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Organized and a hook

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I liked the 2 one better then the first one is because it was more organized and way easyer to read and i 

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I liked the 2 one better then the first one is because it was more organized and way easyer to read and i 

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The paragraphs are not mixed up anymore

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Organized beter.

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Each sentence was organized

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they organized the plot.

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The things that made the second essay better than the first is because it was organized and each sentence had a subject and a predicate

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the secent Essay was better becuase it was orginized

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it was orginized

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organized