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Manmeet, I really liked listening to your reflection on facing uncertainties. I appreciated the small details you added such as your picture on Step 3: Transition to Fall and Temperature- how you stated that you didn’t colour it because the fall season was not as bright like summer season. Also, I appreciated how you took the time to take pictures of the five different wild animals. It was visually appealing to see them. A suggestion for you is to slow down, because at times, I felt that you were rushing through some slides. Overall, I enjoyed listening to your reflections and the art documentation you shared with the class. Great job!

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Hi Julie! I loved the way you spoke in front of the class. You clear voice, nice appropriate pause in between your presentation and the intonation of your voice when speaking was wonderful!

I really liked the copy of the leaf you drew with your reflection. I also enjoyed the poem you wrote especially because it rhymed and had a nice flow to it. My suggestion for you is to try to look less at the laptop and engage more eye contact with the class. Another suggestion is to possibly add more various art documentation as the first few slides were simple but looked a bit empty. Nonetheless, I enjoyed your soothing, nice projection of your voice as you shared your steps and reflection with the class! Excellent work!

From: Sumin (Christina) Park

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It was nice hearing you present today! I admired how you were very honest with your feelings and your thoughts when playing out the steps of the game. I enjoyed how you wrote your poem to rhyme for Step 3: Water Movement. Also, it was very original and interesting to hear that you tried to plant a bonsai tree (although it didn’t grow at all) and made a connection to how you don’t have to grow or change all the time because nevertheless, we are constantly growing- it was a truly a nice reminder to take into perspective. Few suggestions I have for you is to double check in advance if your video is working before your presentation so that it runs smoothly without technical difficulties. Another suggestion is to try to add some details to your slides, as it looked empty at times. Overall, I enjoyed listening to your presentation today! Nice work!

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Cassidy, your first step on wildlife using your sense of sight was beautifully laid out with different living objects such as slugs, spider, squirrels, ducks, eagles, caterpillar, and cows. The details you added to the colour pallet fading out with the picture was very cool! I also loved your reflection of how you honestly spoke about how you failed the Earth. This reflection really spoke out to me because I am also someone that needs to work on treating the environment with kindness and hence, recycle more often as well. It made me realize that I need to make small changes to better the environment. Another interesting point was your reflection on the smell of water: salmon producing a strong, unpleasant odour. It was an interesting approach because it was not something I would personally have thought of.

I also liked how you added a list of various music for your slide, making a connection with water and music. The incorporation of quotes in your slide also made your reflection stronger which I thought was insightful. I do not have a specific suggestion for you as I enjoyed every little part of your presentation. Your calm presence when speaking made me feel comfortable and at ease while listening. Thank you for sharing your reflection and the steps you took to the class! Your presentation was very insightful and fun to listen to!

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Serena, your visuals such as pictures of nature was so breathtaking and visually appealing to look at! Your pictures depicted the beauty of nature very well. I liked how your presentation was so simple, concise and to the point. I especially enjoyed how your poem flowed nicely and smoothly. Thus, I could picture myself in the poem. One suggestion I have for you is to minimize using words like “stuff” and “like” during your presentation as these words are very vague and doesn’t sound clear or professional when speaking in front of the audience. Lastly, I really liked how you incorporated racoons as an example for how plants and animals and their movement support their growth! The racoons were so cute and adorable. Great job on your presentation!

From: Sumin (Christina) Park

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One of your art documentation that I found outstanding, creative and unique was the cartoon for Step 4. Your way of storytelling through this art form drew my curiosity and captured my attention just by looking at it. Through this, I realized that there are so many different ways to document your art form! Another art form I really enjoyed was the the layout of the sound of water (mood board). It was very colourful and I liked how you provided a dynamic experience of the sound of water. Also, your poem was very soothing to listen to.One suggestion I would like to share is to focus more on the reflection, as I felt that your presentation was more centred on the art documentation of your steps. Nonetheless, you did a fabulous job of showing the audience the diverse steps of the games in a interesting, profound way. Keep up the good work!

From: Sumin (Christina) Park

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Grace, you have an amazing voice, that’s loud and clear. Your voice is so powerful that it easily draws the audience’s attention! A suggestion I have for you is for Step 1, it would be nice if you read out your written journal to the class so that we could get a better sense of the connection you made when listening to the raindrops to a childhood memory that you had. Nevertheless, I really liked how you described the experience of touching water and explained to us how the water got warmer when you sank your hand in for a prolonged period of time. Although it was rainy and super cold, you were able to withstand the coldness to get a real life experience of putting your hand in the water which showed the seriousness you took for this project. To conclude, your presentation had a great layout, and your voice projection had me engaged when you were presenting! Great work Grace!

