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Write down the comment in the padlet

Focus on:

1. Grids (correct no. of boxes, accurate box content, same size of each box)

2. Shades (the three-way to do shading, did it use all of them?)

3. Thick lines (any thick lines? is it in the correct place to do it?)

In general, is anything good and anything bad?

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在Padlet上寫下評論

重點：

1. 格線（方塊數量，方塊內容，方塊大小）

2. 陰影（三種陰影方法，是否都使用了？）

3. 粗線（有沒有使用粗線？是否放在正確的位置上？）

總的來說，有什麼好的地方和不好的地方嗎？

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No. 1:

For the grids, the total number of grids is not correct, even though the size is even, the content of each box is not aligned with the given picture.

For the shading, all three kinds of shading skills are used. The lightest parts show the gradient of the iris and the eyeball. the skills on the eyelashes are very realistic. Only if the middle part of the eye can be darker.

For the thick lines, no thick line is used.

Overall, it is a fair work to me.

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No.1：

在格線方面，格子的總數目不正確，雖然大小是均勻的，但每個方塊的內容與給定的圖片不對齊。

在陰影方面，使用了三種陰影技巧。最淺的部分展示了虹膜和眼球的漸變效果，睫毛部分的技巧非常逼真。只有眼睛的中間部分可以更暗一些。

在粗線方面，沒有使用粗線。

整體而言，我認為這是一份尚可的作品。

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No-24

運用方格，注意細節很好

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No.15,25

No.15’s drawing is not to good, it doesn’t have enough detail. It’s not to good to be honest, but I know you can do better. I hope you can do better next time.😁

No.25’s drawing is pretty good, it has enough detail to know it’s an eye. But I think it needs more shading in the Iris of the eye.

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Number:6,17,24

For 6,they did not add any thick lines,the shades aren’t that obvious,you can barely see them,and the grid isn’t straight,either,but the art turned out kinda good,so I’d rate it a “fair”.👍🤔😳

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Number:6,17,24

For 17,they added shades,but forgot to make thick lines.Their grids aren’t that straight.They also DID add shades.So I’d rate it another”fair”.🙂

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No· 9

模糊不清，眼睛太宽太大， 格式正常大小均匀， 渐变效果不明显 阴影方面效果也是不明显 没有高光 眼睫毛到一半突然没有了（不均匀）没有使用粗线 眼珠没有渐变的效果

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No.1

A bit too small, no thick line, the grids is a bit not equal, there not much shading but it's a fair product

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No.19:

The shades good enough but could be more nicer

Eyelid not enough need more although is good

The eye itself need to be more specific like it can use lines to make the shadows

The grids could be better

The lines is normal could be nicer

Overall it’s a fair work to me

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NO.7

我覺得這幅畫不是畫得太好，因為下面嗰條臥蠶完全冇畫到，仲有佢冇畫淚溝，還有他的格式嗰個框不均勻 大小不同 畫嗰陣時冇跟住格式畫 我覺得佢要畫多啲幾多點陰影 。

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No.16

For the grids, the total number of the grids is correct, but in the right hand side the grids is too small , the shades only have a little bite,I cannot see much,so I cannot see the three-way to do shading.for the thick lines , it do not have any thick lines. In the general I think it is bad.

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No.37

You work hard and I like your work very much!!! But I think you can work harder. Just add some more thick lines and some shading and I give you 5-10.and your grids are pretty good.but I think it a bad work to me.

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No.21

shading not enough need more

Grids not really good but could be nicer

The lines on the the whole eye is too high

Eyeball not specific enough

Overall it’s bad

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No.2

For the grids,the total number of the grids is correct,and the size is the same .

For the shading ,it only had two kinds of shading are used.

For the thick lines ,it doesn’t have any thick. Over all is fair to me.

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Number:6,17,24

For 24,the grids aren’t straight,there are barely any shades and the lines aren’t thick enough.So I’d rate it a “bad”.🤨🫣

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No.35

1 Grids (The grids has the same number of grids on the picture but they do not have the same size.)

2 eyelashes (Your eyelashes colour are to light I can’t see them clearly . The eyelashes are also to short if it was longer it will be better.)

3 Eyeballs (The darkest point of the eyeball is the middle dot but you have the same colour for the middle dot and the iris. In the eyeball I can see reflections of the light which is good.)

4 Shading (You did use shading but not all three kinds.)

After all it is a fair work to me.

