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Name = Chintia Novianti

Class = IG19c

Theme : The function of rice-cooker help some people.

It’s difficult to make a rice for old people, there isn’t a technology machine like now. For this era, technology is needed people. Especially rice cooker for a new technology that helps to people a lot. This is the profitable rice cooker:

Using electricity to cook rice is easier for

now era, because of sophisticated technology. Especially make people use an electricity for faster objects. Rice is a daily need for Indonesian people, that’s way electricity for cooking a rise is very profitable and it enables people to save time for some people who are busy and don’t want to be complicated. That we know, old people need time to make rice, and there are 3 steps to cooked rice. The first step is wait for rice to bloom or until the water is reduced. And then, cooking with wood, and the last step is keep the rice still in stirred.

However, rice-cooker is not only for cooking rice but also for cooking cake. Cake is a dessert that everyone likes. Technology make “double in one system” for some objects like rice-cooker. And you don’t need to buy an oven for making a cake. Why it is a good deal of help because it is make everyone who doesn’t have more money is happy.

Make a cake need one separate item. Example: for ricing you need rice-cooker and for made a cake, people need oven.

For me, it’s makes everyone helped and this technology helps to cook a cake, and also cooks rice with one tool. That’s way it can be thrifty.

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for example, you wrote "using electricity to cook rice is easier world era for sophisticated technology" what does it mean? Coba kamu cek slang

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okay. Your essay is fine. The structure of all the paragraphs is good. I can understand it in general. However, there are a lot of grammatical mistakes that I cannot point out one by one. Try grammarly.com.

# data[].attributes.body
Name = Chintia Novianti

Class = IG19c

Theme : the function of rice-cooker help some people

it’s difficult to make a rice for old people, there isn’t a technology machine like now. for this era, technology is needed people. especially rice cooker for a new technology that help people a lot. this is the profitable of rice cooker:

using electricity to cook rice is easier

world era for sophisticated technology. especially make people use a electricity for faster objects. rice is a daily need for Indonesian people, that’s way electricity for cooking rise is very profitable and it enable people to saving time for some people who are busy and don’t want to be complicated. that we know, old people need time to make rice, and there are 3 step to cooked rice. first step is wait for rice to bloom or until the water is reduced. and than, cooking with wood, and the last step is keep the rice still in stirred.

However, rice-cooker is not only for cooking rice but also for cooking cake. cake is a dessert that everyone likes. technology make “double in one system” for some objects like rice-cooker. and you don’t need to buy oven for making a cake. why it is many help, because it is make everyone who doesn’t have more money is happy.

make a cake need one separate item. example: for rice you need rice-cooker and for made a cake, people need oven.

for me, it’s makes everyone helped and this technology helps cook a cake, and also cooks rice with one tool. that’s way it can be thrifty.

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where is your essay? I am no longer asking for a brainstorming

# data[].attributes.body
Name = Chintia Novianti

Class = IG19c

Theme : the function of rice-cooker help some people

it’s difficult to make a rice for old people, there isn’t a technology machine like now. for this era, technology is needed people. especially rice cooker for a new technology that help people a lot. and it is enable

1. using electricity to cook rice is easier

world era for sophisticated technology. especially make people use a electricity for faster objects. rice is a daily need for Indonesian people, that’s way electricity for cooking rise is very profitable and it enable people to:

- saving time for some people who are busy and don’t want to be complicated

Compare to the past:

- old people need time to make rice, and there are 3 step to cooked rice. first step is wait for rice to bloom or until the water is reduced. and than, cooking with wood, and the last step is keep the rice still in stirred.

2. rice-cooker for making a cake

cake is a dessert that everyone likes. technology make “double in one system” for some objects like rice-cooker. and you don’t need to buy oven for making a cake. why it is many help :

- it is make everyone who doesn’t have more money is happy.

compare to the past:

- make a cake need one separate item. example: for rice you need rice-cooker and for made a cake, people need oven.

for me, it’s makes everyone helped and this technology helps cook a cake, and also cooks rice with one tool. that’s way it can be thrifty.