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remove puget sound and end with marine environment

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What about northern Puget Sound and the Strait?

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Using the term “volunteer” Organization does also resonate well with people.

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This statement is something many of us have been wanting for some time .. short, consistent, can remember, and gets the essence across .. appreciate the efforts of all to get it right. I support not using Puget Sound .. maybe salish sea ..

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With my students, I've found that the shorter and easier the message, the more it sticks.  Starting with an elementary elevator message can be built upon with any follow up questions.

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First and foremost this is for commission and mrc members to better understand us and so it should conyain what we need to know.  As am MRC member I am working for the Northwest Straits area of the Salish Sea, and not all of Puget Sound

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I think we should use the term that most of the public is familiar with, which think is Puget sound.  Changing to Salish sea would be like changing from global warming to climate change.  Public didn't follow very well.

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Easiest to remember, rolls of the tongue

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Easiest to remember, rolls of the tongue

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Elevator pitch has to be easy for everyone to remember!

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It's succinct, and probably appeals to the widest audience.

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We have support for this with some wording changes.

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We have support for this with some wording changes.

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Collaborative doesn't quite make sense in this context.  

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Collaborative doesn't quite make sense in this context.  

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This communications plan should be upbeat and refreshing

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This communications plan should be upbeat and refreshing

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There's a lot of difficult stuff going on now, we want NWSI to be positive and upbeat in all of our comms.

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I like this one best - seems to be best fit

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Vision = idea. But we've taken the idea and done something about it! That's really important. Vision makes it seem like it's still an idea with no action or results.

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Collaborative is technically an adjective not a noun..although it is commonly miss-used this way

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Collaborative is technically an adjective not a noun..although it is commonly miss-used this way

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"The NW Straits region of the Salish Sea," or something similar, might be more applicable

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I think collaborative represents what we do and are.

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change the order to "NWSI is a community-led alliance collaborating to protect...."

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What about...NWSI is a community-led alliance collaborating to protect and restore the marine environment of Puget Sound.

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What about...NWSI is a community-led alliance collaborating to protect and restore the marine environment of Puget Sound.

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sounds most like what we are  -
positive, action oriented

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Doesn't reflect what I think the MRCs represent.

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vision does not seem to capture the rich history and work of the group. It sounds like an early stage idea

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organization is not exciting - too stuffy

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It is more than one organization

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Organization makes it sound like a single entity, and does not capture the many groups working together.

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I would take "working" out of this one