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第二十眼角膜不规范、瞳孔長了七根毛、下面的眼睫毛看不到、格子也画的不规范丶有一些不是眼睛来的，其他都可以。 一般

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No.10

The grids is average and the total number is correct.let’s talk about the shades.You did’nt use the shades in the pic.You just colour the eyeball with blackness.You did great in the thick line.And your eyelashes are straight but in the pic. the pic. is centre.

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No.12

For the grids, the total number of grids are correct. They did not use all the shades. The thick line looks fine and the eyelashes looks good. The eyeball doesn’t have much shading. In the eye, there is a random line and it looks weird. They also erased a little bit of the lines from the grid while drawing the eyeball. This eye has a light colour for the inside and I think it needs a bit more lines in the eyeball or some more shading for darker colours. This eye looks good anyways. Not very good but fair.

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No.33

我覺得呢幅畫框歪咗仲有格仔大小不平均 但佢有畫淚溝 我建議佢要畫多啲陰影 她反光畫得還好 不過眼眉毛可以畫長啲 他畫得還可以

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No-18

沒有利用方格，沒有注意細節，沒有運用粗線

完善這三點，就會有很大的進步

不是很好

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No.11

1格線標準對着眼睛眼睫毛很長 丶2有一點點陰影，但不多 丶3粗線只有一條。

我的感覺還好，是但不多

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No.31

1. Grids. I think the grids can be more straight , maybe you need to use a ruler next time.

2. shades. the eyeball is too dark and I think the outer part can be more different I think is not that good.

3.The eyelashes is too dark not visible and too thick ,not fair.I know you can do better!

-bad

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No.3

I think it perfect to me and your thick lines are pretty good. it a very nice one and I like it. It a good work.

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No.28

The number of grids are correct and they used all the shades. It looks good with the shading. They had a thick line, but it could look a bit better. The eyelashes looks long and it’s pretty that way. The eyeball shape looks good, but the circle is not round enough like a real eye. The shading looks super good and there is even the small details there. This eye sketch looks good and I like it very much.

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No.36

1. You didn’t really use shading so the eyeball is a little bit too pale.

2. The lines of the eye is too thin so you need to make it more thick.

3. Your centre of the eyeball is a bit too far away from the cross.

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No.38

For the grids ,the total number is correct, but the size is uneven.

For the shading ,it used some shading skills .

For the thick lines it used it in the right place.

Over all is good

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No.34

我覺得畫得太淺色了 應該要畫多啲陰影 眼睫毛畫得太開 要畫得密一點 中間的圓圈應該要畫圓啲 個格式畫得太不平均 太歪 我覺得不是畫得太好

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No.24

For the grids I cannot see the lines clearly. For the shades I cannot see it clearly too ,I only can see the pencil lines.for the thick lines ,there have some thick lines , but only a little on the top .in the middle of the eye ball it is too small. For the general ,it is in the middle in the good and bad.

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No· 36

这幅画可圈可点 模糊不清 格式大小均匀 眼睛没有高光 眼睛没有渐变效果高 眼睛的细节线条也没有 不过眼睫毛非常逼真很好看 没有使用粗线 阴影做到了 线条均匀 太浅色了 双眼皮做得一般般 画的画其实很细节 总结：希望这位同学下次能画的深色一点 更好看

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No.29

格式對正眼睛感覺很好。

沒有畫粗線。

很好的陰影因為他覺得好明顯。 感覺很好。

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第二十七。

眼睛画的有一点长、眼睫毛太长了、眼结膜画成了椭圆形。

一般

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No.30

This pic. is good. Let’s say from the grids,the grids number is correct and the grids is average.how about the shades? It is good you put it in the eyeball.I like it very much.

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No.39

Too messy,it’s a bad product

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No.8.32

It need more shades because most of it is line but did not make in to shades.The grids are not long it’s short it needs to be a little bit longer some of the grids are not sticking on the lines.the iris is not like a circle it’s like a like a straight some of it are straight lines some of it are not straight lines

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No.5

1 colour (Your colour is too pale I almost can’t see anything.)

2 Grids (You did use enough grids but they are not the same size.)

3 Eyeball (It is in a shape of a pentagon it should be in the shape of a circle .)

4 eyelashes ( I can’t see your eyelashes.)

