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... the city (that) I have lived in... is the complete sentence. Since the city is a place, it should be "I have lived in." If the sentence use where instead of that, it will be "I have lived."

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Do you want to stay in the city you currently live in or move to another city and why? I like Guangzhou, the city I have lived in for my whole life because it combines the feature of modern cities and the traditional culture of China.

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Even though using a if sentence will not generate any grammatical issues, changing it into a clause can improve the clarity of the sentence.

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Will is a modal verb so the the verb become should use the bare infinitive form which is "become" instead of to become."

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The form of interrogative sentence is: WH-word+ auxiliary verb + subject + main verb. The original sentence misses the auxiliary verb and only have main verb "move. "

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Subject and verb agreement. living in cities is a noun phrase, a group of words that acts as a singular word, so the verb in the sentence should use "reduces" not "reduce."

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Combining two sentences into one improves the clarity and conciseness of the passage.

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"In case of" means if something happens. However, developing cities is an event that has begun and is ongoing. The article is stating the fact about developing cities but does not predict something in the future. Keeping a balance between density and diversity is a factor that people need to pay attention to while developing cities.

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"Equivalent" is an adjective. It means things are equal in amount, value, and importance. Collocation: Be equivalent to sth.

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Be worth doing something. It means someone should do something because they can get benefits from it.

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More and more people deciding to move to cities is a trend or event that happen right now in society. Using "phenomenon" to describe this event is better than "idea." Florida uses “superlinear scaling” to tell the logic behind the event so “explain” is a proper reporting verb.

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Will you decide to become a remote worker and why? Based on remote study experience in high school, I will not become a remote worker. Having a traditional job and collaborating with others in person can increase the possibility of solving emergency. Instead of stating the emergency through email and waiting for response anxiously, I can go straight to person that I want to talk with in the office. This will be same as solving other problem during working and significantly improve efficiency. Besides that, working in office can increase the chance of meeting others. Being able to talk with people can develop my mental health. As a result, I will choose to work in person with my colleagues.

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People living in a less dense area can enjoy more natural beauty and better privacy. To conclude, living in a large city or in rural is a personal preference. Each one have advantages and disadvantages. For me, I prefer to live in a large city.

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How do cities increase the chance of interaction between people? Why do more and more people move to cities?

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Besides that, people can get food and grocery easily because stores and dinners will be next to the residential building. However, living in cities reduces the chance of interacting with people. That is because everyone is busy with their jobs and their lives.

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Before coming to U.S., I lived in Guangzhou which is one of the biggest cities in China. When I attended high school in CT, I lived in a more rural place. As a result, I deeply feel the difference between living in urban and suburban. The advantage of living in large cities is the convenience. City usually has better public transportation which allow me to travel around the city instead of asking my parents for a ride.

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According to Florida, the key of economic growth in cities is how different people mix together. When people interact with each other, they will stimulate the demand for local products. Overall, keep a balance between density and diversity in cities is crucial when planning to develop the city.

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However, there are some downsides of this idea. Florida points out that living in a giant building potentially reduces the chance of encountering new people. In addition to that, the city with high density is not equivalent to high innovation and creative impetus.

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Superlinear scaling means that the creative and economic output from the building can surpass the growth of population. Therefore, it is worth constructing buildings that can hold more residents.

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For the upcoming fifty years, cities will be the major place the people choose to live, requiring more building in urban areas. Florida introduces a term “superlinear scaling” to explain the phenomenon.

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"Florida introduces a term “superlinear scaling” to explain the phenomenon."

See http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2013/12/25/coherence-order-of-ideas/

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"The creative and economic output from the building..."

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"The creative and economic output from the building..."

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http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/29/articles-determiners-and-quantifiers-5/

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http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/30/articles-determiners-and-quantifiers-9/

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"which is one of the biggest cities in China..."
See http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/26/mechanics-11/

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http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/27/mechanics-21/

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"Will you decide to become a remote worker and why?" "Do you want to stay in the city you currently live in or move to another city and why?"

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"Will you decide to become a remote worker and why?" "Do you want to stay in the city you currently live in or move to another city and why?"

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As a reader, I'd prefer to see just one question, and not two. With two questions, I feel as though I am taking a test or a job interview. Additionally, questions make effective transitions when constructed in such a way that the following text answers the question. As such, "you" (Q) and "I" (A) don't match as well as "I" (Q) and "I" (A).
Also, see
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2022/01/21/modal-verbs-5/

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https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2015/12/14/preposition-before-an-adverb/

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Spell, don't abbreviate.

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"the city I have lived in for my whole life"

http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/26/mechanics-11/