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Our story is about

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Highlighting Sensory Details: This sample incorporates sensory details to enrich storytelling. For instance, "The strong smell of exhaust fumes filled his nostrils" appeals to the sense of smell, while "Sweat trickled down his forehead" engages the sense of touch.

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" Zoooom! " A red truck turned in at the T-junction . Unbeknownst to the boy, the truck was headed towards him. The boy picked up his ball and looked up in fear. Upon seeing the truck, he stood rooted to the ground like an Ancient Greek statue. He could see his life flash right in front of his eyes. Colour drained from his face, turning it alabaster white. He could smell the acrid smoke emitted from the exhaust pipes of the truck. He tried to run but his body did not respond. Cold sweat trickled down his forehead as he tasted his own salty sweat. His heart palpitated furiously against his ribcage. His hands turned clammy as he tried to grasp his football to prevent it from slipping from his trembling hands. He braced himself for impact. Desperate, he yelled out at the top of his lungs, " NOOOOOO!! Please stop!!!" Just as he thought he was going to die...

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about us: Liesel, Tan Jing Xuan, Raelynn, Alyssa, Aaron,  Huang Shuyan

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about us: Liesel, Tan Jing Xuan, Raelynn, Alyssa, Aaron,  Huang Shuyan

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We have used the 5 Senses to describe how characters respond and act in a given situation. We do this to make the story more exciting for the reader.

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Team members: Caelan Koo, Colette Ng and Sze Rui

Picture chosen: The pedestrian crossing and The Terrified Boy

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Our story is about a terrified boy who, with his heart pounding, navigates the challenges of crossing a busy pedestrian crossing with his dog on the leash.

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Our story is about a little boy kicking a ball and it went on the road and a car almost crashed him.

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The afternoon sun beat down on the bustling street, casting elongated shadows across the pavement. With each step onto the pedestrian crossing, the boy's heart thudded against his ribcage, a potent mix of anxiety and determination fuelling his movements. His eyes darted nervously from side to side, searching for any signs of oncoming traffic as he tightened his grip on the leash. The strong smell of exhaust fumes filled his nostrils, adding to the sense of urgency that pulsed through his veins. Sweat trickled down his forehead, making his grip on the leash slippery, as he focused intently on the path ahead. Despite the chaos surrounding him, he stood firm—his determination to safely guide his faithful companion to the other side unwavering.

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Boom! With a mighty kick, John kicked the ball with unspeakable force and gusto, but the ball accidentally zoomed across the sky like a meteor onto the road. The sound of him kicking the ball pierced through the air and reverberated through the entire football field. Instinctively, he let out a terrified gasp and bolted onto the road at the speed of light without thinking twice. Little did he know that his day was about to take a terrifying turn.

Out of the blue, John noticed a russet red Mercedes zooming towards him like predator after prey. Colours drained from John's face, turning it stark white with fear. John froze to the spot like an Ancient Greek statue. He shut his eyes tight as he braced for the worst. SCREECH! The car braked just a hair's breadth away from him. He opened his eyes in slow-motion, his eyes fixated on the road, which bore the tire marks from the Mercedes, a reminder of what just happened. A pungent odour of smoke wafted into the air. "Am I dead?" He whimpered like a helpless lamb. The next moment, the angry driver bolted out of the Mercedes like an enraged bull. "Have you lost your mind?" the infuriated driver pursed his lips as he gave John a tongue-lashing. Realising his mistake, John sighed and a bitter sense of defeat lingered above his tongue.

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Our story is about John, a short boy, was playing phone games as he crossed the pedestrian path and was not paying attention to the traffic. Just then, a gigantic truck was dashing towards John. He was unwary of the vehicle and the truck was about to crash into him when a lady noticed the poor boy and screamed at the truck driver to hit the breaks. The truck swerved left and right...

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Kayley, Nah Jing Xuan, Andrea, Ashton, Olivia The sheepy group baa

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Team members: Mykaela, Yi Ting, Hayley Winata, Blake, Jia Kai, Declan

Picture chosen: Pedestrian crossing

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Team members: Hannah, Katelyn, Chujin

Picture chosen: A pedestrian crossing

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An old man is crossing the road and a car comes speeding towards him. A young man saw this and dashed onto the crossing and pulled the old man aside.

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"Screech!" an orange supercar turned around a corner. It headed straight for an old man who was crossing the road. The old man was frail and needed a walking stick to walk. His back was hunched and he had almost no hair. When the old man saw the car speeding towards him, he stood there in shock. Beads of sweat trickled down the old man's forehead. After he recovered from shock, he began moving slowly towards the other end of the road. The car was approaching quickly. A young man saw this and dashed onto the crossing and pulled the old man to the side. The car sped past them and the foul scent of petrol stank the air.

