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Marlyn 1) The thing that I learnt was how to use the punctuation in right orders and how to write poems about yourself and getting ideas for it. We also learnt how our Polynesian people got around to find land they also did not use technology to find their land.

Antonio 2) I learnt how to use a bio poem and a arocstic poems

Next step

1) We think we need to know how to use reading stuff and make more in our reading group

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1) We learnt that in the 2011 Christchurch earthquake 80% of the central city was destroyed.

2) we also learnt that people have COPD from air pollution and it cannot be cured.

OUR NEXT STEPS:
1) We should learn more reading stratigies at school

2)  We should learn how to do more poems at school

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1=Seti
I learnt about Sensing Data and How the Polynesians Sailed to Find Land.
2=princess
I learnt that COPD is chronic obstructive pulmonary disease.
15/02/18

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1)We learned how to write a bio poem,we also learned about big data and digital tech from the text sensing data.
2)Another key achievement was when we were learning about how Polynesian people voyaged across the ocean to discover new lands.
Next step:learn how to finish work on time and reduce time on talking.

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Our next step would be,To stay on task and move on to our whakapapa poem in writing

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1)Pati
I learnt  to write a acrostic poem  bio poem and sensing data.I learnt that polynesians sailed to find land

2)Lii
I learnt about a poem i never knew before which was a Whakapapa poem.

NEXT STEPS!=

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FITI 1) i learnt how to write a bio poem.

L.J 2) I learnt that Polynesians came from hawaiki.

Next Step
We think our next step is we need to take notes when we read books so we understand what the book is telling us.

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1)Samani.
I learnt how to do a acoustic poem,
2) tise
I learnt how the Polynesians found a way to go to point A to point B.

NEXT STEP...

1) we think we need to do more working then talking because that will drive us to level5.

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1)  I have learned more about Hawaiki, I learned about how our ancestors found lands and what they used the ocean swells
for.

2) one of the things I learned is the instructions to how to write a bio poem I learned that a bio poem is a piece of writing that talks about you or someone else.

my next step for literacy is to work on my capital I's and to write my answers into a sentence instead of a one word answer.

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Anaseini)
During this week in literacy I have learnt how to write a bio poem and I have also learnt learnt how Polynesians find there way home.

Melelatu)
this week, I have learnt about a bio poem, I learnt that a bio poem can show things about you, such as your fears, your family and your hobbies. I thought that the bio poem is a great way of showing who you are and your personality.

next step

for our next step, we think that we need to read more level 4 texts to challenge ourselves and grow our brains.

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sisi 1)I learnt that Polynesians are all around the world speaking all types of languages,and  the difference between the navigation from the past tense to  the present today.
Jewls 2)I learnt all the types of ways Hawaiians navigate .such as ocean swells, birds flying and the sun rise & set.

NEXT STEP:
We both want to focus more on reading non fiction novels that are level 4 or level 5

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dameighn 1)the one thing that I learnt was to write a acoustic poem
and also we learnt that the Polynesian could sail and use the stars as a compass

Next step...

1)I think that we need to know how to use all the reading and writing stuff.

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1) I learnt that how to do a acrostic poem and how to the  bio poem this week

2) I learnt how how to write a bio poem this week and what a bio poem is ,also I learnt where our ancestors traveled to islands

Next step, (carmichel) I think we need to get more reading tasks more often.(Jaqwon)my next step is adding detail and in my writing and to read more text books so I can see what a level 4 texts book is like so I can write level 4 piece of writing

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1)(Silia) learned new words when we were finding words that will describe or fit into our names like Indulgent-is another way of saying kind & Irreplaceable-no one can take ur spot or replace you for the Acrostic Poem.

1)(Iva) I learnt that in navigating you can't always rely on one method because the weather, and seasons never stay the same so you might have to use a different method for every condition.

Next step:
(Silia)Try to sit next to people that I wouldn't talk with and try and finish my work on time also

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1) we learnt how the Polynesians sailed and how to find there way home .

2) also we learnt how to write two different poems.

