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Very infromative and great layout of the presentation. Good knowledge about the research article.

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Good understanding of article and of the issue being looked at

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detailed well presented presentation, well understood

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detailed well presented presentation, well understood

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Clear visuals
Well researched

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Able to answer quick fire questions shows good knowledge of subject

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Clearly laid out and colourful, making the information easy to read.
Great knowledge of chosen topic.
Selected topic which was current.
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Clear layout and very informative

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well considered and understood article, detailed, many things considered well done

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well considered and understood article, detailed, many things considered well done

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Good knowledge of the article and able to speak about it confidently.

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very detailed

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Clear layout                          Lots of information (even better if it contained less writing on each slide? Sometimes too small to read)

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Clear layout                          Lots of information (even better if it contained less writing on each slide? Sometimes too small to read)

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Well researched and great understanding of topic.

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Well done - Thoughtful and reflective with good links to practice and considering the ethics of measuring IQ in this manner.

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Well done - Thoughtful and reflective with good links to practice and considering the ethics of measuring IQ in this manner.

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Be careful about explaining results and findings in your LO2 so that it is clear and focused - Jenny

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Good understanding of the topic and very informative

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clearly explained article, talked through main points in a clear manner

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clearly explained article, talked through main points in a clear manner

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good knowledge of article

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Able to talk about the points made clearly and confidently.

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Able to talk about the points made clearly and confidently.

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Good critique points highlighted during presentation.

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Good critique points highlighted during presentation.

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Good knowledge on topic and gave strong answers when questionned.

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Interesting research article good link to personal practice

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Interesting research article good link to personal practice

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Confident in speaking freely about the points, showing good understanding of the chosen article.

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very visual

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Clear layout of presentation and good understanding of topic

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Lovely lay out with illustrations which connect with points made.

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Good understanding of the subject and article

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Clear information, great knowledge and main points covered well.

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well considered nicely presented, detailed

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well considered nicely presented, detailed

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Nicely summarised points

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Good understanding and visuals

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Good knowledge and background on subject

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Well done  -Remember to include when the research took place Kelly. Very good reflections on  current thinking regarding rough and tumble play and its benefits. Could also link this to the research article's literature review. Jenny 

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Well done  -Remember to include when the research took place Kelly. Very good reflections on  current thinking regarding rough and tumble play and its benefits. Could also link this to the research article's literature review. Jenny 

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well researched showing good understanding.

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well researched showing good understanding.

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Good amount of information provided

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Informative
Summarised points- clear to read

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although as you said you were confused, well done for gathering the information and doing your best

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although as you said you were confused, well done for gathering the information and doing your best

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Good information gathered even though the article was not clear.

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Well done for researching the paper.

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clear and easy to follow

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very informed on article/subject

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Good understanding of the article. Well done!

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clear to the point easy to follow, informative

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clear to the point easy to follow, informative

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Clear layout and good visuals and information and links to theorists

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Able to answer questions confidently

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good understanding of theorists identified in the discussion.

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good understanding of theorists identified in the discussion.

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Well informed and engaging speaker. Good knowledge of the research topic..

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Well informed and engaging speaker. Good knowledge of the research topic..

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well understood research, informative, clear, detailed

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Information displayed clearly throughout. Able to speak about it freely.

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Clear presentation and shows good understanding of the research article

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linked to current practice

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good knowledge of article

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Great knowledge and understanding of the topic!

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Clear presentation. Points effectively explained and explored

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Clear presentation. Points effectively explained and explored

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good terminology

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good referencing

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well presented

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good understanding of article

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Good detail and understanding of the research article

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lovely illustrations! great info and well presented!

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Good understanding of the article. Visual however text on one slide was too dark to be seen.

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Clear visuals. Interesting points raised during the presentation.

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Clear presentation and well researched well done

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Good understanding of the article reviewed.

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well done good refection and links to practice - use this but in third person for assignment 

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well done good refection and links to practice - use this but in third person for assignment 

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analyse in greater depth for assignment too  - not forgetting to explore ethics  - Jenny

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Well done - Good knowledge of research article . Refer to it as research article rather than just article please. Can make some positive statements about the ethical considerations. remember to explore more closely the methods used to carry out the research. Jenny 

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Well done - Good knowledge of research article . Refer to it as research article rather than just article please. Can make some positive statements about the ethical considerations. remember to explore more closely the methods used to carry out the research. Jenny 

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Well done - Confident grasp of topic Link the relevance of the research with UK requirements regarding practitioner pupil interactions.

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Well done - Confident grasp of topic Link the relevance of the research with UK requirements regarding practitioner pupil interactions.

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Refer to your paper as research or research artcile  rather than just article - Jenny

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Well done Please provide details of the year and place that the research was carried out. Please make sure that you discuss the lack of male teachers with current issues around male recruitment . Discuss advantages of longitudinal studies. Carefully explain why the practitioner finds the research disappointing and unenlightening - Jenny 

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Well done Please provide details of the year and place that the research was carried out. Please make sure that you discuss the lack of male teachers with current issues around male recruitment . Discuss advantages of longitudinal studies. Carefully explain why the practitioner finds the research disappointing and unenlightening - Jenny 

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Well done -You have provided a good context for exploring this research - link it also to the practitioner's work based experiences too. Comment on the effectiveness of the abstract

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Well done -You have provided a good context for exploring this research - link it also to the practitioner's work based experiences too. Comment on the effectiveness of the abstract

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and the fact that it identified the gapos in current research. comment on the advantages of mided metthods and how they may be being used effectively here - make sure that you understan what is meant by ' mixed methods'! Jenny

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Well done Good levels of reflection and links with current thinking. Consider the construction of the research article and go through critiquing it in a logical way - ie explain the effectiveness of the Intro/abstract, methodology and findings or recommendations etc. Begin with your own intro and conclusion etc. Jenny 

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Well done Good levels of reflection and links with current thinking. Consider the construction of the research article and go through critiquing it in a logical way - ie explain the effectiveness of the Intro/abstract, methodology and findings or recommendations etc. Begin with your own intro and conclusion etc. Jenny 

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Well done Good reflective practice. Good overview of methodologies.

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Well done Good reflective practice. Good overview of methodologies.

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Establish why ethical considerations are important and explin how the findings are presented.

Consider critiquing as you go along rather than at the end of your assignment - this would be a stronger approach. Jenny