It is a bad work to me .:(

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number 15. The grids too much and their not in the same size

The shading’s quality is bad and did not shade all it is hard to see clearly of the shading they did not draw thick lines and did not draw the eyebrows properly

Over all it isn’t really good

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No.10

This drawing was a pretty good drawing.I liked it the eyelashes were a little ugly but the eyes were really good and the eyelid looked nice too and it made it even better I picked this drawing because it looked really realistic .

It is a good piece.

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the grids is good but it is not that visible and it’s hard to see

And the size are equal so over all the grids are good

But the they forgot to shade the left side of the eye they only shade the eyeball Overall it’s ok for me

The thick lines needs to be thicker plus they draw too much details on the eyebrows

So over all it’s a good sketch

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No.19

1.The grids are in the correct number, not all of them are in the same size.

2.The eyelashes are pretty realistic at the top, but pretty messy at the bottom.

3.Shading has three-way to do it, he/she used two types of shading that is scrubbing the lines and colouring it completely.

4.The thick lines are not pretty, there are still some places to draw thick lines.

The eye’s shape is in bad shape, there are dents everywhere not like a smooth line.

For my perspective, it’s pretty bad, sorry

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no·8

First the box is not enough

Next the corner of the eye :I can’t see

Then there is no thick line and you didn’t shade didn’t use the way to do shading and no eyelashes

Overall it is fair for me

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no.14

格仔大小不一樣。眼珠可以再圓點。沒有用完所有的做陰影方法。捽得線沒了很好。沒有用粗線。一般

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No.11

This drawing is pretty although no thick lines are used and the eyeball is not perfectly a circle .The shading was only used on one side of the eye.The total number of the grids are correct.The corner of the eye was not drawn.The eyelashes were not drawn on the top left corner.

Lastly I think this drawing is a fair drawing Good Work!

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No.1

For the boxes

The person did not do the boxes equally

The person did too much boxes too

The shades aren’t that good too

The person did the lines too rub but they didn’t rub it

They didn’t shade some parts of the eye too

They didn’t use the thick line on the top of the eye too

The eye ball is not dark enough

It should be the darkest

I think the eyelash is a bit too short too

Overall I think this isn’t really a good sketching because there are lots to improve

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No.4

第一格子的總數目是正的有16個剛剛好,大小也是均勻

內容與給定的圖片裏,他畫沒有用粗線

只有用二種陰影,是一個好的作品

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No.6

First the box is not so well the eye ball is too small but the outside eye is ok and the black eye ball is small if more bigger is better . The shape of the eye ball outside need to more bigger. eyelashes is too many and too short but the box is ok because you got 16 box. I think is normal your draw

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No.20

眼珠太方◼️，格線不整齊的線條不清楚🥲方格又有長方形又有正方形◼️不夠陰影😭沒有粗線但有用對位置👍🏻總結來說好的地方是🈶️用對地方，不好地方是格線線條不清楚。加油💪🏻

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No.9

1.Grids I think the grids are straight,and the grids are average too. Good!

2.Shades. I know the middle of the eye can be more dark ,the left side of the shade can be more dark it will be good! If you can improve more, it will be good！

3.Thick lines. First I am going to talk about the eyelashes Is too long the right corner eyelashes is very long , but it’s very thick the eyelashes is too straight.The lower part can improve!

-Fair

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No.7

1. 格線

我認為他的格線十分清𥇦又整齊，不會太多或少，不僅如此，他的格線方方正正，十分好看。

2. 陰影

這方面就不太好，因為眼角和眼球沒有太多陰影，他的陰影也不深，幾乎看不到，希望可以加深一點。

3. 粗線

雙眼皮不夠深，眼線也沒有顏色，眼睫毛也可以再加深一點顏色

這方面可以改善。

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No.12

The grids are curve.It is completely not straight and some of the lines are gone which mean some of the box turn into a rectangle.

The shading are fine,all three shading skills was in the picture.The eyebrows are very realisticBut it has to be more darker.But other than that,it is good.

The thick lines are okay but the wrinkles are really good because it is really thick and I love it

Overall,it is fine,I’ll rate it a 7 out of 10.

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No.34

The outside box is too messy the eyeball is long but is ok next the eyeball outside is good and the eyelashes is good too . The colour of the black one need more little bit black . Shading need more black . So your drawing is still good too.

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No.5

1.Grids. It has an accurate number of boxes. However,some boxes are not the same size.

2.Shades. according to the three-ways to do shading,did it use them properly?there is every few eye lashes.

