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Area of Strength:
What is one aspect of your writing in this assignment (such as word choice; use and/or analysis of quotations; use of transitional phrases; organization etc.) that you are most proud of? What steps did you take to achieve this strength?

Area for Improvement:
What is one part of your writing that could be stronger, and what specific change would help improve it? Think about both Mrs. Mathews’ feedback and anything you have noticed yourself.

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Area of Strength:
What is one aspect of your writing in this assignment (such as word choice; use and/or analysis of quotations; use of transitional phrases; organization etc.) that you are most proud of? What steps did you take to achieve this strength?

I feel the most proud about finding metaphor such as

Area for Improvement:
What is one part of your writing that could be stronger, and what specific change would help improve it? Think about both Mrs. Mathews’ feedback and anything you have noticed yourself.

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Area of Strength:
What is one aspect of your writing in this assignment (such as word choice; use and/or analysis of quotations; use of transitional phrases; organization etc.) that you are most proud of? What steps did you take to achieve this strength?

One part of my writing in this assignment that I am most proud of is clarity. In this quote, I was able to clearly express what I really wanted to discuss by stating the metaphors that the author used.

Area for Improvement:
What is one part of your writing that could be stronger, and what specific change would help improve it? Think about both Mrs. Mathews’ feedback and anything you have noticed yourself.

One area in my writing that I think could be stronger is the way that I organize my writings.

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Area of Strength:
What is one aspect of your writing in this assignment (such as word choice; use and/or analysis of quotations; use of transitional phrases; organization etc.) that you are most proud of? What steps did you take to achieve this strength?

Area for Improvement:
What is one part of your writing that could be stronger, and what specific change would help improve it? Think about both Mrs. Mathews’ feedback and anything you have noticed yourself.

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Area of Strength:
What is one aspect of your writing in this assignment (such as word choice; use and/or analysis of quotations; use of transitional phrases; organization etc.) that you are most proud of? What steps did you take to achieve this strength?

I added mentions of quotes and stated the meanings and this was the main point of the paragraph.

Area for Improvement:
What is one part of your writing that could be stronger, and what specific change would help improve it? Think about both Mrs. Mathews’ feedback and anything you have noticed yourself.

My grammar in the paragraph was not the greatest so I should work on this in the future.

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Area of Strength:
What is one aspect of your writing in this assignment (such as word choice; use and/or analysis of quotations; use of transitional phrases; organization etc.) that you are most proud of? What steps did you take to achieve this strength?

Area for Improvement:
What is one part of your writing that could be stronger, and what specific change would help improve it? Think about both Mrs. Mathews’ feedback and anything you have noticed yourself.

# data[].attributes.body
Area of Strength:
What is one aspect of your writing in this assignment (such as word choice; use and/or analysis of quotations; use of transitional phrases; organization etc.) that you are most proud of? What steps did you take to achieve this strength?

I am proud of my vocabulary and descriptive language due to me reading books in English as well as setting my phone in English.

Area for Improvement:
What is one part of your writing that could be stronger, and what specific change would help improve it? Think about both Mrs. Mathews’ feedback and anything you have noticed yourself.

# data[].attributes.body
Area of Strength:
What is one aspect of your writing in this assignment (such as word choice; use and/or analysis of quotations; use of transitional phrases; organization etc.) that you are most proud of? What steps did you take to achieve this strength?

Area for Improvement:
What is one part of your writing that could be stronger, and what specific change would help improve it? Think about both Mrs. Mathews’ feedback and anything you have noticed yourself.

# data[].attributes.body
Area of Strength:
What is one aspect of your writing in this assignment (such as word choice; use and/or analysis of quotations; use of transitional phrases; organization etc.) that you are most proud of? What steps did you take to achieve this strength?

Area for Improvement:
What is one part of your writing that could be stronger, and what specific change would help improve it? Think about both Mrs. Mathews’ feedback and anything you have noticed yourself.