From: Sumin (Christina) Park

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I really enjoyed how you took the time to explain your art. It was nice to, as a class, go through the process of creating something and analyzing it. Your presentation was also well structured and easy to follow.

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What can I say, except that music video was super good. You used the medium to its fullest, combining the music and visuals to convey emotions to the audience. The fact that your in-person presentation was also great, with clear explanations and a confident tone, made it all the better. Good job.

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I loved how engaging your presentation was, with how visually interesting it was. You projected your voice well and clearly explained your points. The video you included was also nice, and was clearly well planned and executed. One small thing, the slides where there is white text on a blue background was difficult to read.

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Your presentation was very well made and heavily focused on your experiences with the games and what you learned from them. The depth you went to really made me feel inspired to try some of the steps you spoke about. A bit more eye contact would make this a top presentation.

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I loved your presentation! Your slides were well organized and thoughtfully constructed as to tell a story throughout your presentation. But I had trouble following what you were saying at some points, and you moved very quickly through your points. You had extra time you didn't use, so maybe spending some of that to elaborate would help.

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I loved how your presentation felt natural, like you were speaking from your heart. Your slides were very visually interesting, and you rolled with the punches without much interruption or hassle. I know if I was in that situation, I would panic and shut down. One minor thing is that I would recommend not using your phone for your script. In my experience its just a big hassle to scroll to the right spot and is more trouble than it's worth. But that's just me.

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I loved how confident you were. You were great at engaging the audience with your tone, voice projection and eye contact. Your slides also helped keep the audience interested, as they were very eye catching and included a variety of art forms. A wish I had was for you to explain a bit more about what you learned specifically from each step.

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Your slides were very informative, with a wealth of pictures, and presented everything in an easy to understand way. The notes gave it a personal touch. More eye contact would help to engage the audience more.

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You obviously practiced your presentation, as your narration was smooth and you weren't spending much time looking at a script. I also loved the comic you made, it was very cute. A wish for a future presentation might be to focus more on what specifically you learned from each step.

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Your presentation was very engaging with how you showcased the prompt and then explained how you engaged with it. Your focus on the learning that came from that process was good to hear. What you shared also felt very personal and moving.

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You had a very well organized presentation, and you made each step you played seem so interesting. There was a lot of information and text in them, but it was organized and presented well enough that it wasn't too overwhelming. But you spent a lot of time looking at the slides, and it would have been nice to have more eye-contact with the audience.

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I enjoyed your presentation. You really focused on what you learned from each game you participated in, and you connected everything and concluded it succinctly. You projected well, but had a few stops and starts in your narration.

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I loved your presentation! You were so great at engaging the audience and keeping the presentation flowing. Your slides were packed with information, which was great, but also could get a bit overwhelming sometimes. Maybe a concrete organization for the slides could help keep everyone on the same page.

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I really enjoyed how focused your presentation was on the various art forms you tried out. That was a great way to keep the audience engaged and interested in what you had to say. A wish I have is that you stumbled a few times during your speaking. Nothing too major, but a few more takes in front of a mirror would help smooth it out and make your presentation smoother.

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Your presentation was well-made, cleanly organized and eye-catching. You also spoke in a confident tone, conveying the information clearly. But one aspect where you could improve is how you spent a lot of the presentation looking down at your script.

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Your powerpoint had a very artistic layout and the presentation itself was phenomenal. I was amazed and inspired by the design of your game, the layout, the organization and the art documentation you shared with the class. You also had a nice overview, introducing the 5 steps of the game in your introduction which led the audience informed. Your form of art was not just pictures but various different forms that was displayed which captured my attention. They were visually appealing, very engaging, fun and entertaining to look at which peaked my interest in keenly listening to your presentation. It was amazing to see such a detailed project where a lot of effort was put in. Your presentation skills were on point: voice was loud and clear, you had great eye contact with the class, and you were confident with sharing your steps without a script. Overall, throughout the whole presentation, I enjoyed each and every one of your slides that you presented especially, the candle documentation and your letter to the nature while going for a run outside. Very cute, unique and nicely done! One suggestion I would make to your presentation was how the candle documentation was worded. The description was very lengthy and I tried my best to read them but the fonts were small and hard to read. Maybe if you could put them in bullet points and only have the most important description laid out, it would make it easer for the audience to focus and attentively view them. If we ever have a chance to talk next class, I would love to hear those descriptions!

