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Elements of Bad Quality Articles:
1. This article has a warning banner at the start; The warning is basically saying that the information is not all collected.

2. The talk page has many complaints; People are angry for a few reasons. The first is that the article only mentions hazing in college in the United States. People comment on military hazing, deaths outside the United States and suicides committed by pledges.

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List of hazing deaths in the United States - Wikipedia

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This is a list of hazing deaths in the United States. This is not an exhaustive list. An exact list is not available because there is no central system for tracking hazing deaths, and the role of hazing in some deaths is subject to disagreement.

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This is a very well formulated article. I enjoy how the article really only displays facts and there is no opinion to it. I do think it would significantly improve the article if there were more photos and more background on the pledges who passed away. I also would have to agree with people on the talk page about how the author should have included hazing in all parts of the world and in all circumstances.

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In the talk section, someone proposes a gerund fix. He attaches the sentence and explains what is wrong with it.

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For improvement, the article could include photos of all of those who had been killed from hazing. I also think the article could expand further on where the people were from, etc.

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Elements of Quality Articles:
1. A lead section that gives an easy-to-understand overview;
The lead section introduces that a list will be presented. It defines hazing and sets up the rest of the page correctly.
2. A clear structure;
The information was set up chronologically. There are several footnotes at the end. There is only one photo.
3. Neutral content;
The article is strictly presenting facts- when and how these events happened.
4. Balanced Coverage;
The coverage is slightly balanced because it is mostly a list with only a little bit of text before.
5. Reliable sources;
All of the footnotes are either from journals or reliable articles.

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The purpose of this article is to layout a list of deaths from hazing for documentation.
1. This article answers the question: "How many people have died due to hazing, and is it more this year than ever?"
2. This wikipedia article deepens my understanding that death from hazing is not new, rather talked about more because of main stream media.
3. My further research would expand on the solution for keeping fraternities, while also preventing death in them.