Next step
1) we need to

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Emma1) what I learnt was that nearly all of the Polynesians people don't speak there culture languages

precious2) this week I have learnt about a bio poem that you can show anything about your personality and explaining more about yourself in many different ways.

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1)Joseph
This Week I learn't in literacy how the hawakii people got to islands by water,air and stars also the Sun.

1)leahana
I learn how to properly do acrostic poems in a year eighth standard.

Next Step, how to do a whakaapa poem.

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1) Joaquin
I learnt how to write Bio Poems, and what it is and that the polynesians used to follow the birds to near by land...

2) Winston
what I have learnt this week is writing bio poem and the polynesian people voyaging around
the ocean and discovering new lands...

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1)Alex
I learned how to understand sencing data by seeing the questions and understanding it

2)upulasi
For this weeks literacy I learnt how to write our own acrostic poem & learnt how to sense data

Next steps
I think we need

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My first star of the week is......

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My first star is that I accomplished to finish all 3 poems.
Whakapapa,accroustic,bio. .
My second star is that I managed to finish writing a summary about my text.
lest we forget.

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This week I have learnt about the army that their is one man

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leahana 2 stars
during this week i've been able to learn about how to do whakapapa poem.

also being able to write a better reflection in my story tuto atasi

next step
the thing i want to work on is how to do many other types of writing and reading and understanding better when reading.

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i have learnt that people in 1914 didnt all beleive that going war wasnt right
2)i have also learnt that others treat people like criminals in 1914

next step
my next step is to read more text and add more detail in my writing

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1. My first star for this week is that I accomplished

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I GIVE MY FIR STAR  FOR THIS WEEK BECAUSE  IN THE TUTO'ATASI (THE STRUGGLE OF SAMOA'S INDEPENDENCE) BOOK I LEARNT THAT IN SAMOA THOUSANDS OF PEOPLE DIED FROM IN INFLUENZA.

THE NEXT STEP IS TO COMPLETE MY EXPLANATION ABOUT MY WHITE SUNDAY AND ALSO ADDIND WHY WE CELEBRATE WHTIE SUNDAY.

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1. My first star is that I have finished my summary on lest we forget and that I have watched the video and found a lot of the key info.

2. My second star is that I have finished all my poems and shared it.
Next Step
My next step is to challenge myself with my writing, my challenge is to think of deep ideas that can make my writing interesting.

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1)I leant how to do a explanation story
2)I learnt about the treaty of waitangi

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my first star is that I accomplished to finish 3 poems .
my second is that I finished of my summary about lest we forget.
my goal is to try and finish the activities in the time given.

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i like how we are all working altogether

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i like how we are all working altogether

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In reading, I read his own war, I thought this book was a bit challenging cause some of the words I didn't get what I meant and pronounce.

In writing, we are learning how to do a explanation writing about our culture and more about our selfs.
This could also help us to reflect on other people and learn about other people's culture.

My next step, is to complete my explanation writing and see if I can complete any other un finished writing.

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my first star is when I accomplished my bio poem.

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in reading, I read the book his own war which was about a man Archibald baxter. I really found this book challenging to read because there were some hard words but I managed to pull through with the activities for this book.

In writing, we are learning to write an explanation about our cultural values. I thought this is something good to do because we can explain stuff to other people about what people do for their cultural values.

my next step, is to complete my explanation writing about white Sunday also to add the story behind to why we do white Sunday.

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Emma
this week I have been learning about tuto'atasi the struggle of Samoa independents day

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my first star is when I completed my bio poem and my acrostic poem and learning on the tuto'atasi
the struggle of Samoa independence.

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Antonio
my first star of the week is when New Zealand was only Maori land than early settlers wanted to take over New Zealand and agreed to make a treaty.

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To day I have learnt about the army that there was one gay that had to go to the army but he got abused from his own kind that he didn’t want to kill somebody because he didn’t want to diy so they abused him for not doing what he should be doing so they would hang him out on a pole in the snow and he said he won’t diy

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my first star is when i finished my
whakapapa poem and my bio poem
and learning how to write a bio poem.

