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The positive effects of many young people going to shopping malls.

CHIA THEO OBJECTS:

Young people

shopping malls

Sellers

owners

CHIA THEO ASPECTS:

+ Work and job

+ Education

+ HEALTH (MENTAL HEALTH + PHYSICAL HEALTH)

+ ENVIRONMENT

+ ENTERTAINMENT

+ CULTURE

+ ECONOMY/ FINANCE (MONEY)

+ LAWS/ CRIMES (SECURITY)

+ TECHNOLOGY/ MEDIA

+ SOCIETY (RELATIONSHIPS)

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The positive effects of many young people going to shopping malls.

(Chọn những ý nào có giá trị đại diện)

1. ECONOMY

- Shopping  retailers tăng  -> jobs AND income levels tăng -> a healthy economy và country phát triển

(1 tuyến tính 1 chiều, chứ không suy lung tung hoặc nhảy bước )

With the rapid development of consumerism, the shopping demand of young individuals is increasingly high -> a massive influx of shopping mall- goers which can result in JOB CREATION [E09]  and increase income levels through considerable rise in the product consumption   -> contribute to A HEALTHY ECONOMY [E09] / ECONOMIC GROWTH [E04] and in turn A PROSPEROUS NATION [E?] (C)

2. ENTERTAINMENT

Busy and stress (A) -> shopping with friends to relax (B) -> relieve stress (C) -> productivity (D)

- With the fast-paced life in the contemporary society, A BUSY WORK SCHEDULE [E46] of young workers nowadays  means/ is synonymous with increasing stress levels (A) -> spending time with family and friends at shopping malls with rewarding activities such as ….. could be regarded as A FORM OF ENJOYMENT [E07] (B) -> relieve stress after hectic days (C) -> maintain A PRODUCTIVE WORKING LIFE (E30) (D)

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The positive effects of many young people going to shopping malls.

Idea 1:

WITH the ability to keep up with the LATEST trend through social media, YOUNG PEOPLE are become a major consumer group that have high demand for shopping at fashionable stores often that are FREQUENTLY found only in shopping malls.-> brings profits to small retailers, company bosses contribute to society through the tax system[E11] →SPEND ON INFRASTRUCTURE (sử dụng cho cơ sở hạ tầng) and PUBLIC SERVICES (dịch vụ công) [E09] and ” to ensure(,WHICH CAN ENSURE) that residents HAVE A GOOD QUALITY OF LIFE[E10]

The positive effects of many young people going to shopping malls - TOPIC SENTENCE (biến thành một câu) . Firstly, ................ ..................................................................Secondly, .............

Young people are a large group that play an important role in shopping malls and generating consistent positive effects through taxes and creates job oppotunities. Firstly, with the ability to keep up with the lastest trend through social media, young people are become a major consumer group that have high demand for shopping at fashionable stores that are frequently found in shopping malls.

Firstly/ Secondly (main idea)

Indeed/ In fact (sup idea đầu tiên)

As a result/ ADV-clause

Idea 2:

Young people are more actively going to shopping malls or places with entertainments and dining options, because they have higher incomes and fewer concern like saving money to build house and raising children like older adultS-> the influx of young people in shopping malls leads to the development of various entertainment and food court venues →The presence of many stores and restaurants creates job opportunities. → reduce youth unemployment RATE

SVO/ VO

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The positive effects of many young people going to shopping malls.

Idea 1: young people update trends quickly- > > .....manufacturerS can....get more information about RECENT consumer needs - --> create more higher product quality....suit for consumer taste. ------> can sell more products --> sellers earn more money

Idea 2:. ......TẠI SAO NG TRẺ THÍCH ĐẾN SHOPPING MALLS ? ...... -> young people like go to shopping malls for shoppings, eating or entertaining ... --> promote the development of other entertainment services --> create more job opportunities for people in service industry

CONSOLIDATE

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The positive effects of many young people going to shopping mall

Idea 1: Economic promotion

Young people go shopping frequently -> improve sales of products sold -> have funds to continue developing.............

Idea 2: young people can find high-quality products

young people may afford many products with great quality

THE JOB MARKET NOW IS INCREASINGLY OPEN THAT NUMEROUS YOUNG PEOPLE CAN HAVE ENORMOUS INCOMES -> BE WILLING TO SPEND LARGE SUMS OF MONEY ON HIGH-QUALITY PRODUCTS buying high-quality products become a trend -> -> MASSIVE INFLUX OF YOUNG SHOPPING MALL GOERS CAN MAKE manufacturers increase product quality standards -> .......IMPROVE CUSTOMERS' QUALITY OF LIFE ..........

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Aim: ...........

Expected test date: .................

Concern: ...............................

PRE-OVERALL (4 months): 1 năm chỉ có 3 khóa (khai giảng tháng 8/9)

INTENSIVE - OVERALL (2 months): sĩ số ít hơn

------> dựa vào test date

HIGH-ACHIEVERS (2months)

IELTS WRITING

IELTS READING

TIẾT KIỆM 1-1: học qua file PDF/ GG docs

SMART IELTS: Practice về Writing + Speaking -----> 400k (2 tháng)

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The positive effects of many young people going to shopping malls.

• Idea 1: Young people going to shopping malls plays an important part in economy

YOUNG PEOPLE usually have a high demand for shopping ...-> Many young people going to shopping malls CAN boost the shopping demand -> help increasE sales of PRODUCTS SOLD IN the shopping malls —> promote the development of service industry

• Idea 2: Many young people going to shopping malls is beneficial for global exchanging

—>shopping malls, which have many department stores of the high-end and popular brands around the world -> young people, who usually follow the latest trend, will WOULD be willing to spend money buying luxury products —>enhance exchanging activities

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The explosion of the internet allows many people to access information quickly.

Young people are a group of people who strongly influence the economy.

They have a high-speed update on every hot trend in the world such as hot events, high technology, fashion styles, etc.

And they always be ready to spend money on those things.

competition between the young people that requires the manufacturer | and producer to update daily to debut the newest, modern, special, and even unique items with high cost. That boosts the economy improving

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Aim: >=6.0 IELTS

Expect test date: mar 2025

concern: Grammar > Vocabulary > Language reaction

HỌC LẠI 50% KHÓA FOUNDATION

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Aim: 6.5

Expected test date: t12/ 2024 hoặc các tháng đầu năm sau

Concern: Dạ thi cuối khóa sẽ thi như nào ạ

LISTENING: lục lại 8 đề Listening test quá khóa + nghe entertaining sources (Youtube shorts + ellen shows + cartoons)

Reading + Writing: Đọc kĩ lại các bài đã chữa

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Aim: 6.5

Expected test date: 3/2025

Concern:

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Aim: 7.5

Expected test date: August 2025

Concerns: hard to remember knowledge in long time

------> Xem phim + speaking practice + Đọc báo