3.Thick lines.is there any thick lines? Is the eye shape correct?

Seeing all this,it is a bad work for me.

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No.36

格仔的數目是正的，不過有啲格子有大有小也有長方形

內容大致位置都不一樣，沒有粗線

沒有陰影,眼球和眼睛太小

是個不太好的作品

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No． 1 7 The eye has no colour but the eye ball has colour·

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no. 35

For the grids the total

number of grid is correct

Have shading and have thick lines

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No.30

The drawing is a bit of a mess but it is very nice to the eyelashes looking goofy 🙃 I’m not sure if it will look good for anyone but I think it’s just the eyes that make the drawing look like a goofy ahh drawing ❓the shading was a little goofy 🙃 but it looks good 🤪🤪

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no.26

眼角可以再尖點。格仔很整齊。沒有用到陰影。沒有用到粗線。眼睫毛生在不正常的位置。很差

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No.21

1. The grids are pretty messed up, none of them are in the same size.

2. The pupil is in the Center of the grids, coloured black.

3. The eyelashes are too short and not that visible.

4. The eyes shape is too big because he/she messed up the grids, the line are pretty smooth.

5. The shading has three ways to do it, he/she did one of them, scrubbing the lines.

Everything together, I think this is pretty decent enough.

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No.39

For the boxes

The person did not do them equally but however they didn’t draw too much or less boxes

For the shades

They did the eyeball the darkest and that is good far the shades around the eye ball isn’t that good

The person did not shade the areas around the eye

they didn’t use the thick line method too they just coloured the eye

Far the eyelashes they aren’t that good

The person did not draw line by line but just colour it

I think it is ok but have quite a lot to improve

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38

Tzsyu. 格仔不一樣少陰影，冇乜點樣用過粗線有用嗰冇乜用到粗線，但係有啲位有用粗線

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No． 23

The eye is too big ． The eye ball is too big too．

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No.29

我認為不錯的👍🏻瞳孔🈶️放在🀄️間，但格線不正整沒有用粗線‼️有陰影但不多。總結來說好的有瞳孔，不好的眼角沒顏色

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38

很好，因為有16格粗線冇用到要用嘅位置你冇用到陰影。

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No.28

For the grids,the total number of grids is correct.The eyeball is perfectly in the middle and the shape is even.The eyelashes are not really even although it is realistic.The corner of the eye was not drawn.

For the shading,not much shading were used except for the centre of the eye.No thick lines were used.

Overall,It is a good drawing Good job!

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No.27

The grids are good,it is straight and it is clear.but the shading are fine,and I don’t hate it.but can add more shading though.And the eyebrows are not that good because it is not that viewable and there not not much eyebrows so that is not that good.For the thick lines,it is not that good,it doesn’t contain many thick lines.

Overall,I rate this a 6 out of 10.

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No.16

我認為這隻眼睛特別小，但是眼球卻特別圓還有一點就是方格的大小不一樣，並且眼睫毛只畫了一半，眼珠的顏色太淺色所以我覺得這隻眼晴不好看。

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No.18

格線正整但有大小格😱畫得不像圖片，沒有陰影，沒有粗線不夠完美

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No.33

1. 格線

十分好，格線十分清楚，也十分整齊，方方正正，十分好看，可以有進步空間！

2. 陰影

可以加深一點，可是他的眼角沒有陰影，眼珠也沒有用陰影，下次畫可以畫深一點。

3. 粗線

粗線可以加多一點，如在眼角丶眼線丶眼珠……加深一點會更加好，眼睫毛也是可以嘗試去加強一下喔！

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No.32

For the gird, it has a correct number of boxes.the sizes are fair to me.

For shading,it used to shading ways,but it could try to use the third

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no.3

它的方塊數量是16塊，我覺得它的方塊大小也都是一樣的，但是它方塊裏的的內容畫少了，本來要畫眼開電視睫毛的地方沒畫，是空的。

畫者陰影的的地方也有畫，他在眼睛前面不太光的地方有畫，還有它眼珠被眼睫毛遮住的地方也有畫陰影。

還有它的粗線在眼線那裏不是太清楚，有點細，然後它眼睫毛有的是粗他畫了。

它眼睛裏面的深淺色也有畫。

雙眼皮也都畫了。

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No.22

格線完整，沒有粗線，眼睛形壯也沒有用陰影