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The point of view is third person.

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This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15

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1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? 

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1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? 

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The person telling my story is third person view and their name is Savannah.

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This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question.

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This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question.

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What are the universal human rights? - Benedetta Berti

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Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? 

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Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? 

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It makes it an unjust society by not being able to pick your job and it has to do with freedom.

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What do you have to do for this assignment?

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2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? 

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2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? 

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My story takes place in the summer of 2017 at Beverly hills. What  makes it unjust is that there is a racist person that is not allowing certain people geit hired at her clothing store.

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How to recognize a dystopia - Alex Gendler

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The characters are Theo, Neema, decider,

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Student Model for the Writing Prompt

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3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 

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3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 

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My characters are
The Boss at clothing store: Veronica
The girl looking for a summer job: Savannah
Savannah's best friend: Vanessa
Savannah's boyfriend: Jake
Savannah's mom: LIzzy
Savannah's dad: Larry

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The conflict is that Theo wanted to be a song writer but the government made him a black smith

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How will you be graded for this writing?

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4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? 

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4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? 

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The problem is that the boss won't hire Savannah because she is Mexican and she really wants to be a clothes designer.

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Event #:Black smiths were working in a smithy
Event #:Theo tells the decider he wants to be a song writer so the decider told him he was a black smith
Event # (Climax):Theo decides to sing his song and the black smiths join him.
Event #: The authorities catch Theo singing and they suspend him from speaking and singing.
Event #:Neema gets mad by whats happens and takes a stand.
Event #(Resolution): The government realizes that they can't force people to work at jobs that they don't want to do.

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5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face?

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5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face?

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They resolve their conflict by getting Michell Obama to show a difference that everyone should be allowed to do anything.

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The theme is to go with what you want to do and great things will come.

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6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 

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6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 

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My characters grow by being kind to everyone and by the world being better then it was before.

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What is it like to live in an unjust society? Write a paragraph that focuses on a fiction or nonfiction narrative that you could write.

I think what its like to live in a unjust society is trapped because you can't do what you want.

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7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 

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7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 

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The most exciting moment is that savannah gets to work at the clothing store and owns it now.

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8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 

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8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 

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In want my readers to know that just being a different doesn't mean anything.

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Use my plot diagram as an example of what I expect from you.

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Instructions: Create a plot diagram for your story on printer paper. It should have 8 events. Use your brainstorm to help you. Please draw it neatly like this and in pencil. Use my plot diagram as an example of what  I expect from you.