consider adding less padding.

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I like the boldness of your homepage. Huge, cool image and big text. But then when I start to scroll, I feel overwhelmed, like I'm being yelled at with important notices. I think those sections would really benefit from being smaller and a bit more subtle. I also don't think the contact form needs to be full width. I really like the design of the About page, but again, it all feels really large. I looks designed for mobile, which is totally fine, but it doesn't seem to scale properly on a large screen.

Also there's no way to get back to the home screen which makes the site difficult to navigate. And did you only do two pages? I can't find the others...

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Hey Ashley! I really love your layout, and how everything is responsive and working! Awesome job! I also like the drop down arrows on your performers page, that's a really smart way to handle all the information.  It does feel a little plain though on the performers page, I sort of wish you had a little more imagery or some color blocks to break up the layout a bit.

Honestly, other than that, I'm not seeing anything else that needs a lot of work.  Maybe your drop down nav links are a little hard to read with that gray on gray, but other than that, I think you did an awesome job!

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This is a strong and brave concept! I would never think you using shapes like how you did for your website. Great color and font choices too!

I would've liked for your contact form to be a bit  condensed more. Also would've like to see what you could have done with more content unless I was not able to access it.

I do like your tabular navigation you have on your homepage. Very nice touch! Overall great touch!

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What's Working:
Your use of vector graphics and an exciting color pallet is what I love about your site! The combination gives off a playful and family friendly appearance. The more interactive elements such as your hover states and highlighted elements are a nice touch and they work well with the flow of your design.

What needs improvement:
Sizing of the entire webpage could use some work because the page itself isn't sitting at 100% and when I zoom in to see things at full width, most elements are too large. If your page is intended to be viewed at the current size, I would recommend then just centering all of your content to the browser window at full.

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Overall your site is really clean and looks great! Your forms are really nice, though the text for each field is on the small side. Conversely, some of your hero text is really huge!
Your performers page is really good and simple. I love the hover effect you used for the photos.

Back on the homepage, there's a random white section in the middle. I also noticed that the padding gets squirrely on your nav when its hovered.

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Hi Beth, I really your color choices and your imagery. Your layout is working really nice. The only thing I'm really noticing is that your font is a little small on the about page.

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What's Working:
I am obsessed with your use of icons and the color balance in the site! The style of your layout is also clean, fits multiple browsers well and is just so much fun overall. I never knew I would want to learn more about rowing but this site has changed my mind. My favorite feature on your site is the sub navigation on your Join page, it effectively breaks up the content so that the audience isn't overwhelmed with facts and imagery in a single layout.

What needs improvement:
The sizing of images under "Other Services Offered" could be scaled down so they are not as pixelated and blurry, although I do love the hover state with info that you added to each of them.

Overall:

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What's Working: The first highlights on your site that I noticed are your logo and font choices. They both are so minimal yet perfect, with beautiful complimentary colors. I also love your choice of imagery on your POOLS page, it adds so much color and vibrance. Also, I like the footer a lot because it is unique and well thought out.

What needs improvement:
The navigation seems a bit compact, I don't know if it is because I am viewing it again on my ipad. However, I think that you can fit all the elements in your navy into a single row and space things out a bit. Other than that this is a really cool site and I can see your personal design style reflected well in this design.

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What's working:
The first amazing thing I noticed about your site is the photo gallery you have on the event page. It's a simple, yet so aesthetically pleasing! I also love your choice of serif for your headlines. the element that sold me is your logo, It has such a great color pallet that you also incorporated into your pages.

What needs improvement:
It feels like the volunteer page is a bit of an after thought with just one paragraph and a form, but everything is still well organized and clearly labeled. The footer nag also seems so big and cumbersome compared to the header nav I feel like you could balance them out a bit more.

Overall excellent style :)

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What's working:
Well thought out spacing on your horizontal combined with a unique color pallet, it makes this whole site so exciting to explore and interact with. I like how your websites seem to all have interactive or animated elements it's such that's such a great way of catching the users eye and keeping their attention.

What needs improvement:
Some of your content dive need more padding for your text. Some things seem to run out of their containers bit. Other than that I am completely sold.

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What's working:
The strong color pallet and use of vector graphics! It gives off a very family friendly vibe! Also the content organization is clear and simple and I don't feel overwhelmed with information. The call outs are also a fun element that I feel like you could tie into more pages on your site.

What needs improvement:
Sizing is pretty large when viewed at 100% on my browser, I feel like you could scale things down and even add more illustrative or photo elements.

Awesome :)

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this is so beautiful, danny. can i call you danny? the spacing, colors, fonts, imagery all work well together. what would i change? i don't necessarily like that your form on the contact page has a white bg. i think it would be nice transparent or the same gray as the background it's on

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this is so beautiful, danny. can i call you danny? the spacing, colors, fonts, imagery all work well together. what would i change? i don't necessarily like that your form on the contact page has a white bg. i think it would be nice transparent or the same gray as the background it's on

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love your site! the colors look great and i love how it's organized. what i would change is maybe the type size. it feels a smidge too big

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love your site! the colors look great and i love how it's organized. what i would change is maybe the type size. it feels a smidge too big

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great start! i love that color scheme. the site looks good  so far

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great start! i love that color scheme. the site looks good  so far

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this site looks great! your hover effects, icons, and organization over all are so cool. i would make a bigger link for the learn more link on your about page.

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this site looks great! your hover effects, icons, and organization over all are so cool. i would make a bigger link for the learn more link on your about page.

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i like where this is headed! i'd make your form more of a multicolumn form.

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i like where this is headed! i'd make your form more of a multicolumn form.

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love the color scheme of the site. i found that the site was a little stretched so next time you should test how it looks on smaller devices. you can do this when you inspect! 

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love the color scheme of the site. i found that the site was a little stretched so next time you should test how it looks on smaller devices. you can do this when you inspect! 

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i love the nav's hover effects! i would recommend changing the css of your original links so they don't have the blue color and the underline. then link everything that should be linked so it looks the same.

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i love the nav's hover effects! i would recommend changing the css of your original links so they don't have the blue color and the underline. then link everything that should be linked so it looks the same.

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i love how your site looks! i like the font you chose especially. i can't find your other pages so i don' tknow if you're there but i love how the home page looks

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i love how your site looks! i like the font you chose especially. i can't find your other pages so i don' tknow if you're there but i love how the home page looks