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Dear Laura,

The majority of ideas in your texts are clear and more importantly they are expanded which give the different paragraphs background information. In general, the texts have interesting and catching pieces of information and so it's better and more appealing to read. Nevertheless, sometimes there are difficulties to understand the tense used due to misuse of conjugation in past. Also, you could've included more connectors to make the sentences smoother and more sequenced when read.

Your  performance

Con: 4,5
Voc & Sp: 3
Text order: 4
Grammar: 3,5

Global grade: 3,7

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yes i'have a scary moment when i was skate whit my friends araud the my neighborhood and i finished in a down hill!!! i'm so scary i thought i'm going to die  mom i love u.
i sooo scary because i was going very fast but i managet to brake whit my foot , my tennis fisnish damaged =(

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I was born and raised in Bogota Colombia , Actually i'm study graphic deseinger second semesterand i'll start studying animation in jorge tadeo lozano university my big dream is a work on disney pixar is a most incredibly company on the world . that place is where the dreams come true .

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I was born and raised in Bogota Colombia , Actually i'm study graphic deseinger second semesterand i'll start studying animation in jorge tadeo lozano university my big dream is a work on disney pixar is a most incredibly company on the world . that place is where the dreams come true .

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when i was finish my two careers i move move in USA. because  when i was a children i always see disney chanell and pixar  movies I knew all the dialogues for all movies and i dream to work draw more stories i make a lot crazy stories creatively .
i can make skate bording , swimming, skating , play tennis , and basketball ,but when I get cancer i had to leave many of those sports but i feel strongly for staying life .
in a free time i go to skate park or only i stay in bed watching netflix or disney chanel / pixar movies obviusly . and something that i learned is to spend time with the family because you never know at what moment you are going to stop living .

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Hello my name is Laura valentina Herrera Penagos  but my friends call me Lu .i am eighteen years old and i consider i'm not a patient person when I have to wait a long time or when i doing my homeworks and other person interrupt me . i'm a fast skater driver but i trie to have a careful driver in a skate park . i'm incredibly talented and creative but that does not make me a crazy person i'm very down to earth .
i absolutely not shy . i'm so friendly  , love so much talk whit new people .
I hope you have been able to know more about me . xoxo