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John had a whale of a time kicking the ball near the roadside with his best friend, Tom. "Whoosh!" The ball soared over their heads and rolled down the hill. "I got it!" John exclaimed. Tom cried," No! It is rolling to the road. It is too dangerous! Wait..." However, before Tom could finish his sentence, John was already chasing after the ball. John could feel his sweat trickling down his forehead as he chased after the ball in pursuit. His fingers brushed against the rough texture of the ball ."Honk!" the shrill honk rang in his ears. The acid smell of the car engine burned in his nostrils. John looked up and to his horror, a scarlet red car came speeding towards him at a dangerously fast pace.

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Team members: Kaydren Cheah, Evan Tan, Tan Kai Jia, Hayley Hoon, Amber Chern

Picture chosen: A pedestrian crossing >:3

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Seeing the blood red truck inching closer towards him, John's heart pounded like a mad beast in a cage. As John heard a cacophony of screams and honks, he stood rooted to the ground, not knowing what to do next. Petrified, John could taste the saltiness of his own cold sweat. Time seemed to have slowed down around him as absurd thoughts filled his mind. Smells of petrol wafted into his nostrils.

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our story is about a boy getting chased by a dog and almost got hurt/injured.

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Our story is about a boy who was playing football and his ball rolled onto the road. He wanted to pick it up as it was signed by Messi. Suddenly, a truck turned out of the junction and zoomed towards the boy.

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Maybe you can try to make the paragraph longer and add more descriptive phrases.

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Our story is about a boy crossing the road and almost getting killed. (crisis :3)

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Team members: Koen, Sarah-Jane, Benjamin, Michael, Qi Zhen

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Team members: Koen, Sarah-Jane, Benjamin, Michael, Qi Zhen

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Picture chosen: Number 2, A pedestrian crossing

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Seriously? Just write a car

Yes, thank you. hmph

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David peered over his shoulders and saw a frightful sight. It was a fierce and big dog with sharp white teeth and a menacing face. Growling, it stared at David with its ruthless green eyes. That sight sent shivers down his spine and beads of perspiration formed on his forehead. "Woof, Woof!" it barked. Its face scrunched up in anger. David whipped his head around and ran as fast as he could. The dog relentlessly took off and chased after David. Anxiety overwhelmed him as he continued running. The smell of sweat lingered in the air as David was sweating profusely.

Panting, David turned to a corner but found that it was a dead end. The fierce mongrel came closer and closer to David, pulling the leash that its owner was holding. David's heart was palpitating frenziedly against his ribcage. Oh no, what should I do? David thought. The dog's threatening growl broke his train of thoughts. David closed his eyes, bracing himself for the worst, his life flashed before his eyes. Would the dog hurt David?

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The boy was late for football training. He saw that there was 5 minutes left until training started. "Should I sprint across the road? lf I do, I will be on time for football training but I will be putting my life on the line. If not, I will definitely be late for the training and my coach will give me a tongue-lashing."

The boy hastily made his choice.

He looked left and right and saw that there were no vehicles along the road, so he sprinted with all his might across the road. When he reached the middle of the road, out of a blue, a passenger bus charged towards him at the speed of sound. Colour drained from his terror-stricken face and his face turned as pale as a blank sheet of paper. His legs froze and he stood rooted to the ground. He could taste the perspiration lingering in his mouth.

"Aahh! Help!" The helpless boy screamed at the top of his lungs. John heard the boy scream for help and immediately knew what to do.

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We think that the dialogue of" NOOOOOO! Please stop!" is not very suitable and realistic. Thanks!:)

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It is not very realistic for a football to make the sound 'boom'

Thank YOU for da feedback! :3 Perhaps suggest what onomatopoeia we should use?

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Our story is about a boy disobeying the traffic rules, crossing the road when the 'red man' was up. A car was coming at him at the speed of light and when the boy saw, he froze in his tracks and stood rooted to the ground, not knowing what to do.

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Honestly, we think that dialogue is one better way we could express the boy's desperation in being saved.

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Good Job for the whole Group!!! :)

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This is from group 2. Keep up the good job!

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Thanks! :)

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Your paragraphs are very descriptive. Good job !

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Woof woof breaks the menacing effect and we do not think that dogs have green eyes. Also, what did the main character do to make the dog angry? Thanks!

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Thank you for your feedback, Group 3!

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Alyssa's dog has green eyes, but thanks for the comments👌

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We think you can add a bit more phrases and descriptive sentences to make your paragraph longer and exciting