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Thank you Michelle for completing Module 1. This is an thought provoking piece of work that develops from research into practice.

Your approach having a specific theme and comparing this to another global curriculum is strong through this piece of work and the right approach for the masters.

I would like you to consider the following in your next module -

Using those command verbs in your introduction and focusing on these in your planning and assessment.

When you are making statements always demonstrate what the research is saying. Moving away from having research that supports what you think, to the research influencing your ideas and thoughts.

Being consistent in your critical discussion and demonstrating a balance of views.

Keep any organisations anonymous