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First thing you need to do is log in to your g.highlineschools.org account so that you can leave critique for your classmates and receive credit for this portion of the project!

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Give the Photographer Feedback on their Project!

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Give the Photographer Feedback on their Project!

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Try to give feedback that points out something they did well and something they could do differently to make their work stronger next time!

Use sentence stems like:
"I really like how you used..."
"Your images really make me feel..."
"I can easily see the story in your images because..."

and

"I wonder if..."
"What if you tried..."
"I think it would be stronger if you..."

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Leave Critique for at least 5 classmates!

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Leave Critique for at least 5 classmates!

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Every student should receive no less than 3 comments on their work from different students. Try to go to as many student's websites as possible and give feedback to everyone!

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I like that you changed your background for all your images, it shows the process from the streets to the ocean. You followed the rule of thirds and frozen motion very well.

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I like that you've changed your opinion on littering. I was the same way, almost thinking I was cool for littering, now whenever I see trash I just have to stop to pick it up.

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I like that you've changed your opinion on littering. I was the same way, almost thinking I was cool for littering, now whenever I see trash I just have to stop to pick it up.

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Your photos are really nice, that freeze motion really caught my eye.

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I like the phrase "There is No Planet B". It really opens people's eyes that we only have one home, and we should take care of it. You could make your images better by using different types of garbage.

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I like how you used the little figures and the idea of your photos

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I like how you used the little figures and the idea of your photos

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i really like the way your pictures are taken they look really good

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i really like the way your pictures are taken they look really good

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I like how you slowly progressed to worse and worse damage for the most part. More boarded up stores could have helped though.

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I really like the camera angle and technique you are using in your pictures to make the bottle stand out

I wonder if you could add like more plastic in the back ground to set a seen rather than just having one plastic bottle

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I really love how you used a very ongoing and important issue we have right now for your project. 

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I really love how you used a very ongoing and important issue we have right now for your project. 

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I really liked your photos they were clear and so is the message being sent through them

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I really liked your photos they were clear and so is the message being sent through them

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I like that your project instead of focusing on the negative of suicide only focused on the fact that their is help and that people can reach out.

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I like that the message is relatable. Not everyone has the time to attend classes due to responsibilities and other problems at home. You could improve your project by including your own images.

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I really like the lighting of your image because it really fits with the feeling your trying to make

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i really like how you showed your message and it was clear

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I love the lighting on your photos, it makes it more mysterious and goes really well with your topic

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I love the lighting on your photos, it makes it more mysterious and goes really well with your topic

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I like your series of images because  I can see the number of figurines dwindle then the last sad image comes up. The last image is very dramatic. The lighting was really good too..

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I really like how you used your time and effort to go out your way to travel around Seattle to find picture and places you could take picture of

I wonder if you could improve on by trying to make your own message or idea like a poster and place it somewhere and take a picture of that instead. So we get the idea that you are the one doing it.

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i like how you showed different kinds. the pictures looked good 

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i like how you showed different kinds. the pictures looked good 

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i liked how you used the pill and how it was clear in you paragraph

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I like how you got your message/idea across by your pictures. The pictures of them holding signs as to why they're wearing a mask is very important to show that they're taking things seriously. You could improve your project by having another picture of someone else holding a sign as to why they're wearing a mask.

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I really like your topic, it is very relatable

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I really like your topic, it is very relatable

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The lighting was really good I also liked how you showed the drugs slowly being "used" by showing the empty slots in the package

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I love the series. it reminds me of a stop motion or like those scenes in the movies where it just becomes less and less people.

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I really like the issue you chose because that's something going on right now.

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I really like the issue you chose because that's something going on right now.

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I like how over time the dog looks more sad but one thing with one of the photos is the person that is supposed to be abusing the dog is smiling and for me at least it just feel a bit off but what I would do is make them look more mad but other than that it looks good

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I like how you used a variety of lighting in your photos

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I like how you used a variety of lighting in your photos

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Your image was outstanding and how you used props and other people in your house to help you and how you were able to make your down calm all in the process

I wonder if you are able to show that your dog is hurt with the use of marker to show how badly the dog has been hurt

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The message really alerts people to the reality of dog abuse. It explains the struggles dogs face and the difficulties of adopting and taking care of one. You could make your images better by comparing a loved dog and an abused one.