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My first key step to learning is that the treaty of waitangi was made when the British came to NZ.

2)My second star was when i was going to writing and finished my planning, starting my introduction and going onto my first paragraph of the week i think?

next step) My next step is to carry on with my work with doing the treaty of waitangi and keep on going on with the work.

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1)this week I learnt tuto'atasi I learnt interesting things in there like the independence and and how Samoa got taken over by countries like New Zealand and Germany.

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Star:
i have finished my bio, whakapapa & acrostic poem. I learnt how to write a bio poem and a whakapapa poem.

Star:
I also learnt what happened before and after the treaty was signed.

Wish:
I want to be able to make my writing more interesting and learn different types of writing that we can do.

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Star:
I learnt about writing bio poems and acrostics. i also wrote about my self which we called a whakapapa poem

Star:
I learnt about what happened with the maori and pakeha people with the treaty and how pakeha took the maori peoples land

Wish:
i wish that the pakeha people didnt take the maori peoples land.

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Star: I have learnt more about the treaty and how unfair the Europeans treated the Maori.

Star: I have finally understood how to write a whakapapa poem and have also learnt how to write the other poems.

Wish: I wish to catch up with everyone when it comes to my work, and I also want to Finnish the tasks given to me by the teacher that are still yet to complete.

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Reading;In reading ive enjoyed learning about the treaty of waitangi and keeping promises.Ive enjoyed doing compare and contrast and finding the similarities and the differences between these two stories.
Writing;For writing i have learnt how to write a explanation and a whakapapa poem i have really enjoyed learning more information about the malu and the sogai'miki which is based on my explanation writing.
Seti-

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In reading I learnt that there were different people that agreed and disagree about going to the war. Archibald Baxter one of the people to disagree on joining in the war he was badly punish.

In writing I learnt how to plan a explanation writing again

My next step is to finsh my writing

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silia
My first star:
this week i have learned about the wars like how it started and what year and day it happened.Also such as different country's that was in the war and how it took place ,and why they chose

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1] I learnt that Archibald Baxter believed In something ands tried to make it right between war and killing and he got punished, but he tried to stay alive to still make it right

2] and also I want to try to be a level 4 in my literacy and I could do that by being on task.

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In literacy I learnt about the main idea or the purpose of why the photographer took this photo.
In literacy we also done a photography profile and had the choice to do any topic and my topic was nature. For me nature would be the definition of flowers and their beauty and growth.
my next step would be to have more detail in my other piece of work

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olisa.f
in literacy i have learn't about the main idea i learn't about the purpose of why the photographer adrian heke takes photo i learn't that adrian heke took photo's because he wanted to share to the world the life that people live in afghanistan he learn't that it wasn't easy and that it a very hard life to live.

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OLISA.FA'ATUPU
In literacy this term I have learn't about the main idea I learn't about the purpose of why the photographer Adrian heke takes photos. I learnt that adrian took photo's of people who lives in Afghanistan he wanted to tell the world about it I learnt that it wasn't a easy life to live in. In literacy I have been doing comprehension activities about Adrian heke I have been learning to write a haiku, cinquain, and limerick I have learnt alot  I learnt that a limerick poem contains 5 lines that should have at least 5 to 9 syllables in some of the lines.
my next steps for literacy is
to put more details in my work and to help it make sense

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Olisa.f
I have been doing comprehension activities about Adrian heke I have been answering comprehension questions about what I learnt and about who taught Adrian heke how to take photos. I find the comprehension activities very helpful because it helps me find out more info about the text and it helps me think deeper by having questions about the text that haven’t been mention but depended on what I think or learnt from the text. This term I have been writing a explanation writing about the saofai in my culture which is a celebrational day to celebrate the new chiefs i chose the saofai because it talks about my culture and also because it relates to my ko au ko Koe ko koe ko au. My next step for literacy is to do some reading millage.

