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Write a short email to your friend about what you and your family are doing at home today (60 words).

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‼️You must use Present Continuous

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Good afternoon, guys! Today we will talk about your weekend.

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Good afternoon, guys! Today we will talk about your weekend.

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New expressions:

write an email - писать электронное письмо

plant flowers - сажать цветы

drink coffee - пить кофе

wash the dog - мыть собаку

make a phone call - позвонить по телефону

work in the garden - работать в саду

play with a friend - играть с другом

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Hello, Polina Dmitrievna!
Thanks for your lesson letter. I'm doing my homework.
All the family is home. Everyone is busy.
Mum is cooking dinner and talking by on the phone. Dad is fixing my ski. It's accurate
work. My sister Ulya is drawwing and
dancing.
What are you doing ? Drop me a line.
Good bye,
Best wishes, With love, Love,
Polina Dmitrievna
Gleb

Глеб, выбор между единственной формой family is и множественной family are зависит от того, описываете ли вы family как одно целое или как несколько индивидуальных участников

Подпись в конце должна быть с твоим именем

Запомни устойчивое выражение - talk on the phone

Drawing не удваивается  «w»

Перед подписью есть шаблонные фразы, смотри выше в письме
Мало слов - 55. Должно быть не менее 60 слов.

Words: 55
Mark: 4

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From: Stepan
To: Gleb
Hi, Gleb.
How are you? Now I'm doing a lot of my homework. It's the biggest homework in my life.
Unfortunately, I have homework and my parents are having rest because they haven't a work but l'm also happy for them. My dad and my brother are in kids' room. They are playing. My mum is surfing the Net, making some phone calls and chilling out. Besides, Also she is lying on the sofa in the living room and eating crackers.
What are you doing? Do you have any plans for weekends? Write back soon. please.
Best wishes,
Styopa

Степан, обрати внимание на шаблонную фразу

write back soon

Besides, unfortunately - прекрасные слова, но они больше подходят для формального, официального письма. Но меня радует, что ты знаком с данной лексикой.

Превысил лимит слов: 60-70 слов

Но в целом, работа выполнена на высоком уровне, хорошее владение языком

Words: 97 Mark: 5

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Hi, Gosha!
Thanks for your email. How are you? I am watching TV.
All the family are here and are busy too. Mum is in the kitchen. She is cooking. Dad is surfing the Net. Sister is doing her homework.
What are you doing? Are there any plans for tomorrow? Drop me a line.
Love,
Gosha

Очень мало слов - 45

Не хватает информации в заключении (добавила, смотри выше)

После подписи никогда не ставится точка ‼️

В целом, могла получиться очень хорошая работа!
Старайся и все получится!
Words: 45 Mark: 4

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From: Ksyusha
To : Rosie
Subject : It 's Tuesday

Hi,Rosie!
Thanks for your email. How are you? I'm doing my homework and preparing for my getting read for a biology test.
All the family is very busy. Mom is in her room working on the computer in her room. My dad's doing the paperwork now .Great - grandmother paints is drawing beautiful flowers.
What are you reading now? What are you playing now ? Write back soon.
Love,
Ksyusha

Ксюша, следи за порядком слов в предложении: подлежащее и сказуемое на первом месте ‼️

Устойчивое выражение - prepare for - готовиться к чему-то

Words: 61
Mark: 5

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From: Masha
To:Lisa
Subject: its Saturday!
Hi, Lisa!
Thanks for your email. How are you? I'm shooting at a target with a rifle. All the family are here and are busy. My mother is working in the office. Dad is walking with a dog. (take a dog for a walk - выгуливать). Granny is cooking eats. After she will go to the theatre.
What are you doing? Any plans for Sunday? W h rite back soon.
Love,
Masha

Что ты имела в виду под словом “eats”

Granny is cooking …..

Перед существительными всегда должен быть артикль walk with a dog

Words:62 Mark: 5

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From:Nina 🐱
To:Milana
Hi, Milana!
Thanks for your email. How are you? I am watching TV.
All the family are here. Mum is in the kitchen. She is cooking dinner. Dad is fixing a light bulb. It is hard work. My little sister, Marina, is playing with our dog Nyosha.
What are you doing? Any plans for Saturday? Write back soon.
Love,
Nina

PERFECT JOB✨
Take it up 🤗

Words: 60
Mark: 5

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From:Paul
To:Andrew
Hi, Andrew!
Thank's for your email. How are you?
I'm reading a book.
All the family is outside and I'm alone now. Mum's in the school. She went there to parent-teacher conference. Dad's in the plant, he's an eingeneer. My little brother, Alex, is playing in the garden. My sister, Dasha, is cooking. She's making pies for dinner.
What are doing? Any plans for weekends? I can to meet you on Saturday. And you? Write back soon.
Best wishes,
Paul

После can никогда не ставится частица to - грубая ошибка ‼️

Words: 78 Mark: 5-

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From: Glafira
To: Dasha
Hi, Dasha!
Thanks for your email. How are you? I am doing my homework.
I will go to the bed soon because it's 11.30 pm. My mom's in the kitchen, she's drinking tea and surfes ing the Net. My grandma is watching an interesting film on TV.
What are you doing? Any plans for tomorrow? Write back soon.
Best wishes,
Glafira 💋