From: Sumin (Christina) Park

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Maria, your way of reflecting about how the creation of small ripples expanding to bigger ripples and using that to connect to consistent small efforts leading to big results was a great analogy. I realized a couple of times you would stop and pause in between when speaking, which interfered with the momentum of flow. I thought it would be a good suggestion to point out so that you could keep that in mind for the future. Having a steady pace and avoiding saying “umm” when speaking, would really benefit your public speaking skills! The way you provided an overall takeaway for your second last slide of your presentation was a fabulous way of wrapping it up! Excellent idea!

From: Sumin (Christina) Park

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I really liked how your introduction of the presentation was very interactive-you engaged the class by asking questions which was a wonderful idea! It drew my attention to the presentation which was a great start. I appreciated how your slides were very organized and how you led the audience without a script. It showed your confidence to articulate your steps in ways we could understand. Last but not least, it was brilliant how you incorporated the three aspects of emotion, environment and experiences to your reflection at the end of your conclusion to show a connection between them. It captured your ability to connect each part of your project to bring it altogether as a whole. One suggestion I have for you is to make your introduction clear about the “Touch Grass” concept. At first, it was unclear to the point I felt lost when you started the presentation but towards the end, after some moment of putting the puzzle pieces together, I was able to understand what you were trying to illustrate to the class. A clear way of explaining and illustrating that in the beginning to the middle of your presentation would help the readers not to feel lost for a lengthened period of time.

From: Sumin (Christina) Park

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I enjoyed listening to your reflection (i.e., getting kicked around life) because it addresses a deeper connection to reality and is something that many people face when living their lives. I liked how you took videos taken from different days over a span of time (i.e., movement of clouds) because it shows how each picture can have its own characteristic and colour to it even though it is on the same step. Your poem also illustrated the imagery nicely to the point I could draw a picture in my head as if I am in that moment. Your poem was simple but descriptive which I admired. Your presentation was well-timed, focused and to the point and so, I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your insights and thoughts with the class today!

From: Sumin (Christina) Park

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I enjoyed the layout and design of your powerpoint. It had a very interesting look especially the way you organized the steps! I realized that you were rushing when presenting to the class. If you could remember to slow down while speaking, that would be great. Overall, I loved the volume of your voice- it was loud and clear. Adding Mocha’s stick was very entertaining and it added colour to your presentation.

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Jason

The presentation was very clear and engaging and I really liked how you incorporated photos to really capture the moment so we could experience it well. One thing is no try not to look at the script in hand but overall great job!

Diego

I thought your presentation was great and you had detail that was included in every step. One thing I would say is to make some eye contact when you can but overall it was very clear and your voice was loud and clear.

Zoe

Your presentation was wonderful and you were very confident and prepared for it. One thing I would say was that maybe you could have been more clear on the phrase “touch grass” and also cut down on information. But overall you did great and your voice was loud and clear.

Maria

Your presentation was very clear. I really liked your drawings. One thing I would say there were a couple of pauses but other than that your presentation was wonderful!

Peyton

Your presentation was wonderful! I really liked the theme of your presentation. It was really pretty. The steps on each slide were detailed but perhaps shortening the amount of words on each slide. I also really liked how you changed the step about the candle to fit what you can do and it was really creative, great job!

Grace Z

You put a lot of effort into each step and it was very colourful. One thing I would say is to face the class more but overall great job!

Katelyn

I really liked your presentation, especially the comic I thought was creative and different from the other types of art forms. One thing I would say is I would have loved for you to read out the comic since you put a lot of time into making it. Overall great job and voice and pace were also great!

Serena

Your presentation was really wonderful and easy to understand. One thing I would say is to speak a little louder. Overall I also loved your photos. They were wonderful and captured each step.

Cassidy

I really liked the style of this presentation and really fit into your theme. You had a great pace and I could hear your voice. One thing I would say is I personally would have loved to gear the entire journal entry since you put a lot of time and effort but I do understand that we only had 5 minutes but it was great that you summarized it. Overall you did really great!

Olivia

I really liked the colour and photos of your slides. One thing I would say is I would have loved to see the videos but I understand that there were technical difficulties which happen sometimes. But you had great voice projection and overall great job!

Julie

You had great pace and spoke clearly. One thing I would say is to have more eye contact but overall I also really liked your poem and you did a great job!

Manmeet

You had a great presentation and each step you did was very detailed. One thing I would say is to have more eye contact but overall you did a really great job!

Marrisa

You did a really great job with the photos and overall theme of your presentation, I really liked it. One thing was to fix the volume when the song was playing for one of the step so I could hear you or maybe you could have repeated what you had said but the song was really nice, a great choice and wonderful job!

