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My ad was not very organized and I was jumping around a lot. My plan to improve my analysis, I could rethink on what to mention at the beginning, middle, and end. I could also provide more background on the product and add a "hook." I can add more personality and cleverness to sound more appealing to the reader. Go more in detail with the tone and add more vocab. 

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My ad was not very organized and I was jumping around a lot. My plan to improve my analysis, I could rethink on what to mention at the beginning, middle, and end. I could also provide more background on the product and add a "hook." I can add more personality and cleverness to sound more appealing to the reader. Go more in detail with the tone and add more vocab. 

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I would want to clean up some areas and probably add some more detail

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I plan on finishing answering all necessary bullet points of the ad critique and working on the flow and structure afterwards.

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Making sure to take multiple viewpoints and perspectives to find reasoning, how effective it was, and how it could possibly be more effective

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Being objective and willing to weigh in the effectiveness of the product's design in regards to everyone.

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It is more laid back and you can go in almost any direction you want

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I wont use words like I,Me, and My. Also I will use the word audience more.

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A strong critique portrays the messages found throughout the ad and includes an original thought process.

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A strong critique portrays the messages found throughout the ad and includes an original thought process.

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The ad that everyone chose was very dependent on what type of media they were consuming. Whether it be Youtube, Instagram, or live TV.

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My ad was all over the place and I didn't have a specific format. I had an idea but I also didn't know how to write it down because it was difficult for me to understand what we were doing. I can use my peers comment to improve the format and its context to make it much more clearer.

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I noticed a very objective, straightforward, and reasonable tone in the samples and my peer's examples which aren't necessarily unique to the art of critiquing but very suitable. Critiquing focuses on how well something, in this case, an advertisement, fulfills the intended purpose, of being sold to the consumer. My peers did a really nice job explaining what was or weren't effective and why it was that way.

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I plan to add a few more details about the ad, and maybe a paragraph on the overall effectiveness of the ad. Also, there are a few grammar issues that need fixing, but that later wait it can.

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I am going to work on ensuring the writing flows correctly, as well as integrating more information into the text to get my point across better

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What I found unique about this type of writing was that both of my peers' examples focused heavily on what was being perceived and what effect that would have on viewers.

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Not being biased and looking at it like you have never met the person before. Also not holding back but not being super mean

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I hope to look for a way I can make my information flow any better than I organized it the first time. I also hope to dig deeper on visuals and descriptions so the reader can get a better understanding of the ad.

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Give more feedback instead of just summarizing.

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I plan to change the structure of my paragraphs so they make more sense

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A strong critique is made when the critique is able to look at all parts of the ad in an objective manner

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I plan to make it flow better, break it up, and add to more and more to my existing points so they cover an overall better view of the ad.

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Not stating the obvious, and keeping it separate from personal emotions

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I plan on reading over my critique and seeing if I have an surface level errors like spelling and/or grammar. Then i plan on making sure every sentence flows together and my critique does not sound choppy.

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I need to add more critique to mine as I feel that I am mostly analyzing the ad.

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A strong critique consists of an unbiased opinion. It is also strong when they judge the what they are critiquing beyond the surface.

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I plan on reorganizing my paragraphs and re-formatting my introduction to more clearly highlight my thesis statement

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They summarized while also giving feedback.

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I will get into more detail and explain the ad further because my peers said it wasn't enough information

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I will get into more detail and explain the ad further because my peers said it wasn't enough information

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The sample writing had a more straightforward approach by not using a lot of emotion, but the peer writing had more emotion and original thoughts

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Providing background on the company and mentioning the popularity of clothing items in the ad. 

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Providing background on the company and mentioning the popularity of clothing items in the ad. 

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being honest and unbiased while analyzing every detail of your subject

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being honest and unbiased while analyzing every detail of your subject

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All the analysis focused more on the effectiveness of the advertisement than why they were made

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Making an unbiased statement, while still having it retain all necessary and true facts.

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A strong critique is made by being unbiased and using strong evidence from the ad to show how it is biased (ex. the colors, music, voiceover, etc.)

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These critiques look at how the writings affect people rather than their contents exclusively

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Making direct statements that are not opinion based.

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my peers' examples were very well written and critical without seeming biased or overly harsh/kind

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Something that is unique to this type of writing is getting to see a certain ad through your own eyes but also through the eyes of people who have different opinions or experiences than you.

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Their samples were simple and gave enough information for me to understand what they were analyzing

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Their samples were simple and gave enough information for me to understand what they were analyzing

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My peers' examples were showing effectiveness of the ad by not being biased by its context.

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Giving good, honest, productive feedback.

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i plan on making sure that all of the sponsors that were involved are spoke about

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I noticed that my partners used ads that were related to things that mattered to them or were about sports that they played. My partners also wrote from an unbiased perspective which made it easier to analyze with them.

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The way the critique was structured is different for every ad depending on what was the most prevalent part of the ad that needed to be critiqued/analyzed such as the cultural significance

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Providing accurate statements that are less subjective and more factual

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It showed the overall effectiveness of the ad while staying unbiased and really playing on the emotion or Pathos aspect.

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In my rough draft I almost felt like I just put all of my thoughts onto the page without working on structuring it. This made for a good start or body of work but I would like to restructure it to talk more about individual points.

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These analyses focus more on sensory effects of the ads than other types of writing.

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an unbiased accurate opinion

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Because it is a critique, you have to be overly critical and look for things that should be there or are missing from the ad that could help it to be more effective.

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Having your own opinions

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both of my peers' samples were unbiased and showed me exactly what the ad was about

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Probably I would cite more rhetorical devices

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Being honest

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It gives a bias free statement and shows how effective the ad was without being biased.