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I like how you used a mask to show how our current pandemic has raised littering but I think to show how plastic is affecting our world you should have added some other trash overall I like your photos.

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i really liked how you went to places that had something to do in your mood board

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I like the variety in backgrounds that you chose

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I like the variety in backgrounds that you chose

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I like how you placed your photos on your website and how you used more than one person

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I like how you placed your photos on your website and how you used more than one person

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I really liked the experimental lighting in your picture and how the statement alerts and gives a better understanding 

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I really liked the experimental lighting in your picture and how the statement alerts and gives a better understanding 

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I like that you used a mask as your trash because you can literally find them everywhere on the ground

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I like that you used a mask as your trash because you can literally find them everywhere on the ground

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Your image looks really nice and mostly important how you are reminding people that they need to wear mask to keep other people safe

I wonder if you could take different type of picture of different masks maybe angle

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The first are great frozen motion images and I like how you made the background blurry in the last image. I like that you changed your background, it shows that littering is everywhere.

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i really like the lighting you used in you pictures it really creates a mood

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i really like the lighting you used in you pictures it really creates a mood

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I really liked the message in the being sent on your pictures and how well you were able to capture those emotions

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I really liked the message in the being sent on your pictures and how well you were able to capture those emotions

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i really love the last one it really surprise me how you did it

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I love how you can definitely see how the mood board inspired your pictures and how you utilized those images to create your own version. The lighting in each picture is great and having a dark background creates a serious tone about idea. I think some images could be a little clearer, like the bottles of pills.

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I really liked how you showed everyone leaving as the user got worse and worse also how you slowly burnt his face that was really unique and showed drugs ruining his life physically.

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I like how each photo has an explanation, it really helps the viewer

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I like how each photo has an explanation, it really helps the viewer

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I think that using the mask as trash is a great idea because you can find those everywhere now

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I think that using the mask as trash is a great idea because you can find those everywhere now

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Really nothing bad to say it all looks good and it was a good idea to use the mask to show your theme more

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I really like how used your stuffed animals like people, i especially like the photo where they are getting cyber bullied

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I really like how used your stuffed animals like people, i especially like the photo where they are getting cyber bullied

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I really appreciate what you're supporting.

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I also like how you explained each photo

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I also like how you explained each photo

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i like the topic you choose and your artist statement is good

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i like the topic you choose and your artist statement is good

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Yours is so creative i really like it. I love how you are teaching something that is very important!

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Yours is so creative i really like it. I love how you are teaching something that is very important!

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i can really relate to your topic

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The message is inspiring. Treat others how you want to be treated. To improve your project, you could include images with real people to convey emotion.

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I like how you give instruction on how to wear, how to not wear, and how to dispose of the masks. Your message is very clear and helpful.

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Your image looks very professional and really well made it shows that you put time and effort into your picture for it to be the way you want

I think your image would be stronger if you could show like the actual work of the construction like the motion

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i like how you made your pictures into like posters that have good information on them

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i like how you made your pictures into like posters that have good information on them

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I like your photos and the plot of your project

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I like your photos and the plot of your project

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I really liked how you were able to tell a story through these stories and figures

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I only wish I could see the photos you were planning to capture as well. The images you used for inspiration were really interesting!

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i loved the lighting and the black and white you used for your images it really sets a mood.

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it really touched me i really like it
and its true many people dont talk about it pero im glad someone did

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I really like your mood board and your artist statement!!

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I really like how you put the suicide hotline number in all the photos and I like how you used someone young in your photos because to me that show that even really young people can be suicidal

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I love how clear your pictures were, you were able to capture a very clear freeze motion picture and all of them have great lighting. You were also able to get your idea across and showed how your pictures related to your artist statement. I think if you used more props to show off that plastic is polluting the world, it would be great.

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I really liked your topic and how it is up yo date and actually involving what is going on in the world right now

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you really hit close to home.

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I like how each picture has an explanation. All your images are strong and well captured.

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i like how you showed the liter in many different areas

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i like how you showed the liter in many different areas

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The message is very informative. I never knew you had to snap the strings off when throwing away the mask. You could improve your project by including info on what to do if you have breathing difficulties.