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The things that I’ve learnt in the text is that back in the days when people like us use to take photos there would always be a story behind it but in our days when we take photos we just pose and post it on social media back then We didn’t have social media or network. To me the activities are fun and challenging it really helps me improve on trying to find out on what the author or the illustrator is trying to explain to us I also reckon my next step for literacy would be to maybe start reading more harder novels and to also try and get a better understanding of the text when I read it.

Seti

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This year in term 1 for literacy I learnt about the man Archibald Baxter and how he was against fighting in the war and he didn’t believe in it, that caused him to be severely punished by a group of men and he was tied to a kind pole and was left to starve, in writing we did different types of poetry such as limerick, limerick poetry contains five sentences the first, second and fifth line has to rhyme with one another and the third and fourth line rhymes with each other, there was also haiku poems, cinquain and whakapapa poems,

(Highlight of the term)

My main highlight for this term was photography portfolios, this was my highlight because we captured photos of the theme and e had different themes, my the,e was modern buildings, I thought modern buildings would be a significant theme to capture because koru school is now learning in a new environment and I thought I’d like to capture it.

(My next step)
My next step is to read novels because they are more challenging to read and I can learn more from reading novels.

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Eastah

This term I learnt about a story called the great ordinary. The story is about Edith. She is a photographer. She created a document about the end of her drive way. She takes photos of thing that past by her drive way. Like kids in uniform walking to school, car coming and going, parents with their children.

From that text we had to take some photo of our own. Each photo that we take has to mean something in a way. We will pick a topic like nature or buildings and focus on that topic like what we know about the topic, how we relate to the topic. I enjoy the activities this term because it how’s me know more about what I’m reading and how I understand it.

My next steps are reading more of the text and understanding what is happening in the text. Other next step is focusing on mt poetry like my limerick, haikau and cinquian.

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This term in literacy I’ve learnt different types of poetry’s and the poetry that we learnt and they were all interesting.Also I’ve learnt what techniques you need to be a photographer cause you will need patience and a lot of other skills.The comprehension questions are very helpful because it gives more info about that text and a better understanding.My next step is to do some reading milage..

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this year for term 1 i have learnt in literacy that kehu was the best  bushman and that he was

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this term I learnt how to write variety of poems all the poems I
learnt we’re all interesting because it was all about creative writing
I also learnt what it takes to be a good photographer it takes patience and a lot
of photo taking what I mean by that is I had to be precise of my photos. and at end I managed to finish my photo portfolio.

my next step is to try and find the authors message in the text I’m reading.
and how to write a interesting summary.

So far I’ve been doing comprehension activities about Adrian heke
these comprehension activity are helpful because it helps me to figure out
the info about the text and the authors message.

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This term I learnt so much about all the text I’ve been reading. It

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This term I learnt all about Poems and photography we did limerick haiku cinquain
whakapapa and other poems in our photography group we did our photos about nature buildings working and clouds.

For the texts we talk photo all about things like nature and other stuff we did poems and I enjoy the activities that we have done this term they help me lean more about the text.

If they can help me and understand more things about poems and help me to get better with other stuff we do and reading more of the texts.

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This term I have learnt about haiku poems and limericks.and learning about capturing photos. And learning about different kind of poems.

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leahana
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this week i have learnt how to do cinquian poem limerick poems and many more poems that i learnt during the  this week and also taking photos and editing them in different ways.

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I started to learn different type of Poetry like arcroo

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jaqwonn 1)
I have learnt how to write a different types of poetry like cinquain ,limericks ,and haiku poems and how people use it
jaqwonn 2) for writing this week i have learnt that photography is apart of visual  language.the text that we read this week is the great ordinary and  I was interested `in  reading it because it was about a girl photographing on people coming out of there driveways.
next step) is to read more deeply in to the story given and things that need to be done on time .

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1)This term I learnt fun of photos and with that is a project we have to take photos and write why you choose this topic

Next steps

1)I think I need to get work done more faster and keep improving in reading and writing

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This term In literacy I have learnt about a number of varieties of poetries and how to write them such as Acrostic, Limerick, Bio, Etc. I have also learnt about a specific photographer named Adrian Heke. The book talks about the meaning behind his photos and how to take professional photos.