Ana

I really liked your presentation and all the colour and photos you added. One thing was to make a little more eye contact. I also really liked your reflection of the rock and incorporated both the negatives and positives and how detailed you were with just a rock, great job!

Angelo

Your presentation was very clear and organized. One thing I would say is to speak a bit louder. Also I really liked that short video that you included and all the personal experience and steps from high school to university and the video was very well made and you put a lot of effort into it and it is seen. Also the crossword was just great and the way you connected all the words with each other. Great job!

Grace L

I thought you did a great job with engaging with the audience but one thing is I wish that the videos would have worked but technical difficulties. Overall you did such a great job at reflecting and your voice was loud and clear.

Kole

The presentation had great photos and the one with the rainbow was wonderful. One thing was to face the audience more but overall great job!

Amari

I really liked your presentation and all the effort you put into making it. One thing was to speak a little louder. It was kind of hard to hear at times since we were outside and also it was hard to see where you were pointing to at times so maybe having someone hold your poster would have been great. But I loved how you also had the class look around and engage with your presentation, great job!

Yvonne

Your presentation was great and you explained each step with detail. One thing is to try to look up from the script and speak a little louder. But overall a great presentation and I loved your paintings. They were wonderful!

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The theme of the slide was pretty clear, and words are easy to see. The step’s one art is so good. The collage is creative and cute. I really like the clean style of the slide. wonderful presentation!!!

-Tiffany

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I really like the pictures that you took of the sky! And great job speaking in a clam and steady tone. One suggestion for you would be to look at your slides less when presenting. Overall great job!

Grace

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Good job on your presentation as it was very well done. I really enjoyed your reflection throughout your different art form. In particular, I really admired you poem and the drawing. One suggestion I have is to have more eye contact so it more engaging. Overall, great presentation!

Manmeet

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Your presentation was easy to follow because your eye contact and clear voice. I really admired the time elapse of the clouds and how you connected it to how you feel time moves fast or slow. I also admired your poems as they encapsulate your reflective and thoughts when conducting the steps. One thing you can work on is having a script with key points so they are no awkward pauses. Overall, you did an amazing job on your presentation!

Manmeet

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Your presentation was conveyed with confidence as you spoke very clearly and loud. Each step was summarized and reflective and you described the process of each one in depth. One suggestion I have is to have more eye contact instead of reading off your script. I also really enjoyed that you had connections to your dog and the flooding in your basement. Overall, good job on your presentation!

Manmeet

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I really liked the visuals you added in your presentation. I thought they really helped to illustrate your points and kept people paying attention. I also liked that you were not hiding behind the computer or a script on your phone, and your body language and posture showed everyone that you were well informed and confident. One thing I noticed is that the delivery of your presentation was a little bit monotone, which detracted from the overall impact of your presentation. I think if you added more facial expressions or tones in your voice, it would have kept the audience more engaged on what you are talking about. Other than that, great job!!

-Julie

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I really enjoyed your presentation, especially the way you carefully explained each game step and the fact that each of them had a clear connection with the topic of your presentation. I also liked your conclusion and reflection upon everything you have done, great job on that! A suggestion I have for you is to try not to read off of your presentation and engage more with the class, like talking to us instead of reading to us. Good job on your project!

-Julie

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Loved your poster! Watching and listening to your presentation was definitely a change to all the PowerPoint presentation we had seen all day and I loved going outside, getting some fresh air, while listening to you talk about your project. Your poster was incredibly creative and colourful, and it looks like you really took your time with it and spent a lot of time on it. I also liked the interactive part of your presentation and how you had everyone get out of our seats and go outside for a change. One thing I suggest is to speak a little bit louder, since being outside can be a little more distracting than being indoors. With the cars, construction, and howling wind, it got a bit difficult to hear you at times. Other than that, great job on your amazing presentation and poster!

-Julie

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One thing I liked about your presentation is the hand gestures you used while explaining your game steps. I thought they helped convey the meaning that you were trying to say across. I also liked how you explained everything thoroughly and with great detail and you did not leave anything out, so the audience was not left wondering anything. A suggestion I have for you is to add more pictures and less words to each slide of your PowerPoint so that it is less wordy and more pleasing to look at. Great job overall!

-Julie

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You had great communication with the class throughout the entire presentation and it seemed like you were actually talking to us instead of reading words of a script, which is something I really enjoyed watching. I also liked how you connected your experiences with things you had seen in real life, such as the slide with the Canadian flag. One thing I would suggest is to add a bit more colourful slides and pictures, and to have the slides less wordy so that it is more pleasing to look at. Awesome job though!

