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Very good at both positively and negatively commentating on his own process which, in my opinion, is pretty impressive and honest

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The handle and the cover added an awesome transport part, making it creative. I also like that you made it bigger as the smaller you get the harder it is to put everything in there

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If you were to carry on with this, would you maybe incorporate a brief case type of design, where it can fold and have a handle

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I think its cool how you are able to adjust the height.

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Maybe paint over the ducktape to make it look nicer

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Maybe paint over the ducktape to make it look nicer

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simple slides but was able to elaborate on the images extremely well

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I think the handle is actually a bit more practical and a cool interpretation of trying to make the device portable.

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Presentation was well organized and well presented

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Explained well so I was able to understand the process and the function of the design

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Nails and wood, as you said just touching up on the neatness of it

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well done, explained your reasoning very well

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Lens cover is super sick, wish i would have thought of that.

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Maybe notches on the sides so that you can use less glue and tape

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Potentially use something other than tape.