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Week 7 - Reflection on Listening & Speaking Skills

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Week 7 - Reflection on Listening & Speaking Skills

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Week 11 - True Cost of Fast Fashion Worksheet

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Week 11 - True Cost of Fast Fashion Worksheet

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12-4 worksheet Fast Fashion_Student version (4)

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Week 10 - Opinions on The True Cost Documentary

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Week 10 - Opinions on The True Cost Documentary

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Week 7 - Reflection on Reading & Writing Skills

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Week 7 - Reflection on Reading & Writing Skills

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Week 14 - Reading Paper on Making Fashion Sustainable

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Week 14 - Reading Paper on Making Fashion Sustainable

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COMPLETE Reading Paper_Making Fashion Sustainable(1) (1)

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Sentence Structure 1 - Worksheet 2 (Padlet)(2)

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Oxford EAP 3C Task 6 p43 - Writing definitions

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Oxford EAP 3D Task 7 (p47) (Writing a paragraph with a definition)

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Week 6 - Oxford EAP - 4D Task 6 (p61) - Writing a paragraph (120-150 words)- Alternative Formats

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Week 6 - BB Past tense exercises- Alternative Formats1

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Week 11 - Oxford EAP Unit 7D Task 7&8 - Writing an Introduction.

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3_News Article on Climate - for students

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The next level to the top--self-esteem needs

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Norah-Is human activity primarily responsible for global climate change

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Assets, liabilities and owner's equity

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Week 5 - Discussion on Sustainable Cities

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Week 5 - Discussion on Sustainable Cities

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Week 10 - Presentation about a Successful Company

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Week 10 - Presentation about a Successful Company

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Panjin Red Beach, located in Zhaoquanhe Township, Dawa County, Panjin City, Liaoning Province, is the best preserved and largest wetland resource in the world. Every October, a large area of Suaeda salsa gathers into a red ocean, which is spectacular. There is also 860,000 mu of reed field, the largest in the world, which is the southernmost limit for red-crowned cranes to breed and the main breeding ground for rare birds in the world. Welcome to watch it in autumn. Its scenery will shock you.

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Week 12 - Summarise Article on Fast Fashion

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Week 12 - Summarise Article on Fast Fashion

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Essay Feedback
Hi Norah
Here is my feedback on your essay.
1. Your essay structure is quite good and includes an outline in the introduction. However, you thesis is not clear and it should have stated your stance on the effectiveness of the solutions. Also, some of your topic sentences are good and express the main idea for the paragarph, but some aren't clear or don't express the main point.
2. You have described the problems quite well, but the solutions are lacking details of how they would be implemented. There is also little evaluation of the solution, which was a vital part of this essay.
3. Most of your in-text citations are accurate and integrated well within your writing, but remember to only include the family name and not the author's first name or initials.

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Portfolio of Work Feedback
Hi Norah
Here is my feedback on your Padlet.
You have demonstrated a high standard of work throughout the semester and produced a very good portfolio of work. Your time management has been excellent throughout the semester and you completed all tasks on time. As for vocabulary, you have used a very creative style, and you have recorded a lot of useful academic vocabulary that will be beneficial for your future study. The collocations you recorded are very important as they help you to use the words correctly within your writing. As for independent study, you completed several tasks that focussed on different language areas. Try to increase the amount of self study you do each week and focus on areas that you need to improve.
Here are some points to help with your writing next semester.
1. When citing sources, try to include a variety of reporting structures. For example, you can use structures like "according to …" or you can use reporting verbs like "argues that …".  Reporting verbs have many different meanings that can be used to emphasise your interpretation of the author's ideas.
2. Try not to start sentences with coordinating conjunctions (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so). Use transitions words instead like - However, Therefore, Since, Because … Another way to correct this would be to join the sentence with the preceding sentence using a coordinating or subordinating conjunction.
Well done this semester, and I hope you have a great Chinese New Year

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Good day. I hope you're all right and enjoying the break. I have included comments below on your semester.

You have shown an exceptional quality of work during this past semester and presented a superior digital portfolio. Additionally, you implemented the tasks in a punctual time frame which shows superb time management skills. Your listening and speaking skills have improved throughout the semester, and I recognized more natural speaking skills in our coursework presentations. These successful presentations characterized your growing language acquisition and confidence. Moreover, everyone’s desire to speak more proficient English is influenced by independent study. Strive to enhance the quantity of autonomous learning daily and pursue content that you are passionate about. Furthermore, acquire a genuine curiosity and passion for language knowledge. If you do, your English language acquisition will continue flourishing.