-Julie

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You used a lot of descriptive words in your presentation, which I liked and found to be very useful as an audience member listening to your presentation. Your music video was super fun and engaging for me to watch, and I love all the effort that was put into it. The music video also related and connected to your presentation so well, and I think you deserve some kudos for your creative form of documentation you made. One little suggestion I have is to maybe talk a bit clearer and enunciate your words more so that you are not mumbling, as I found it difficult to hear you at times. Wonderful job on your presentation overall!

-Julie

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Ana, you are such a natural presenter and your presentation was really clear and easy to follow. Good job on that! I also loved the video with the music and how you were talking about your reflection during the video. I suggest maybe adding some more pictures on some of your slides, especially the slides when you introduce your steps because that would make you presentation more enjoyable and pleasing to look at Great job overall!

-Julie

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Awesome job on your presentation! It was full of pictures and they were lovely to look at. I thought they were entertaining while you were speaking. I also loved the music you added in the background. Although it was a little loud at first, it was so calming to just listen to in the background while focusing on what you were saying. It was a great idea to include music and put it in the background. One suggestion I have is to add a conclusion slide or a conclusion paragraph because I thought your presentation ended pretty abruptly and it could have had a smoother transition to the end. Other than that, I loved watching your presentation and I thought you did a great job overall!

-Julie

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I loved looking at all your pictures and I think they were very nicely taken and clear in getting your message across. I also liked how you explained your experiences thoroughly and how you covered everything without missing anything. One thing I suggest is to take short pauses once in a while when you are talking and just speak a little bit slower in general as I felt you were rushing at times.

-Julie

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Hi Olivia! One thing that stood out to be from your presentation is that there was minimal words on your slides and more pictures. This is much more enjoyable for me to watch as an audience member because there is less reading for me to do and more looking at your wonderful pictures. I also liked how you constantly looking up from your script to make eye contact with the class. One thing I would suggest is to have a little better time management. Your presentation went on for quite a well and I could have been better if it was shortened a little. Other than that, your presentation was awesome! Great job!

-Julie

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Hey Cassidy, I loved your presentation and your PowerPoint! The videos, photos, and sounds you added were very engaging as an audience member and it helped capture my attention right away. I also liked how you are honest and expressing your true self while in front of the class, like when you told us that you are lazy. lol :)

One suggestion I have for you is to maybe add a conclusion side or a conclusion paragraph in your presentation because I found that it ended pretty abruptly.

Awesome job!

-Julie

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Great job! Your attention to detail and the way you laid out your slides made your presentation so much more powerful and memorable. It was an amazing PowerPoint. I also enjoyed all the descriptive words you added in your presentation and it definitely was able to help me visualize what your experience during the game steps were like. A suggestion for next time is to try to speak a little bit louder and enunciate your words a bit more, as I was sitting at the back of the classroom and had trouble hearing you at times.

-Julie

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Amazing job on your presentation! The flow of your presentation was very smooth and it was pleasant to look at and enjoy. You explained every step of your game very well and it was so detailed that it felt like I was there with you when you were doing the steps. I loved seeing the collage you made in Step 2, it is so creative and it looks like a lot of time and effort was put into making it. One little thing I would suggest is to speak a little bit slower as sometimes I felt like you were rushing through your words and it was a bit hard for me to keep up. Overall great job!

-Julie

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You had a beautiful presentation; it was very colourful and fun to look at, and I especially loved the detail in it and how the detail of every game step was documented. I also liked the video of the SFU track field, as it game the audience something to look at and enjoy while you were presenting. A little piece of feedback I have is to be less fidgety while talking. You were playing with your hands and hair quite a bit and it was rather distracting for me as an audience member. Other than that, I loved your presentation and I think you did a great job!

-Julie

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I absolutely loved all the work and effort you put into you presentation Peyton! Your entire PowerPoint is very detailed and neat, and it was pleasant to look at and read. I also liked your creative forms of documentation. The ways you chose to document your findings such as photography and journalling were very creative and interesting. That being said, one suggestion is that you could have shortened or summarized your journal entry when presenting, as I found it quite long. Other than that, you did an amazing job!!

- Julie

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Great job on your presentation Maria! I really enjoyed it, especially the immersive videos you included that really engaged the class. I also liked the names that you came up with for your games, and I thought they were very creative. I loved reading them and then learning what that step was about. A small suggestion I have is to not take a long pause behind slides or sentences, so that the flow of the presentation can be better and smoother. Overall great job!