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your website is put together really nicely and your photos look so good 

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your website is put together really nicely and your photos look so good 

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I really like how you were able to get your idea across through your artist statement and how your images related to your idea as well. You had great lighting as well. I do think you could get some more clearer pictures with better focus though.

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thank you for speaking up about this topic because id rather get a phone call from my friend saying they need help rather than hearing that they're gone.

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Like how in most of your images it has a nice view but then pollution takes over it

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i like how you used props like the paper 

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i like how you used props like the paper 

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i really like how you are showing the wrong and right way to wear masks 

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i really like how you are showing the wrong and right way to wear masks 

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I really like how you showed off how important it is to treat dogs with love and care instead of hurting them. Your pictures really represented that message and I think the lighting in each image was great as well. I do think you could improve on the 2nd picture, I felt a little off when I saw the person smiling, I think if they had a more serious expression, it'd feel a bit more realistic.

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your mood board is really good it really shows the type of pictures you want to take

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your mood board is really good it really shows the type of pictures you want to take

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I like your message of reaching out. and getting help. The mood board really shows your inspiration.

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i liked how you showed multiple types of liter and used multiple locations 

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i liked how you showed multiple types of liter and used multiple locations 

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I love the image where your mom is smiling cause she cant take it seriously. I like the different moods in the photos.

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If I just looked at the image I would not tell what it’s about but when I read the descriptions of the photos I would say it looks good

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i like that we chose similar topics, because it's almost like your page is one half and my page is the other half.

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this is exactly why i added my section about disposing of masks

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this is exactly why i added my section about disposing of masks

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wow i cant stop looking at your images. i know what its like to have a dad in construction im glad you spoke up about a topic that really meant a lot to you and sharing personal things with our class.

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wow i cant stop looking at your images. i know what its like to have a dad in construction im glad you spoke up about a topic that really meant a lot to you and sharing personal things with our class.

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i like the props and images it kinda feels like a short film or an ad about bullying but in photo form.

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i like the props and images it kinda feels like a short film or an ad about bullying but in photo form.

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its a really important topic since were all living through social media and internet now.

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I like how you used masks because it's everywhere now. I think you could've added more props since your topic isn't just masks. Overall, your message is very strong and can be understood well.

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I like how how there is a nice background but you still clearly see the point of the photo and the concept doesn't get lost. The image gets straight to the point nut has an interesting background.

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I really like how to made three separate photos to tell a story and the way you damaged the toys and added the lighter and knife in the background. Just those aspects make a subtle impact to the viewer.

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For your second image I like how the bottle is sort of camouflaged within the leaves, and you almost don't see it. It represents well the idea that it can be very easy to overlook the litter and garbage in our world. I also like in your fourth photo how you have the bottle almost centered, but you included a great expanse of the ocean, the water and the sky and the land in the distance. It shows how one single piece of garbage may not seem important, but it can affect so much. Well done.

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For your second image I like how the bottle is sort of camouflaged within the leaves, and you almost don't see it. It represents well the idea that it can be very easy to overlook the litter and garbage in our world. I also like in your fourth photo how you have the bottle almost centered, but you included a great expanse of the ocean, the water and the sky and the land in the distance. It shows how one single piece of garbage may not seem important, but it can affect so much. Well done.

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I like how the multiple images tell a story and we understand the concept very clearly, and it is a playful way of telling a difficult topic.

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I like how you used this project to bring light and awareness to an important topic, and that all the pictures were impactful and explained the topic well.

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The lighting really fits the topic you are trying to explain through the images and it really sets a clear tone for it. I also like the effect of the black and white background gives it a serious tone to an important topic.

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I like how you picked a topic about things that are very relatable. A few months ago we were all doing remote learning and some people around the world are still going through that.

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I like how you picked a very important topic that affects many families around the world. I like how you made the pictures like a poster putting the phone number as well if they do need help, its very impactful.

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I like how the difference in lighting showed different moods of the dog.

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I like how you chose a topic of current importance. It's very important as not everyone sees the point of wearing masks.

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I like the usage of the sunlight, creating a lot of contrast in the photo. I also really like the use of the "Rule of Thirds" in a few of your photos. They were really well executed for being in a online learning system.