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Hi Gary,

What a wonderful conclusion of the unit for you. Your process and experimentation has been a delight to observe. You've demonstrated that you're capable of articulating as well as executing design concepts. It would be great now to create a print version of this Zine so you're able to tweak some of the finer considerations. Moving forward - try to be even more consistent with layout, type and hierarchy. You've clearly got incredible aptitude for editorial design. All the best!

Thanks,

Ravin

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Hi Renee,

The foldout book is a really lovely expression of your concept. It seems like you've really put some thought and effort into articulating your concept. I wonder - is there going to be a text element as well? Perhaps that has not been included in the documentation yet. Remember this is a Zine so we would need to see the interaction between type and image. Looking promising!

Thanks,

Raivn

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Jerry, Your visual summary effectively documents your journey across the unit. It's great to see you explore mixed media and storytelling approaches. Try to be more consistent with how you present information in an editorial setting. Your website has a much higher degree of control in this sense as compared to the VS. Overall - this has been a great series of projects for your and I look forward to seeing the Zine.

Thanks,

Ravin

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Hi Minnie,

Thank you so much for your submission. You have a strong concept that is throughly explored. The Zine successfully captures your design intentions. It's great to see you expand your thinking across your own experimentation as well as through relevant industry examples. Perhaps you can be a little more playful with the format and layout - of how the work is presented. This is one of the key aspects of Zine culture. Although I understand your approach as well - given your subject nature. Great work!

Ravin

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Lovely documentation pictures! Great to include in Visual Summary.

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Amazing work on the website Jerry! I had a few comments. I think it is wonderful as it is and I really like the additional section on Window Semiotics.

Just a couple comments:

Can we make it look more like a zine? Perhaps the arrangement of content can be more like a digital publication, rather than a website that displays information by scrolling down. Either that - or we can perhaps even consider the relationship between text and image. The powerful aspects of a zine are really that dialogue between text and image. So let's try and play with that a bit more.

In the section on Semiotics - it would be great if you could additionally use some of your own images.

Overall this is really great work. You are attempting to push the boundaries of the brief which is really great to see.

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The “Window of Vision” project explores the symbolic language of windows as portals between different dimensions of time and space. Through carefully crafted wooden window frames embedded with screens, this installation creates an intersection where past and present, interior and exterior, reality and imagination converge.

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Cindy, this is such a wonderfully thoughtful approach to your Output project. Fantastic!

It's so great to see you approach a challenging subject and express/communicate it through visual art, fashion and 3d design. You've demonstrated a high level of maturity here in your approach. Really well done!

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Really lovely project with incredible learning journey. I like your use of materials and the careful consideration of colour and structure. Visual Summary showcases your process well.

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Fantastic work Jerry! Visual Summary is clear and showcases your process. The connection with the street is well established. Moving forward, keep testing different approaches to 3d design and build on the skills you learned here.

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Very clear exploration. Visual summary shows your process and connection back to the street. Great to see you approach the outcome with mix media and try multiple iterations before settling on one.

R

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Hi Renee,

It's great to see your cover design. The exploration between type and image is really interesting but try to aim for a higher degree of legibility. It would be great if possible to also upload your mindmap so I can understand your topic a bit more and help you to articulate its essence in the cover.

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You've chosen an incredibly interesting topic with lots of social, cultural context. Maybe you could interview some people to find out more about these taboos - that could be a good way to start collecting information for this zine. I also really like your cover exploration. The abstract nature of it works well. It would be great to see you explore an iteration of it using type as well.

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Great starting point! Would be really nice to see some updates on the Output project

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This is such an interesting texture - Can you tell me more about the approach and what you're making?

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Good Starting points in terms of using material + Storytelling. Need to see more from you to understand the project further.

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Jerry, you're absolutely nailing these tests! So great to see. What comes next? Are you thinking of testing it at a different scale? Perhaps also adding some colour?

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Shadows can be such a lovely way to explore the output project. Would love to see more experiments from you. I think working with temple architecture is a great idea

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Great first iteration! How are you going to develop it further? Can you add colour? Does the structure and form need more refining? Lots to think about here!

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I like the idea of the sculpture - its beautiful, perhaps you just need to test it a bit further. Try to think about the internal structure more deeply! Keep going

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Interesting series of sketches. Would be great to see how you connect this to Project 1 and further develop it as an output.

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It's great to see you experiment and explore with different materials. The form and structure look good! Keep testing with the mannequin, it helps to see the output in context