- Julie

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Nice work on your presentation Amari. It was so refreshing to see someone present to the class in a different way. I liked how everyone was instructed to go outside as the presentation is focused on nature. So I found that it really allowed us as a class to be a part of nature while hearing about your experience with it. Something I would suggest would be for the poster to be presented to the class in a more clearer way. This is because I was standing farther away from it in the circle and could not clearly see it. All in all, I found this presentation to be really well done and creative.

-Navroop Padda

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I really liked that your presentation included a different format in comparison to the classic slideshow that was used by the rest of the class. Your collage demonstrated attention to detail and time spent dedicated to each step as well as the overall appearance. Overall, great job creating a unique presentation that was engaging for the class, although it was a little chilly outside.

- Katelyn

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I really liked how you created a connection between emotions and nature, highlighting different aspects that demonstrated your attention to detail when completing your propositions. I would suggest combining your images and having text in point form, as an easier layout for your audience to follow. But overall I enjoyed your presentation and your abstract piece of artwork, that went beyond what was shown in the image.

- Katelyn

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I really liked how you extended your propositions and learning beyond the class, it showed you had a good understanding of the material and reflection of your relationship with nature. For instance, you mentioned that a past English teacher taught you that a haiku can be a valuable form of writing, therefore you used that art form in creating your reflection of the sound of trees. Something you mentioned that I relate to is having tunnel vision, it was a great introduction to your presentation and helped set the theme of what the presentation would be related to. You also used this topic as a central/focal point, in which you used the propositions as examples in how they support your growth in having less tunnel vision. Overall, you did a great job in having an organized presentation that was easy to follow and relatable for your audience (or at least me).

- Katelyn

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The crossword visual was a super unique art form that you spent time on the details by making sure the words that were intertwined related to one another. And if that wasn't enough time and detail spent on the presentation, you also created an incredible video. It was super unique and engaging, the attention to detail was clear throughout the short film and the transitions helped your video run smoothly. Overall your presentation was very well put together, and very impressive with your dedication and attention to detail.

- Katelyn

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The video you created in your presentation was super cool and it showed you took time to also focus on the details, the coordinating music also matched really well. You connected to lots of personal experiences and memories that brought depth and value to the presentation. It demonstrated a clear moment of reflection that you experienced and enhanced the overall quality of your presentation. Great job!

- Katelyn

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I really liked how you used multiple media forms in your presentation, such as photos and songs that related to your proposition on clouds. I also really enjoyed how you reflected on your proposition beyond just the art form, in a way that you included your personal experiences and takeaways from the activity. It demonstrated that you took the opportunity of completing the proposition to also reflect and grow your relationship of self and nature.

- Katelyn

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I really liked the organization of your slides, that included an image of the art form you used to document your proposition, followed by a short text summarizing important aspects of it. A detail I really enjoyed in your presentation was how you highlighted the reason for not using colour in your sketch; this showed attention to detail. Lastly, your detailed takeaways included in the final reflection of your presentation brought together and summarized everything really well.

- Katelyn

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I really liked how organized your presentation was, with a table of contents, short description/summary, and point form notes of your proposition that you completed. Your speaking was clear and you projected your voice well, which kept the class engaged in your presentation. Overall, your presentation was organized, clear, and engaging for the audience!

- Katelyn

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I really liked how you integrated the cartoon theme of the slides with real images, I thought this was a really cool twist to a classic slideshow that was executed very well. The personal connections you made with the activities you completed, such as your connection with the bus stop, demonstrated that you had a detailed and good reflection in relation to your proposition. Lastly, you ended your presentation with a conclusion of your overall takeaway/reflection of your Propositions, that I think brought your presentation together really well. Overall great job!

- Katelyn

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You brought a really great energy with you while you presented, that showed you were well prepared and confident. I really like your slideshow that were super engaging and easy to follow, by using audio clips, visuals, and colour pallets. I would add a suggestion for next time here.... but I don't have one. Although I will mention that my absolute favourite part of your presentation was the mention of a Noah Kahan song!!

- Katelyn

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I really loved the images/photos you took and included in your presentation, the quality of them was really great! In the future, I would suggest speaking a bit louder to project your voice. But besides that your preparedness for the presentation was clear, as you were confident presenting with no script. I also really liked your attention to detail by matching the colour/aesthetic of your images to the colour scheme of your slide. That level of detail really made your presentation come together really well.

- Katelyn

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I really loved all the attention to detail you included in your presentations by including animations and transitions on all your slides. I also enjoyed how you were well prepared, speaking confidently and smoothly without a script. Overall, my favourite part of your presentation was all the different pieces of artwork you created, that highlighted your creativity.

