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I notice it is not dry facts.

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I notice in all of the feature articles there are no dry facts.

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I notice that in the beginning it sounds very fun, and the author wrote it like that so the reader would have fun reading it. Example: it says, "Presto Chang-o!", In the mentor/frog text.

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She did not use dry facts she used

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I notice that miss.Korona's

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I notice that in miss korona's  has different sections

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There is no dry hard facts like,"running is good for you". Insted it says "running can inspire you to run in different locations.

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I notice the start of the text is very inspiring.

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Another thing that I notice on Miss Korona's is she added the links to where she found the pictures from. To give the website the credit.

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I notice there are no dry facts in the article.

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i noticed in the frog story is split into animals.

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I noticed that in Miss Korona's that instead of listing all those facts, she said " It is something that can be very relaxing and enjoyable..." I also like that she didn't use dry facts, and used ones that would hook the reader into her text.

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I like how Miss. Korona made a glossary.

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I notice that the writer made the story more interesting. I read Miss Korona's and she had examples of different stuff you can use to run. For example she talked about what shoes help with running. She gave examples too. Also she gave real examples for example how running is a healthy way to get exercise and even if it is not your taste there are other activitys to that help you exercise.

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I notice that the writer made the story more interesting. I read Miss Korona's and she had examples of different stuff you can use to run. For example she talked about what shoes help with running. She gave examples too. Also she gave real examples for example how running is a healthy way to get exercise and even if it is not your taste there are other activitys to that help you exercise.

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I notice that Mrs. Korona article is very convincing.

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I noticed that in Miss Korona's

article had lots of facts to hook that readers .

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I notice that in Miss Korona's feature article that she has packed her article with lots of facts, but they aren't boring fact after boring fact. There is a lot to read, but it is really interesting.

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I noticed that  there is no dry facts.

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I notice that on Miss Korona's feature article she made the words in the glossary bold so that the readers would know they were in the glossary.

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I notice that Miss Koronas article is very well written and she uses details to support the main idea.

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i also think that there is no dry facts