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Check out how Maclaren uses useful conjunctions throughout, as well as explaining how the moment influenced his identity

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I like how Callie's 2nd paragraph builds on her first

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Good example of explaining how/why a certain moment impacted on her.

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Check out how Noah redrafted his paragraphs in JOLT

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This is a fantastic example from Alesha. What makes this such a great answer?