- Katelyn

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Your speaking was really great during your presentation by projecting your voice and not reading solely from a script. My suggestion for next would be to maybe add some point form notes, to have a visual form of what your takeaways were for each activity you completed. Otherwise I really enjoyed your presentation, and found your inclusion of audio clips to be super cool as a way to make your presentation immersive and engaging for your audience.

- Katelyn

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I found your presentation very engaging as you decided to have a different approach instead of having presentation slides. I admired the thought you put in to take us outside and participate in breathing exercises as it was a nice way to end the presentations for the day. I also loved the effort you put in your poster and it was beautiful and demonstrates your engagement with the game swap activity. One suggestion I have is maybe showing the poster to us in class on the board because due to the distance, it was hard to see. Overall, you did a lovely job on your presentation and you had us immersed in nature as you did when completing your steps!

Manmeet

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Your presentation had great audience engagement through the breathing exercises we did together outside. The different setting was also refreshing. You spoke with a clear voice, and I could still hear you over the wind and the sounds of cars passing by. It was a little hard to see the project from where I was standing, but I still enjoyed listening to your explanations of each step. I felt calm after going outside and appreciated the experience. Great presentation!

Grace Lee

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You spoke clearly and at a good pace during the presentation. I like the visual documentation of your project. It helps to imagine what you saw while implementing the different steps. In terms of presenting, one suggestion would be to make more eye contact. But your presentation was still easy to follow. I enjoyed seeing how you used artistic methods like painting to document the experience of the game swap!

Grace Lee

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The presentation slides had a good combination of texts and images. I think alternating between written descriptions of the prompt and how you documented the step was a great choice. It was easy to follow along during your presentation. I appreciated your insight on the artwork about observing smells on a rainy day. I noticed that the slides were mostly white and blue, but I think it will work just fine even if you keep the same colour palette. The design was clean and did not distract from your documentation of the steps. Great presentation!

Grace Lee

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The creative documentation of the word search stood out during the presentation. It was fun to see how you approached each step. The personal connections helped me relate to the experience as well, and the video for the last step was very impactful. I think it was a great way to end the presentation. I enjoyed seeing the approaches you took for the project!

Grace Lee

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You spoke clearly throughout the presentation, which made it easy to follow along. I appreciated the honest reflection on how the weight of rocks made you feel during Step 3. The video for Step 4 enhanced the experience of listening to your reflection. I would have liked to hear your thoughts on the overall experience, but the presentation had a nice ending even without that. I enjoyed seeing how you documented your project!

Grace Lee

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I think you documented the steps well. I liked how you enhanced your reflection for Step 4 by including a kind of time lapse to compare the childhood photos with the current ones. It was a little bit hard to hear you during Step 2, but it was an immersive experience with the sound, and I think it was a good choice to include it. Great presentation!

Grace Lee

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Your documentation of the steps was thoughtful such as when you chose to not colour the drawing for Step 3 to reflect the gray sky that you observed. I also liked how you concluded your presentation. One suggestion in terms of presenting would be to make more eye contact (but I think you did this well during your explanation of steps 4 and 5). Overall, it was a great presentation, and I enjoyed seeing what you did with the project!

Grace Lee

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You spoke at a good pace and had good eye contact with the audience, which made your presentation feel more natural. It was unfortunate that we could not see the last few slides in full screen. I would have loved to see your documentation of those steps. It was still a great presentation!

Grace Lee

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Despite having had a cough, you spoke clearly at a good pace throughout the presentation. I like the inclusion of sound for step 2 as it provided an immersive experience. I also appreciate the honest personal connections that you shared. One suggestion would be to wrap up the presentation with one sentence about the overall experience, but you still showcased your work very well. I enjoyed listening to how the project went for you!

Grace Lee

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The colour palette you chose worked well to highlight the steps. I like how you structured the slides to explain the prompt, the implementation, and your response. I noticed you looked at the screen often, but you still had good eye contact with the audience. You did not seem fazed by the small technical issue and continued the presentation smoothly. I enjoyed listening to your experience with the project!

Grace Lee

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Your presentation has a nice design that combines text and visuals to showcase each step. I liked how you took a creative approach for the mood board on Step 2. It would have been great to hear your thoughts on the overall experience, but I think the time limit was too short for that. Great job explaining what you did for the project!

Grace Lee

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The presentation design was fun and colourful. It was easy to hear you and follow along through each step. A one-sentence summary about the overall experience could have given a good conclusion to the presentation. But you explained the steps and showcased the documentation very well. It was fun to see how you implemented each step. Great presentation!