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I think our activity are good because we’ve been doing alote of report but the teacher change it and now we’ve been alote of different poetry

I think our text are interesting because we’ve been staring to do alote of history and my text is about

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Moana
I have learnt so much about the text that I have read this term. It didn’t just tell me a story it told me a lengend about our future generations.and I also learnt that what people believe it could cause them there life.
And I think that the activity’s that we do are perfect to help us think outside the box instead of getting info from inside the text.

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leahana
my next step for me would like to do more poems or like bio writing on famous people and do more challenging work for our writing and reading.

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My next step in literacy
Is to explore and expand
My creativity and to use more ways
Of writing and to take more risks

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I think our activity is good because we’ve been doing alote of report but then the teacher changed it and now we’re doing alote of different type of porms

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I have learnt that Adrian heke was a very good photographer.
The thindg I liked about the photo shoot was taking the photos and editing them.
I found it quite interesting because I learnt a lot about taking photos in panorama and other types of photo settings.
I found a lot of different types of settings on the editing panel including lighting and contrast and all of those other types of setting that I played with.
Putting together the poster was quite fun as well.
I was able to pick we’re I could put the photos and all that.
But the sad thing was that accidentally cut through one of the photos that got printed and I only got to stick up 4 photos.
I took this really cool photo with a perfect plant with water drops on it.
The sad thing about that photo was that when it printed you couldn’t see the water drops.
It looked pretty lame but you could still see the plant.
The plant was perfect and the leaves were edited very well it was like a olden day photo.

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The learning in this space was kinda cool and,me learning how to take photos and edit them

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I think our activity is good because been doing alote of report but the teacher changed it and made us do something different like different type of poems like arcrostic poem and bio poem is about talking who you are and family and Limerick is the same as a shape poem and describing it and haiku and chinquapin is kind of similar because they have syllables.

I think our text are interesting because we’ve been doing alote of history like about Archickbald backster he was fighting his Owen war and his comrades and boss punish him by hanging him by a pole near the bombing area and not feedings Him then ather (about 10 or 13 years) he didn’t need to join the nz or brithis army to in fight the war

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In literacy I learnt about the reason how photo

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I learnt how to edit a photo by changing the frame and cropping them, putting some photos together was a hard decision to make since the sheet was A3.Before doing the photos we had to plan and make up some rhetorical questions for the audience to look at.I found taking the photos a little bit fun with my friends while doing it.

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Upulasi
This term was cool and fun because we were learning how to take outstanding photos also how to edit and trying our best to get better and better also we had to think about our own theme which was nature/morden learning also buildings

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Antonio
This term I learnt how to take photos and having a little bit of fun of taking photos
Like editing and picking your own theme for your photo like nature,morden buildings,school,and morden learning I have learnt how we take photos and the reason of taking it we take photos because the person looking at your photo might ask what the reason of taking it.

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Fiti
My next steps ate to push my learning and to try get a better score and to always try to beat my score every time.
Another one of my next steps are to expand my learning limits and try to succeed in everything that I am not good at so I can learn better.

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1 star: I really enjoyed our photography projects with all the editing on the photo.

2 star: I really enjoyed creating many types of genres with poems.The most favourite of all poems would have to be the whakapapa because  it has story behind it.

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For this term in literacy i want to do instructional writing and  for reading aswell.

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This term for literacy I have learnt how to write a Lv 4 report writing using the third person talk and for reading I have learnt the book building for the future and what was the main ideas about the new fala and if it was durable in the storm.

I struggled being with my critical partner because he always talks when the work for literacy.

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01/06/18
In term 2 for literacy we have been doing report writing and explanation writing we are doing these types of writing because sir is trying to refresh our minds.For reading on the other hand we are focusing on a specific book called CATCHING A SPACE DUCK.FOR THE TEXT WE GET,but also we get comprehension questions and the questions that we get is very good because it gives me a better understanding of the text.