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I learnt that a plot is the MOST essential thing in a good story. without a good plot, it is hard for the reader to understand the story and often leaves them in bewilderment. A plot also acts like a skeleton of the story and makes it easier for the writer themselves to weave the story around their plot.

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I learned that we have to make our freytag's pyramid obvious in our essay.

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1. I have learnt to not only correct mistakes in grammar but also add in imagery, a theme and other elements that can make an essay better.

2. Are there strict rules on what we can and cannot change in a story or essay?

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I learnt that grammar and vocabulary is very important in the English language.

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I have learnt that there are many crucial parts of a story that make it a good story. Eg. Plot diagram and imagery

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1)I have learnt that we need to take note of grammatical errors as it will cause an essay to  be inlogical.
My question:
Why do people make errors in writing and why do they not realise their mistake?

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1) I have learnt that using descriptive words help a story come alive.
2) Also, I have learnt that planning is very important as planning could have helped the story have a better plot.

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1)I learnt how keeping to the topic is very important as if you go off topic, it will result in a big loss of marks.
2) I learnt that the usage of images can make a story much more captivating and spices it up.

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1. I learnt that a good essay is not just a story that is grammatically correct. It is also about having the elements of narrative writing. (Plot, Character, Conflict, Theme, Setting)
2. What else makes a story good?

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I have learnt that

1) The story must be smooth and the language used must not be slang etc.
2) I have to be more careful when writing as many mistakes and errors can be made

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I learnt that marking is not just about checking for grammatical error. It is also about checking for its context and whether it is logical or not. I also learnt that we have to be very good in vocabulary to be able to impress the marker and thus the mark of the essay would be higher. I also need to plan first before writing the essay out. This would be able to make the essay logical and organised.

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1) Make sure the story is smooth to read.
2)No slang language
3)Proper usage of Grammar and Vocabulary
4) Make sure there is a plot diagram/ Freytag's pyramid for the story and not without any missing area(s), e.g conflict, etc

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I learnt that:
1) we must ensure that the story has a theme and had gone through planning.

2) we have to keep the story on topic and not to stray off from the Freytag's Pyramid.

3) Stories need imagery and descriptive language to be good.

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I have learnt that many mistakes can be found in the essays that we write if we do not edit them.
1) I also learnt that without PACC, imagery and plot a story will not be a good one no matter how grammatically correct it is.

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I learnt as great the grammar is in and essay, what makes the story interesting is the content.

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!. We need to ensure that we convey the theme properly so that the readers will be able to understand.
2. We need to use appropriate words that would show good use of vocabulary.

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I learnt that if lots of elements of an essay is good, but there are still some areas which aren't, that does not make the essay good.

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1. I learn that the the most important thing in a story is the theme and that without following the theme the story would not be how it supposed to be and would be a very bad story as it is off topic.
2. I learn that we need to watch out the theme instead of spending to much on checking the grammar and vocab.
3. I learn that the freytag's pyramid helps us to plan our story properly.

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I learnt that when we are writing an essay, we must be careful of mistakes like punctuation and grammar.

Why do people make very careless mistakes? I sit because that they did not check their work?

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I have learnt that when writing an essay, we should look from a marker's perspective and know what he/she expects in our writing. It is also important to plan (Freytag's pyramid) before writing our story or else our story will go haywire.

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I learnt that we need to include theme, conflict, characters, setting and plot to have a good essay and almost must be careful for punctuation, grammar and spelling.

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1) I learnt that one can make mistakes in grammar, plot and planning of writing.
2) I learnt that word imagery and good planning is necessary for a great story.

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1. Besides looking at the grammar errors, we should look at the content and how we should improve on the content like by using imagery
2. Both the content and the language used in an essay are equally important.
3. Dialogues should be used appropriately.
4. We should make our plot obvious in the essay by using the plot diagram.

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1. check sentence structure
2. think about whether the scenario is logical
4. make every action clear

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1. I have learnt that we need to care about the plot and message being conveyed such as PACC
2. I also learnt about the use of imagery and how it enhances the story to be way nicer than as compared to before
3. I also learnt that grammar is important but content is more important then compared to grammar
4. I learnt that dialogues should be added and more expression of feelings from the writer's perspective.
5. Theme is very important and it plays a special role in the story.