Глафира, в целом работа очень хорошая, есть небольшие ошибки:

Mom is surfing the Net - Present Continuous, невнимательно посмотрела

Существительные употребляются с артиклем, в данном случае - an interesting film

Words: 60 Mark: 5

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From:Vitya
To:Artem
Hi,Artem!
Thanks for your email. How are you?I am watching TV.
All the family are here and are busy too.Mum is in the kitchen.She is cooking dinner. Dad is in the garage.He is repairing a car. My little sister is playing with her friend. My brother is playing computer games.
What are you doing?Any plans for Saturday?Write back soon.
Best wishes,
Vitya

Витя, работа очень хорошая, за исключением в двух местах - Present Continuous

Запомни: am/is/are+Ving ‼️

Words: 65
Mark: 5-

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From: Varya
To: Anastasia
Hello, Anastasia!
Thank for your email. How are you? Great to hear from you.
My mother and I are at home. My mum's k cooking in the kitchen. My dad's not here, hes  he is working. I'm in my room doing a homework and se urfing the Net in my room.
What are you doing? Any plans for Wednesday? Write back soon.
Best wishes,
Varya 💋

Варя, не путай you и your! You - личное местоимение - ты, вы , your - притяжательное местоимение - твое ‼️

Не путай порядок слов: подлежащее + сказуемое и затем остальные члены предложения (обстоятельство места в конце предложения пишется)

Две орфографические ошибки: surfing, cooking

Устойчивые выражения: at school, at work, at home

Words: 60 words Mark: 4

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From:Artem
To:Victor

Hi, Victor!
Thanks for your email. How are you? I’m writing this email.
All the family is at the work. Mum is in work wareha Ouse. Dad is in work office working at  on the computer. My little brother is walking in the street with his friend.
What are you doing? Any plans for Friday?Write back soon.
With friendship Best wishes,
Artem

Артем, следи за порядком слов в предложении: подлежащее+сказуемое и затем остальные члены предложения

warehouse - орфографическая ошибка

Устойчивые выражения: work on the computer; in the street

Перед подписью обязательно должно быть: Best wishes/ Love и затем обязательно запятая ‼️

Дни недели всегда с заглавной буквы - Friday, Monday

Количество слов: 58, а должно быть 60-70 слов‼️

Words: 58
Mark: 3

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From:Sasha
To:Artyom
Subject:It is Saturday!
Hi, Artyom!
Thanks for your email. How are you? I am doing my homework.
All the family are here and are busy too. Mum's in the kitchen. She is cooking dinner.Dad is in the living room. He is making some phone calls. My elder sister, Kate,  is in the bedroom. She is playing with my little sister, Polina. They are having a good time together.
What are you doing? Any plans for Sunday? White back soon.
The Best wishes,
Sasha

Саша, почему письмо написано практически без знаков препинания? (Смотри выше мои пометки)

Оформление: вступление, содержание, заключение‼️

Запомни Best wishes

По грамматике все супер, но из-за того, что не соблюдены: оформление и знаки препинания, оценка 4

Но в целом, хорошая работа! Старайся!

Words: 80 Mark: 4

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From: Fedya
To: Pedro

Hi Pedro!
Thank you for sending me your email.  I appreciate it.  Great to hear from you.
Now the whole family is at home and we are busy with our own affairs. Kolya, my older brother is playing The Witcher 3. My older sister Tanya is doing something on her tablet computer . My younger brother Kolya plays is playing Lego, he has a huge robot. I am corresponding  chatting with you. My mother prepares  is cookingdelicious borscht and mashed potatoes with fish cutlet. Dad is working on his laptop. Greetings to the planets Fedya. What are you doing? Are there any plans for Saturday? Write back soon.
Best wishes,
Fedya

Федя, все выражения и слова, зачеркнутые в письме относятся к формальному официальному письму. У нас должна быть здесь разговорная лексика ‼️

Недостаточно одного предложения во вступлении

Слишком много слов: 88, допускается 60-70 слов‼️

При описании происходящего используем только Present Continuous

Отсутствует заключение в письме (написала пример заключения, смотри выше)

Words: 88
Mark: 3

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From:Lika
To: Rita

Hello, Rita!
Thanks for your email. How are you? I am reading a book.
All the family are at home now. My father is relaxing in the bedroom. He is tired. My mum is busy. She is watering the cactus. My sister is having a good time. She is watching TV. My granny is in the kitchen and she is making soup.
What are you doing? Any plans for Sa unday? Write back soon.
Love,
Lika

Perfect job!
Keep it up 🙌🏻

Запомни Sunday

Words: 75
Mark: 5

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From:Sophia

To: Lisa

Hi,Lisa! 👋

Thanks for your email. How are you? I'm going doing  my homework.

All the family are here and are busy too.

Mum's in the living room. She is sleeping.Dad's working in the kitchen. My little sister is  dancing k-pop.

What are you doing?  Drop me a line.

Love,

Sophia 🙇

Соня, работа очень неплохая, но!

Количество слов:52. Допускается 60-70 слов.

Потеряла в предложении вспомогательный глагол to be в нужной форме «My little sister is dancing….»

Предложения: «What are you doing?»
«Drop me a line» пишутся в одном абзаце, следуй шаблону

Words: 52 Mark: 4