Grace Lee

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The visual effects connected nicely to each step. It was fun to see how you interpreted my step (a letter to time). I think you captured my intended purpose (to become aware of the presence of time during your routine) very well. Ending the presentation with a one-sentence reflection on the overall experience could have enhanced your presentation even more, but your summary and focus on the individual steps made it easy to follow along. Great presentation!

Grace Lee

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I like how you included personal connections and engaged the audience through the video on your last step. Your presentation was easy to follow. There were a few pauses, but your volume was good, I could hear you well throughout the presentation. Great work!

Grace Lee

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You did a great job showing the steps and adapting the implementation when things did not work the first time. I appreciate your honesty about how one of the steps did not evoke a reflection at first and how you pushed through the challenge by comparing the temperature to a month ago. You spoke a little quickly, but it did not hinder the presentation. I like how you concluded with a reference to your title slide and the quote "Touch grass." Great presentation!

Grace Lee

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That was such a cute and creative presentation! Everything in it showed your personality, and it was kind of fun to see how you do such a different approach with a project.

Ellie

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That was such a creative presentation; I could tell how much thought and effort went into it. It surely showed your passion for this project, making the whole thing much more fun to watch.

Ellie

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I dis observe that you tried to make eye contact with the class, and that added to the interest in your presentation. Your explanations wereclear and easy to understand. The photo you included in the first game was absolutely beautiful—it really added something special to your work.

Ellie

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I thought starting your presentation with a question to the class was such a powerful attention grabber. Overall, your presentation was very clear, well-organized, and consequently easy to follow.

Ellie

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I just loved the quote you used in part one; it was quite impactful and carried a lot of meaning. It made me reflect deeply. Your art forms were very creative, especially the video you made with music. It was high quality and amazing!

Ellie

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Original art forms you used for every step were so creative. I really liked that video you made with the music; it was well-fit with the song, and it made your presentation so polished and beautiful.

Ellie

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Your presentation was really creative and your speaking voice was clear to follow your presentation. I also loved how you incorporated a song into your project; it was so unique !

Ellie

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I liked your presentation a lot! You explained each step so clearly, and it really showed that you put a lot of effort and patience into this project.

Ellie

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Your speaking voice was strong and confident, and the things you explained were quite clear. You presented your work in a way that made it very easy for the audience to step through each stage with you.

Ellie

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Your speaking voice was clear and easy to understand, and your presentation was lots of fun to listen to. Your poem was so reflective and showed the depth of your engagement in this project.

Ellie

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I loved how you connected with the class because you didn't have a script-it came across really natural and engaging. The idea about linking water with music was so creative, and the art form you used for that was amazing.

Ellie

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Your presentation was crystal clear, and your photos were great! I especially liked how you organized your content under headings such as "summary," "what you did," and "response." It made everything easy to understand and follow.

Ellie

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That was so creative, your art form in step 4; it looked like a little comic book, such a different approach. I also appreciated how varied the art forms were throughout your presentation; it just made your work pop and stick in my head a whole lot more.

Ellie

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Your explanations throughout the presentation were very clear and easy to follow. The way you broke down each step made your project really accessible. I also thought the drawing you included in the last step was super cute and added a fun visual element to your work.

Ellie

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Your colorful slides amazing and they were so appealing to the eye! I especially liked how you described the rock in the first step in such a detailed and reflective way. The fact that each of your steps was in a different format was very creative; it just showed you put more effort into making each part distinctive.

Ellie

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I really enjoyed your drawings for the first and third step of your project. They were so creative and just helped me understand your ideas better. Because you used a personal story that related to your steps, your presentation felt heartfelt. Having us close our eyes while listening to the sounds in the video really made the experience memorable.

Ellie

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That was such a great idea to begin your presentation with a question to the class. Immediately, you had our attention! And that picture with you at the beach was so cute; it did help tie your content into your personal experience.

Ellie

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Your voice was loud and clear, so it was easy to focus on what you were saying. I thought that was a very great effort to make eye contact with the class; that personalizes it and makes the presentation a bit more engaging.

Ellie

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Your presentation so clear and easy to understand. You came across as really confident speaking, and your voice was very engaging. I also loved the pictures of your dog-they were so cute and personalized your presentation!

Ellie

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Great job on your presentation! I really enjoyed listening to your poem that you created. If I had to give you any type of feedback I would say to have more confidence in yourself! Your presentation was great and I can tell you put lots of effort into it. Great job!

Peyton