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Our ideal home is basic and has a modern design.It has really little furniture because we spent all our money on the house but we are happy.It has eight rooms.Our home has light coloured s walls and somewhere they are covered with wood.Our furniture are is so simple and modern.When we choose furniture we thought it should makes us relaxed able.It has a big balcony and we have a lot of types of plants.It's almost outside the city but we have good neigbours.They are so friendly, helpful and understanding people.So Finally, it is enviromentally-friendly house.

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My ideal home is in the countryside. The home is very big and has a garden. The garden is almost like a park. There are almost 40 flowers in the garden and there are two dogs. The home has got 5 rooms. Home's furniture is quite modern and comfortable. It is extremely colourful such as grey, white.. It is almost impossible to get around without a car. My ideal neighbourhood is clean and very quiet. The neighbours are happy and hardworking. There are lots of trees around the my neighbourhood

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My ideal home is with a sea view.My house has two floors and a garden.I have two dogs in thresh garden.My house is so quiet.Decoration of my house is modern.Architecture of my house is attractive.My house is very clean.Location is very convenient.My house furniture is comfortable.My ideal neighbour is friendly and kind.I like to have a barbecue party with my neighbours.The trees keep the my house cool in summer.

Şafak Gülşen

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Our ideal home should be near the city centre but at the same time close to the nature. It has a green garden, a fireplace, four bedrooms and a big movie room. The kitchen wall is completely glass so we can watch outside every time we want while we eat something. Our home has modern furnitures and really beautiful paintings. It has a very big pool inside the garden. The garden is classic french style. It should be in a quite peaceful, green and clean environment. Our neighbors are friendly and helpful almost all the time. We like to live in there.

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ee My ideal home is modern and any without? furniture. fireplace room  and this room there is a modern oriental cornel.(In the room there is a fireplace and an oriental corner) This hours is a stone buildings.There is a large kitchen and it is made is of wood. This is a dublex and numbers of rooms there are 6+1 rooms .There is a sauna and a Turkish bath. There is a brown and big furniture. There is a barn and in this barn, there is a horse. There is a garden and assorted flowers. we In our ideal neighbourhood, there is a Pino Burgerhome and kebap house and there is are a assorted trees and flowers. There is are a wide roads. There are also cats.

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My ideal house has 3 rooms.It has a very big garden.It hasnt got lots of furniture, it is quite spacious.It has a modern design.It's in a peaceful neigbourhood.It is close to the subway.It is clean and safe.My neighbours are friendly,quiet,on their own.Sometimes we eat dinner together.Most of my neighnours are retired.They are extremely rich and they always look after for the stray animals.My neigbourhood has trees almost everywhere so it is environmentally friendly.It also has sea.
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Kadriye
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It's a detached house. It is far from city center. It has an  extremely big pool and it has housekeepers . It has two floors. It is very secure because I cooperate with a security company. My home is completely peaceful. My neighbours are very lively and very enjoyable but I didn’t meet all of them .My street is definitely so quiet. My garden is completely green and it has a lot of trees. My furniture is very modern because I spent a lot of money. My neighbours are very friendly. I meet once a week with some of them.

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My ideal home I have modern and very little furniture. The rooms in my house are quite big. I have five rooms in my house.My ideal neighbourhood is almost in the city centre.The streets around my house are extremely clean and modern. My neighbours are helpful and friendly. There are so many malls around my house.It has got a big green garden.There are a lot of trees in my garden.
Rohat,Damla,Beyza